Well hope you enjoy. I added some plot. -_-... Your story: Part Two: Danny runs fast panting all the way to his house. (np) "I'm back," he announces as he gets to his house. (np) "Ah Danny, did you bring the tools?" Billy asks.
(np) "Yeah but it was a pain to get them by the way," Danny replies. (np)
"Excellent, tommorow will be the best day for me, when I stalk and stare at girls in the locker room!" Billy exclams excitedly. (np) "Would you please get out of my house?" Danny asks half nerviously and half angrily. (np) "Shut up,
I'm going!" Billy shouted before leaving Danny's house. (np) "If he gets arrested or expelled, I'm going to laugh," Danny murmurs to himself. (np)
Billy runs off marrily laughing. The next day comes and it soon comes time for the girls to change for Physical Education. (np) Billy peeks once again into the locker room laughing, "Now its stalking time! Heeeelllllloooo girls, Billy is back!" (np) He begins making a game with the girls following them as they go back and forth for possessions and friends and running back out when they catch him staring. It was all too fun for Billy. The girls who knew him already would simply roll their eyes or completely ignore him. The girls that didn't gave him all the attention he deserved. (np) While in the game, he says things like, "Ahhh yeah, that's what I want to see," but he is abruptly interrupted, "Ummm, who's behind me?" (np) He turns around to find one of the girls'
Physical Education coaches. (np) "Miss Brandy! Ummm, how are you?" (np)
"Billy, were you looking in the girls' locker room again?" Miss Brandy shouts. (np) "Ummm, yes Miss Brandy," Billy answers, while adding a laugh.
(np) "Didn't the principal tell you not to do this?" (np) "Yes mame!" (np)
"That's it, I'm going to tell the principal so he can get you expelled!" (np)
Billy makes this awful face so twisted, physcotic, and vile it would have mad a weaker teacher already run for his or her life. (np) Instead, Miss Brandy is worried and asks, "Billy, what's wrong with you?" (np) He leans his head and says, "Ohhh nothing, just nothing but I guess this means I'll have to kill you." (np) "You're joking right Billy?" (np) Billy smiles and at the same time galres and then lets out a minacule laugh which finally gets to Miss Brandy.
(np) "Oh dear, Billy wait you can't kill me, I'm too pretty to die!" (np) She tries to make a run for it. (np) It's too bad, I like the pretty ones," Billy says while embarking on the cahse revealing a special drill used for especially small screws. (np) Miss Brandy screams but Billy is able to catch her easily. The drill enters her brain quickly and effortlessly and soon kills her leaving Billy in an empty hallway, blood covered, and smiling proudly. Miss Brandy lied dead at his feet. THE END OF THE STORY!
(np) "Yeah but it was a pain to get them by the way," Danny replies. (np)
"Excellent, tommorow will be the best day for me, when I stalk and stare at girls in the locker room!" Billy exclams excitedly. (np) "Would you please get out of my house?" Danny asks half nerviously and half angrily. (np) "Shut up,
I'm going!" Billy shouted before leaving Danny's house. (np) "If he gets arrested or expelled, I'm going to laugh," Danny murmurs to himself. (np)
Billy runs off marrily laughing. The next day comes and it soon comes time for the girls to change for Physical Education. (np) Billy peeks once again into the locker room laughing, "Now its stalking time! Heeeelllllloooo girls, Billy is back!" (np) He begins making a game with the girls following them as they go back and forth for possessions and friends and running back out when they catch him staring. It was all too fun for Billy. The girls who knew him already would simply roll their eyes or completely ignore him. The girls that didn't gave him all the attention he deserved. (np) While in the game, he says things like, "Ahhh yeah, that's what I want to see," but he is abruptly interrupted, "Ummm, who's behind me?" (np) He turns around to find one of the girls'
Physical Education coaches. (np) "Miss Brandy! Ummm, how are you?" (np)
"Billy, were you looking in the girls' locker room again?" Miss Brandy shouts. (np) "Ummm, yes Miss Brandy," Billy answers, while adding a laugh.
(np) "Didn't the principal tell you not to do this?" (np) "Yes mame!" (np)
"That's it, I'm going to tell the principal so he can get you expelled!" (np)
Billy makes this awful face so twisted, physcotic, and vile it would have mad a weaker teacher already run for his or her life. (np) Instead, Miss Brandy is worried and asks, "Billy, what's wrong with you?" (np) He leans his head and says, "Ohhh nothing, just nothing but I guess this means I'll have to kill you." (np) "You're joking right Billy?" (np) Billy smiles and at the same time galres and then lets out a minacule laugh which finally gets to Miss Brandy.
(np) "Oh dear, Billy wait you can't kill me, I'm too pretty to die!" (np) She tries to make a run for it. (np) It's too bad, I like the pretty ones," Billy says while embarking on the cahse revealing a special drill used for especially small screws. (np) Miss Brandy screams but Billy is able to catch her easily. The drill enters her brain quickly and effortlessly and soon kills her leaving Billy in an empty hallway, blood covered, and smiling proudly. Miss Brandy lied dead at his feet. THE END OF THE STORY!