Belts and Blue eyes

by DauntlessPopTarts

Beatrice Natalie Prior is not your typical Teen. While high school is supposed to be a fun and enjoyable experience, "Tris" has been bullied and taken advantage of since her freshman year by the Populars and ring leader Four. On top of that, She is abused by the people she calls "Mother" and "Father". She misses her best friend Tobias, who moved when he was ten. This is her story.

1. Prologue

Hi guys this is my first fanfic so please tell me if I should continue or not. Im really excited for this fic so lets see how it goes. Please review and PM me ideas because I tend to get writers block pretty often. No rude comments please, only Constructive Critism. Since this is just the Prologue, this chapter is pretty short however if you want me to continue than I will definitely make my chapters longer. My updating schedual wont be frequent as I am in the IB program and we tend to get busloads of homework that keep me up till 12. And with that... on with the story

Disclaimer: All the characters belong to Veronica Roth (As much as I hate her)

Prologue

Dear Diary, April 26th

My name is Beatrice Natalie Prior, Tris for short. Im 16 years old and I go to Roth High. My aunt Tory got me this stupid Diary to write out my feelings and let my emotions out... So where should I start...ahh yes high school... For most people highschool is a heck of a lot of fun, but for me its a living Hell...In fact I might as well live in Hell. I get bullied constantly by the Populars. Four, Eric, Peter, Nita and Lauren are the worst. My Father beats me to shreds almost every night with his belt. He raped me as well. My mother is either always on drugs or drunk. Caleb left to god knows where, I hope that he is okay. I don't blame my father for hitting me with his belt or my mother for hitting me with her words, why should I, I deserve it. I am ugly, worthless, imperfect and scarred. I look like a freaking twelve year old for gods sake. I have cuts lining my wrist and thighs. I have attempted suicide four times and back out at the last minute. HA! such a coward I am. What could I have been possibly thinking that someone might need me in this world.

No one cares anymore. No one needs me anymore. This is my story

With love: Tris Prior

So how was that... Please don't forget to review and tell me if I should go on with this story. I need 5 reviews by the end of this week telling me if I should go on or not otherwise this story will be deleted. On a more positive note (sorry for the negativity), if I should go on Please Please Please send me your ideas. Bye you Pansycakes! REVIEW! =)

-DauntlessPoptarts