Story: Prisoner
Author: Kaleighsan
Chapter 1 :Personal Hell
Yes I fixed it!!!
Authors note: First fanfic!! This randomly came to me in th period.(THANK GOD FOR PHYSICAL SCIENCE!!!!!) Anyway, this might be long, I'm not sure yet. I'm half-way done with chapter 2. There will be a little romance(EdxWinry) but not to much because I couldn't write a romance to save my life. Uh┘.Oh yeah!! No OX, that would be a disaster. Well read and enjoy!
Disclaimer: I do not own FMA. If I did, the movie would have ended with EdxWinry and Royia. But nothing ⌠M you pervs!!!!
Warnings: Talk of Edo torture, nothing like rape or anything though. Cursing, violence, the usual. NO YAOI OR YURRI!!!!!!!!!!!!! This chapter is very short but the rest should hopefully be a bit longer. I'm not sure yet but I think I'm going to make it a mix of the anime and the manga. SPOILERS!!!! For manga.
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The room was dark. And cold from what he could tell. He could not remember how long he had been here. He couldn't think straight. Must have been some type of drug he figured(1). His half-conscious mind was hazy and his limbs felt like led weights. His automail ruined. His shoulder sparking every now and then. Causing his shoulder twitch and add more pain to the constant throb that seemed to consume everything. He knew that at least one or two of his ribs were broken but he was pretty sure there was nothing to serious. Cuts and dark purple bruises littered his body.
Well, it could be worse, he thought, then laughed at himself.
He could not believe that he, Edward Elric, the Fullmetal Alchemist, would ever be in a situation such as this. He had heard what happened during times of war and conflict. Soldiers describing what had happened to them or another in a concentration camp or an enemy prison.
I guess the effects of whatever the hell was in that food is starting to go away, Ed remarked in his head to himself. Talking hurt his dry throat. He was able to think clearer now. Alchemy seemed impossible when ever the drug was a hold of him, and his many escape attempts just got him and even worse punishment. Such punishment usually included being kicked, cut, burned, and punched. He felt like a human punching bag whenever that happened.
No, not human. Who could ever call themselves human after all that I've done? He hadn't even known that he had caused all this until in the tunnel at Briggs Mt.(2), when Lt. Falman(3) was listing all those wars and battles.
He thought he had solved that cities problems by unseating that fake prophet. Never expecting a rebellion or a full-scale war. He had just wanted to save someone from the pains from that taboo. Just wanted to show those people the truth. He had never been told he had caused any of this.
Why? Why was he never told?! He had every right to know his own mistakes! That bastard must have felt some reason not to tell him, didn't he?! Or did he think a child would not be able to handle the truth?!
"DAMMIT!!" Ed screamed in his head. He was sick and tired of feeling pain. Sick and tired of being lied to. He hated to look so weak, to cry. Yet two small tears slipped through his barrier, but he refused to let the rest fall. He would not give up on this personal hell called life he still had Al to change back to normal. He had to make things right. He would get out of hear alive and get back to Al.
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(1) I just thought they had to do something to keep him down sense even if you take away the automail he can still do Alchemy.
(2) Where Ed and Al go after Major Armstrong sends them to meet his sister.(MAJOR SPOILER)
(3) When Colonel Mustangs group is split up, Falman is promoted to 2nd Lt. Doesn't stop Ed from constantly screwing up and calling him Warrant Officer though.: )
End Note: I really must suck. To me you would have to be desperate to read this. Oh well.(sigh) Anyway I'm going to continue this even if I only get 1 review! I DON'T CARE HOW MUCH YOU HATE IT!!!!!! PX. Please no flames though people, I already know I suck at writing and need to go die. But for all the people who do review thanks !
Love you all, Kaleigh