Summary: Bella lives with her mom and has been going out with the same guy for all of high school. What happens when her life takes a turn for the worst and she can longer stand her small town or her boyfriend. A move in with Charlie and his new family and neighbors provoke a love hate relationship in paradise. PLEASE READ. Edward: a bit OCC, player, dominant, jealous, sexy as HELL.... All rolled into my story!
Okay, so this is my 'first' fanfic [let's just not count my real first because I had no idea what I was doing, and no real plot in mind, and I got hardly any reviews or PMs so I had little encouragement or reason to keep going, but thank you to all of you who DID review, PM, or add as a fav or alert!] Let's hope my 'first' time is better than my first time.
Anyways I know most of you who read my first one were mad about me NEVER updating but I swear I will update this one! I already have the first 4 chapters complete... You just have to do one little thing for me... Meet my "chapterly" quota hahaha, each chapter I'll post a number of reviews I want to be at before I update again :) [PMs count] and I'll try to respond to every review, and PM. I'm ALL for constructive criticism;)! PLEASE I BEG OF YOU REVIEW!
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And without further ado I give you chapter uno of my 'first' ever fanfic!
Chapter 1:
Hey, can you come over? I have a surprise for you.
-James
Umm... Hehe I could sneak out?!
-Bells
Best idea you've had all night sweetie;]
-James
On my way!
-Bells
Bella sighed as she sat down her phone; she had no reason to bring it with her. She took a moment to stare at the last text from her long time boyfriend James-'a surprise'-finally!
She was a tornado as she tore through her room, finding the hottest outfit she could create out of her drabby wardrobe as quickly as humanly possible, almost INhumanly. She finally settled on a simple deep red low cut shirt (that she would never have dreamt of wearing without an undershirt before this night), tight black skinny jeans (that she hadn't even tried to fit into since freshmen year, two years ago), and dark tan fry boots that Renée had bought her years ago and she had yet to wear.
She shook her hair out of the loose bun she had made of her loose curls for the night. She knew James loved her hair like this, and it was simple and easy to do, leaving very little for Bella to screw up. She then took the slowest steps she'd stepped since getting out of bed...towards the rarely used....sparsely occupied.... makeup drawer in her bathroom.
God, what am I doing? I don't know how to do this! ...what even is this?
She finally shut the offensive drawer after applying some simple clear gloss, a little blush, and very very carefully, some mascara, without, surprisingly, ruining everything and having to completely start over.
Just remember the goal!
She planned to simply glance in the mirror before she snuck out the window. But upon seeing her reflection she froze.
Gulp. God this is worse than I thought!
One could see her black lace bra peeking out of her shirt, drawing even more attention to her cleavage. If she even bent down the slightest bit one could see the black lace matching thong leaving a trail down to her ass. The red shirt was so tight that she could see her subtly defined stomach muscles.
Still, she found comfort in her face; it wasn't much different from how she always went to school. Her features just seemed to 'pop' a bit more. And her hair added some softness to the dramatic look.
She stood frozen for an immeasurable amount before she squeezed her eyes shut and escaped her reflection by fleeing out the window and into her back yard.
He'll never give me what I want without me looking like this! Remember your goal Bella!
She ran through her yard and clumsily hopped over her back fence into the alley behind her house, thankful she had not worn heels. Though after a few minutes of walking down the chilly street she did begin to wish she had thought to bring a jacket. And when a few figures lurking in the shadows began to come into view she thought of a whole new reason for the missing jacket, coverage.
She folded her arms across her chest to try to maintain some sense of dignity, while she continued to walk towards the increasingly daunting figures.
They aren't even looking. Calm down. James' house is less than ten minutes away. Just ten more minutes....
She continued walking past the men, and when nothing happen relief flooded her system. That was until a low whistle echoed through the dark alleyway.
Bella hesitated for brief second before fight-or-flight took over her brain. Naturally, she chose flight, all three of the men were at least twice her weight and close to a foot taller than her. Yet, when she took her first rapid step into flight mode her foot did not met with pavement, but instead a discarded beer can, sending the small girl hurling towards the ground.
