Hi Everybody I'm new to writing fanfiction so feel free to give advice! I will try to update this as much as possible but I have a super hectic schedule and it might be hard to do anyways Feel free to correct me at times I need help. Also Phantom Phreeze I spelled with ph on purpose.
A new phantom in town
Crap! He was going to be late meeting Sam and Tucker again! Danny rushed down the stairs grabbing a piece of Fenton toast before rushing out of the house. He jumped and changed into a phantom in midair, flying as fast as he could to the school. Danny landed a block away and changed back to his human half. He dashed the last block to school.
He walked over and met Sam Manson and Tucker Foley; They were his best friends and two the four people who knew about him. The other two being his cousin Dani or Danielle Phantom and his sister Jaz.
"Hey guys anything new?", "Ghost related no, but there is word there's a new student." Tucker grinned when Sam mentioned the new kid. "I heard it's a girl!" Tucker was constantly hitting on girls no matter who they were. Sam rolled her eyes. Just as Sam was about to say something Danny's ghost sense went off. "Sorry guys, duty calls." He dodged behind the tree and changed into his ghost half and rushed at this larger ghost. This one may have been larger then some but Dannny was confident he would handle it no problem.
Everyone had stopped screaming and cheered. "Want some help shedding those extra pounds?" Danny shot a ecto-ray at the ghost as he spoke. The rays hit the ghost barely leaving a mark! What was this ghost, Danny wondered, his ecto-rays had been getting stronger and yet it barely hurt this ghost. The large creator groaned and then roared. It stomped towards Danny who was shooting Ecto-rays at the Ghost as fast as he could. Danny was slowing down, Ecto-rays didn't take much but after launching hundreds in a matter of miutes it was taking its toll, the ghost swatted most of Danny's shots away like annoying flies. Finally Danny gave up on that and built up the cold inside till it had no where to go but out. Danny released his Phantom Phreeze out of both hands successfully freezing the ghost solid.
The crowd cheered and Sam threw him the Fenton Thermos. When Danny whipped around to suck the ghost in he went flying across the street, courtesy of the freshly melted ghost. He hit the wall so hard he started to change back to human but he managed to use what was left of his energy to keep in phantom form. Sam and Tucker ran towards Danny as he plummeted out of the sky gaining speed. Suddenly something flew past Tucker and Sam hurtling towards Danny. The two stopped thinking it was another attack then realized it was a phantom! The slim, female phantom caught Danny Just before he hit the ground then flew over and layed him at Sam and Tucker's feet. They stared in shock as She flew off racing towards the ghost.
Sam and Tucker pulled Danny into some bushes just as he gave up on holding his phantom form. Sam turned around and look ed at the phantom. The newcomer flew straight through the ghost at high speed. The only time Sam saw that kind of speed was when Danielle used her ecto-rays in her feet to push her faster. The girl pulled out what loooked more like a normal thermos than a Fenton thermos and sucked the ghost in. She then hovered in the air and looked straight at Sam. Sam took this moment to study her. The girl had a suit similar to Danny's but the top was blue with white detail and an E on the chest, it was long sleeved and stopped above her belly button. Her pants were similar to Danielle's but again they were blue and white. But what stood out the most to her was her eyes and ecto-rays which glowed electric blue unlike Danny's bright green rays and ghost eyes. Then the girl flew off. Danny coughed snapping Sam's attention back to him. She lifted his head as Danny's eyes fluttered open. "She was one freaky phantom", croaked Danny, and he cracked a weak smile. Sam and Tucker sighed with relief.
Thanks for taking the time to read my story reviews are welcome! I will consider others ideas and I don't mind criticism.