Finding my dad

Prologue

My name is Lilly Jane Davis I am 12 years old and my mother is my best friend her name is Brooke Davis she is a fashion designer and we live in a pent house apartment in LA, we do everything together we go shopping and horse riding I have a horse named Shadow.

There's one person who annoys me I have a little half brother Kyle who's just turned 5 and is always breaking my things, sometimes I wish it was just mom and me coz it was perfect before he came along.

I have a dad but I've never met him all I know is his name is Lucas and he is the love of my mom's life but he broke her heart. So she left Tree Hill behind anyway enough about that. This is about me and how I'm going to make my mother happy. Good thing I'm supposed to be in summer camp coz I'm going to find my father and hopefully we can be a family I just hope he isn't with the woman who stole him from my mother and if he is so what I will be like the kids in the movies who do everything to reunite there parents.

Please review and tell me if you think, should I continue. It will be longer next time this is just the prologue