This is my first story so be kind guys!! i need some conctructive critisisms and a proof reader if possible!
Amber shivered as she poured a little of the red liquid, into the six plastic bottles of water. She solemnly asked the others to think about it. Would they commit suicide or kill?
All five of them answered unanimously. They were all going to drink the water. The sun was rising, the red and pink hues painted the sky in dazzling colours. On the count of three they would drink it. One… two…three. The liquid passed through her lips and she fell to the floor and passed out. She awoke with a start. The poison didn't work on her. Her friends were dead. There was only one thing left.
She picked up the cold, metallic gun. It felt heavy in her hands. She lifted it, and placed it to the left temple. She cocked the gun… and pulled the trigger. Her death was just another one for the books, written in the programs reports. Another meaningless death. Another life wasted.
Tokyo, a studio in the entertainment district
'Well guys, there you have it! Another one out. Only fifteen more to go! That's it for today's highlights edition of 'The program', so be sure to tune in tomorrow, only on the official 'program channel'!'