Well hello to you all, this is my first story on FanFiction. I used to write it on Quizilla, but I found that I liked FanFiction better. So, if you can, please review my story. Tell me what you think about it, if you liked it or hated it, it's all good. :D

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Name - Hotaru Tsubasa

Birthday - June 22

Age- 16 at the beginning - 22 Byakuya is gonna be 24

Looks - You're shinigami outfit is the typical black and white. You have white ribbons tied in your hair. The only different thing about your outfit is that the inner top is black and the outer top is white. You have black pants with a big black bow tied in the front. You have long white hair and amber eyes. You are about the size of Rukia.

Zanpakuto- It has a black sheath with a black ribbon tied to the hilt. The hilt is a mixture of black and white. The hilt guard is in the shape of a square and it has little crescent moon designs in it. The blade is a solid white color. Your zanpakuto's name is Kaida Little Dragon and it is released with Hakuchuumu Kibou no Saku Oka Kara Daydream From The Blooming Hills Of Hope. You'll see what powers it has later.

Rank - You'll see

Family - Brother: Kai Tsubasa, he is 5 at the beginning and 11 later on. He is the twin brother of Yuri. His hair is spiky and gray in the front, and flat and raven colored in the back. He usually wears a red sweater, black pants, with black tennis shoes. He has piercing red eyes. He is a very smart boy when he wants to be -- He is cocky and annoying most of the time. He won't stand down unless it is someone he knows is much stronger i.e. captains, lieutenants and you.

Sister:Yuri Tsubasa, 5 at the beginning and 11 later on. She is the twin sister of Riku. She has sapphire eyes, raven-colored hair that's short in the front and long in the back. She usually wears a dark blue Chinese shirt with silver lining, simple black pants and blue, white and black Chinese shoes. She acts just like Hinata from Naruto does, all shy and stuff.

Past- Your parents were rulers of a country, so that made you and your siblings prince and princesses. When you were young, you had only two friends. Their names were Mayu and Ren. You guys all grew up together. One day, when you were about 13, you were walking around the forest near your home when you overheard some people talking. Wondering who it was, you walked over and hid behind some bushes. 'I feel bad about listening to their conversation, but I really wonder who it is.'After making sure that you wouldn't be seen, you pushed some parts of the bush away to show Mayu and Ren. Both of them had serious looks on their faces.

"God, I'm tired of pretending to be her friend!" you heard Mayu telling Ren. "I know what you mean, she's so needy. But we just have to stick to it until master says so." Ren replied back. 'I wonder who they're talking about.' you started to think of who it could be. "Hah, master is so smart to be able to think up this plan. First we befriend her and gain her trust, then we kill her and her whole family and become the new rulers of this land." Mayu started howling with laughter after she said that. 'They're talking about me?!'you finally realized. "Well, we better get back to her needy-ness before she comes looking for us herself. We don't want her finding anything out." replied Ren.

As they both got up and left, you slumped to the ground and started crying. The two people that you had trusted with your life had never really liked you and they were planning on killing you. You ran as fast as you could to your home and told your parents everything that you over heard the two saying. "Are you sure that's what you heard dear?" asked your father. "Yeah papa, that's exactly what I heard them saying."Ten minutes later, two guards came in holding onto Ren and Mayu. "WHAT'S GOING ON? LET GO OF US NOW!" they both screamed. The two guards kicked out their legs so they were kneeling before you and your parents. Finally falling silent, the two looked up and you and realized by the look on your face that you found out about their little secret. "Throw them in the dungeon." your father told the guards. A look of pure terror made its way onto Ren and Mayu's faces. Mayu started to cry while Ren continued to glare at you. "We'll get our revenge, just you wait!" Ren yelled the whole time the guards were dragging you away. Since then, you haven't trust anybody the same way as you used to trust Ren and Mayu.

From that moment on, you took lessons from a swordsman, an archer and a whole variety of people so you would be able to defend yourself. You became quicker, stronger and stealthier. On the eve of your sixteenth birthday, after coming home from a rigorous day of training, you saw that your home was way too quiet. Slowly making your way over to the throne room, you made sure that you had your weapons out in case you needed them. You slunk your way into the room, keeping to the shadows. Finally making it to the thrones, you look down to see the bloody mangled corpses of your parents. 'NO! How did this happen? Where were the guards? Oh no, Kai and Yuri are in trouble!' Wiping away your tears, you rush over to Kai and Yuri's room.

Rushing there, you find two figures standing over the dying Kai and Yuri. You noticed that Kai used his own body to protect Yuri. Suddenly, one of the figures pulls out a sickle and aims it at Kai's neck. Thinking fast, you toss a kunai where the shorter figures heart should be. Gasphing for air and collapsing, the figure dies slowly. You also blocked the figures sickle with your katana. Swinging your katana, you are able to move the figure away from your siblings. When the figure fell back, his face fell into the moonlight from the window. You gasp in shock at who it is. 'Ren?! How did they escape from the dungeon?! If that one is Ren, then the one I killed must be Mayu.'

Ren slowly stands up and starts charging you. Continuing to dodge his blows, you wait for the perfect moment to make your kill. Noticing that his left side is unguarded when he attacks, you strike his heart with your katana. "You bitch! You ruined everything. " Ren says before he dies. Running over to your siblings, you check to Kai's wounds. You notice that they're deep and that he is loosing a lot of blood. "Come on Kai, you can pull through this. I know you're tough, you can handle this." you say while slowly letting your tears fall on his face.

So, what do you think about it so far? I'll end it here because I'm tired. But I am definitely going to continue this story. If you liked it, please review and tell your friends to read it and review it too. The next part will come out soon! :D