Before Bella even had a chance to right herself, or pray fir a miracle, the men where surrounding her. Bella stared up at them with wide eyes as the talked above her.
"Ahh look at that Joe, the little baby ripped her jeans," a burly man with a thick dark beard said as he knelt down and stuck his finger into the hole just above her left knee. Bella was too scared to tell the man to stop, or to move, she just lay on the ground, tears spilling over onto her cheeks and streaming down her face, "think you could fix that?"
"Well of course, anything for the pretty lady... but she'd have to take those tight little pants off, so, you know, I could, umm, 'examine' them," Joe said as he too knelt down next to the sobbing girl, they all three burst into laughter.
"You think you could do that for us hun? Let us, haha, 'help you out'?" the man with his finger in the hole in Bella's jeans said as he removed his finger and began to trail it up her leg.
"S-stop! I have someone w-waiting for me! He'll call t-the cops on y-you!" Bella screamed out between sobs, attempting to sound as brave as possible, though the majority of it came out as a whimper.
The man that had yet to talk, the only one still standing, pulled her to her feet by her hair causing her to help out in pain, both that in her knee and scalp.
"Well listen to that boys, he'll call the cops on us," this man was by far the largest of them, the obvious leader, "Who's he little girl? Your boyfriend?" the man half spat half growled into the girls ear, barely loud enough for the other two men to hear him as they both rose to their feet.
"S-so what if-f he is? You'll still g-go to j-jail!" Her sobs wracked through her body now, because of pain, the embarrassment, but mostly because of the deathly fear.
"Now that's where your wrong little girl," the leader sneered at her, "You see, he's probably waiting for you, might call you a few times in an hour or so to see if your coming or not, but there won't be an answer, now will there little girl? He'll think you pussyed out, and went to bed, then guess what he'll do.... GUESS BITCH!"
"H-he'll call t-t-the cops t-to come l-look f-for me," Bella managed, she knew she sounded pathetic but her sobs were getting worse due to her dwindling hope.
"Of course not you stupid slut!" the leader spat, "he'll go to sleep pissed at you for showing him up... and guess what you'll be doing..." they all laughed menacingly at her as she began choking on her tears, "fucking us you little cocktease."
"P-please! G-god.... NO! No no n-no no no n-no.... Please, I-I have n-never.... Oh g-god, no, stop!" she pleaded as they began to laugh as she began writhing between them all.
"Hear that boys! We snagged ourselves a virgin!"
They all laughed as the leader held her back and Joe began to unbutton her pants, and the other grabbed a picket knife and began to cut her v-neck even lower, completely exposing her lacy black bra.
"Somebody shut this god damn bitch up!"
Suddenly Bella felt her panties being ripped away from her body, and she let out a blood curdling scream before she was quickly silenced by her panties being stuffed into her mouth.
She was about to spit then out when the leader placed a hand over her mouth, "Spit that out and we won't hold back, be a good little girl and we might just leave you with your virginity."
And with that everything stopped, all the cutting of fabric, the removal of clothing, the groping, and the open mouthed sloppy kisses over her exposed flesh, everything, stopped.
Bella looked around at each of her attackers and saw two mouths hanging open in shock, four eyes willing her to spit out the offending fabric, one smug smirk, and two daring squinty little eyes.
Oh god, Oh god....but James.... Everything.... I'm so sorry Renée; I just can't fight this any more, they're going to win.
Bella kept her mouth closed and looked down at the pavement.
"Good little girl."
Then Bella heard a few hushed "fuck" and "damn it."
"Now one your knees little girl," if it was possible Bella's eyes got even wider, "now," yet with that final growl she was down on her knees.
How'd you like it? What'd you think? I feel like a poor little puppy begging for attention! (sorry) I was going for intense, but I don't know how well I did with that.
YES Edward and the rest of the Cullen gang (but one) are in this story! SWEAR!...but.... It may take a while for them to actually, yeah know, be within 5,000 miles of each other.
So now for your very first CLANCYBB CHAPTERLY QUOTA:
15!
Not too bad right?
Next chapter...EDWARDS LIFE!
Much love,
KPB