Diamond of Darkhold, my way
OK, so you know when Lina leaves Doon in Ember to get help? Well here's what I think is what should have happen.
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Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters. If I did, well, this story would actually been published. But it's not.
This story will alternate between what's going on with Lina, Doon, and Lizzie. Maybe other characters as the story continues. Idk.
Lina: Are there going to be Fluffy parts? (Said while looking at Doon while Doon slowly edged away from her)
Me: Yes, of course. Why not?
Doon: I don't know…we may be better off without them…(Lina's leaning in making kissie faces at him while he backs away disgusted)
Me: NO! There must be Fluff!
Lina: Yeah! Go Fluffinesss!
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Chapter 1-Daydreams
"I still can't believe you and Doon did this Lina." Lina's friend Lizzie Bisco said (note that we have already realized the little savior vision that Lizzie has in her head). Lizzie, Lina, Dr. Hester, Mr. Harrow, and the three town leaders were all in a fast little wagon heading towards Ember.
"Doon convinced me that we should go back to Ember, okay? Just forget about that now. We need to focus on getting Doon out of there." Lina said sitting in the front next to Mary, jumping in her seat with anticipation. They had finally reached a distance where Lina could see the entrance to Ember clearly.
As soon as they were close enough, Lina jumped from the wagon and sped towards the crack in the mountain that they had to crawl through. "Hurry! We might be able to reach him before they do something truly terrible to him!" Lina said as she lit her candle and started down the narrow slope. The others followed as carefully as they could.
"AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!" Lizzie screamed. Lina turned and saw Dr. Hester and Mary pulling Lizzie back on to the narrow path from the edge.
"Lizzie! What were you doing?" Lina said worriedly. Lizzie gasped for breath for a minute and finally looked at Lina with a sorry expression. "Sorry, I-I was daydreaming for a minute." She said.
"We don't have time to daydream! I'm sorry Lizzie, but this is important." Lina said seriously. She stared at Lizzie and Lizzie stared back with a hard expression. Finally, she nodded. Lina took her hand and they started back down the slope carefully, but quickly to try to find Doon. How on earth could she be daydreaming? Lina thought. And what was she thinking about? Lina was suddenly curious. But she knew it would have to wait until after she found Doon. She had to find him. Suddenly, a sudden rush went rushing through her stomach and ears as she thought of him. What if he was in danger? What if those people hurt him? Would they feed him? What are they doing to him right now? I hope he's okay. Why do I feel like this...I'm a little confused…why do I want to find Doon totally helpless? I want to save him but he isn't totally helpless. Not the way I'm thinking right now any way. She imagined him cowering in fear and herself saving him somehow while everyone else was coming rather slowly behind her. By the time they got there Doon was being cradled in Lina's arms as she calmed him and hugged him. "I don't know what I'd do without you, Lina." She imagined him say. She smiled and their faces slowly came together…
Lina shook her head rapidly. No, that couldn't possibly happen. They were friends and nothing more than that. Right?
Going to Doon…
The Troggs were all busy with one thing or another as Doon stayed chained together watching them from a bit of a distance.
"Droon! Get your butt over here! We have to discuss where we can nail next." Trogg said. Doon sighed and walked over keeping his distance from Kanza and Yorick. "Okay kids, see that building way over that way? That's where we'll go today. All of you grab a sack and a hat and get moving." Trogg said pointing toward the Northwest. Right near the way out of Ember. Doon stared at him wondering if he could be so dumb as to let him go over in that direction…
Doon: …
Lina: Ooooooh…
Me: What?
Lina: So how many people are going to have a crush on Doon? *Smiling*
Me: …I don't know…
Doon: *coughs nervously*
Me: Well sorry!
Doon: It's not you…*staring at Lina who is slowly inching her way toward him as he backs away*
Me: oh. Don't worry about it.* pulls out a small remote and presses the top button*
Lina: OOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What the f*** was that!?!
Me:*Smiling like an insane maniac* your shock collar. Stay away from him or I'll turn this puppy up to high voltage.
Lina:…fine.
Me: Okay well, please review! (Review my mini convos w/ lina & doon 2;))
Lina(in the background): How do you get this frikin' thing off!?! How the hell did you get it on me in the first place!?!
Doon:Thanks.
Me: No prob.