A/N:
Hey all
Cork here! I'm bringing you a comedy, or what I feel is one. I've
read just SO many fics for twilight, no I'm not joking here. There
were some good ones and so many I would say are cookie-cutter awful!
So I'll bring you through the steps I think are used to achieve
such fics creation. So, here you go!
TODAYS EPISODE: THE
TEN STEP GUIDE TO THE SELF INSERT/MARY-SUE FIC!
If you don't
know what a Mary-sue is (For if everyone did I speculate there would
be far less of them) here's a definition brought to you by urban
dictionary!
An original character (fem.)
in fanfic or an original story, usually on the internet, who is far
superior to all other characters. She is typically beautiful,
intelligent, kind, and in all other ways "perfect". She
usually serves as an important part in a pivotal plot element (ie: a
prophecy) and becomes romantically involved with the author's
favourite character in the story. The internet fiction world runs
rampant with these characters.
(Note:
Gary-stus are the male version if you would like to make a male
character this is perfectly acceptable!)
So now on with your guide to the 'perfect' OC fic!
STEP ONE:
Create
your character!
They should be everything you wish you were
and/or your idea of the perfect person. (i.e.: A total rebel, a super
smart hottie, the prettiest girl in town.)
The name you chose
may be: similar to your name, the name you wish your parents gave you
or something Japanese when they have no Japanese heritage.
Sprinkle
in a tragic past (i.e.: abusive parents, dead parents, dead and
abusive parents, dead/abusive anyone or the unhappy person when they
have no real problems!) or the happiest past in the world (your
choice!) and watch them 'grow'
STEP TWO:
Choose
their love interest!
Why not take the main character? Or one of
the characters who ARE taken? I mean it's your fic you can do what
you want to! Edward/Carlisle/Jacob/Emmet/Jasper better off without
their respective partner anyways!
STEP
THREE:
Spelling, let's be real here. You either bag it
altogether and spel lyke this 4 ur ntyur fic (translation for those
of us who don't know what that says: spell like this for your
entire fic) or use English with minor spelling and grammar errors
(though I must forgive the grammar errors as I do have horrid grammar
myself!) Choose wisely as this can make or break your fic!
STEP FOUR:
Ok
if they have a love interest they have to go. NOW! Make them get
killed or something. (We all know Edward should have killed Bella at
the end of twilight but since he's a Meyerpire that won't
happen.)
STEP FIVE:
Have
for some unexplainable reason them be forced to work with or be near
the character you have chosen for their love interest for extended
periods of time. This will give them a friendship or rivalry if they
don't already have one. Let this pan out over a chapter or two to
get a simple point across. (For the more 'misunderstood'
characters a rivalry or friendship comes across fine but for the
more' bubble-gum-pop sun-always-shines-for-me characters you may
want to make it a friendship to avoid character depth!)
STEP SIX: (Note
this is only for the 'misunderstood'
Now is the time for
making the relationship develop into something 'more' by
instilling their trust into the love interest about their life.
(Although the tragic past may be explained more towards the end of
the chapter to create a cliff hanger.)
STEP SEVEN:
Oh
young love… it's time to have your first romantic contact with
the love interest. You must use the word orbs to describe eyes at
least three times before the end of one paragraph; I have seen it
enough times to know that it has become mandatory when talking about
a Meyerpire's eyes. Really any little tap or conversation where
they connect on a level beyond normal human contact will suffice.
STEP EIGHT:
Well
you've almost made it! Congrats! Well don't party just yet!
You've got to go through a montage or an incredibly long bout of
chapters where at the end the Volturi(Only applicable if your
character is with a meyerpire) comes and steals away or threatens
your character. But don't worry the love interest will be able to
save them just in time for them to have another or first traumatic
experience of their life!
STEP NINE:
Now,
last but not least. Turn them into a vampire or a werewolf (if not
already) or something that makes them become fully apart of the group
that the love interest lives with and considers family. Although this
may seem simple you may want to make a huge ordeal out of it. After
that's what Meyer did and she had her series turn out…. Okay….
Kind of.
STEP TEN:
Congrats you did it. You've made it all the way to your final
chapters. So what endings do you go with? In my opinion you have
three choices.
Go down the Breaking Dawn and get your character impregnated (although this seems impossible to me if none of the bodily fluids lasted according to Meyer but that's a WHOLE other conversation) have that 'epic battle' and make Jacob a pedophile. This only works if you have a Meyerpire character
Make the character get a happily ever after and leave it at that.
Do either of the above and make a sequel. I don't recommend this.
A/N I hope you've enjoyed our exploration to the world of self-inserts. While I do enjoy reading these for a good laugh I would never write one myself and put it on the internet. That's just me. If you love writing these keep it up but try to improve. Remember; if you wanna do it DO IT WELL!
P.S There will be more on the way. Next time we'll be chatting about AU fics!
