Hi this is my first Fanfic and i would like your opinion on it also i am excepting OCs for my story please R&R this thank you.
Smash academy
A place where kids from all over train their skills to become new brawlers to fight alongside legends like Mario and link and the toughest villains like gannondorf and bowser. Few get invited to this legendary school some them children of the legends themselves some regular kids who want a shot in the big leagues.
Geo the effeminate gamer with a dark side is about to have his dreams come true.
Geo was sitting in the corner of his room blasting the theme to code lyoko as he played games on his laptop. He went to check his email, it was a compulsion of his even though he never got many emails and today was no different. He sighed and got up and walked over to his closet door, on the door was a large mirror. He looked at himself he was 5'9" skinny had dark brown skin jet black hair that hung past his ears and blue eyes at least when he had his contacts otherwise his eyes were dark brown. "Come on out." He said to his reflection in a non-masculine voice, and then his reflection started to change. In his reflection his hair grew to his shoulders and his face became more feminine as did the rest of his body. The girl in the mirror smirked at him "sad that nobody cares enough to send you an email?" she taunted laying her and on her hip, her long nails sharpened like claws. "Why must you be so evil?" he said glaring at her thought the mirror his cheeks flushed because she was right. "Everyone has a bad side even you; you can't run from me all your life. I am your dark side I am the evil inside you and I WILL CONTROL YOU!" she yelled at him getting irritated by the fact she was being constrained by Geo. "oh yeah Felicia well I can just do this." Geo said walking from in front of the mirror making Felicia disappear. IM NOT DONE TALKING TO YOU YET. He heard in his head, ignoring her he stepped out of his room and walked across the house, it wasn't big only 2 bedrooms one for him and one for his parents. He walked outside and towards the mailbox if no one cares enough to send you a damn email what makes you think you'll have real mail. "Shut up!" he yelled the looked around to make sure no one was there to hear him shout to himself. He opened the mail box and took out the stack of mail and fumbled through it. Bill, bill, bill, bill, he then saw something that made his jaw drop a letter not just address to him but to Felicia as well.