Yay! I'm back! Welcome to my new story : TAKEN ! And yes, I am aware that that is a horror movie . I just didn't want to call my story 'Kidnapped' 'cause it didn't sound right. So, I told you I would give you the FULL summary , which isn't really that long, to be honest, just longer than what the Fanfiction site allows you to put in your summary box. So, here it goes:
Ari was getting restless. It was a long journey to get to where he wanted to be with Max. But it was worth the price. Soon it would be him and Max. All alone. Max was kidnapped by Ari, with the help of the School, so he could bring Max to a secret place, where he and her could be alone. And she couldn't escape. Well, when her wings were off she wouldn't be able to. The flock was taken by the School, and our currently being held there. Will they be able to save MAx?! dun dun dun ... Set after MR2 . FAX ! DUH ! Rated T .
As you might be aware of already, I got this idea after reading SOF (again!) When Ari wants to take Max away so they are all alone so they can be 'friends.' Thought it would be interesting to sow Ari's point of you, and where he would possibly take her... all that jazz . I will be showing sneak peaks for the next chapter, to keep you guys a coming ! So, enjoy !
Disclaimer: 'cause I haven't been doing these things... I am not James Patterson. I do not own Maximum Ride, Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy or Angel...or Total. I do not own Ella or Dr. Martinez, or even Dr. Brigid Dwyer. -_- I do not own any of the books, yada yada yada... do you think that will last me this whole story ? Will I have to write anymore ?
Chapter 1:
MAX POV:
I gripped the steering wheel tighter and my knuckles turned even whiter. My scars stretched and I winced.
Yes, we were driving. And I was about as wound up as rubber ball because of it. Fang watched me, with slight amusement, as my butt hovered on the front seat, glancing over the steering wheel. I saw nothing but car's rear bumpers and flashing red lights.
'Come on, come on' I said to myself quietly, even though I knew everyone could hear me.
I let my eyes shift to Fang briefly, who was telling me in 'Max-and-Fang' language to calm the heck down.
'Too late for that' I shot back at Fang's once again blank expression. 'Who was it that convinced me to take a car in the first place!?'
Fang chuckled, and Iggy joined in on the fun. Good to know, my agitation was amusing to them.
I reared my head in frustration back to the surrounding cars. I glanced left and right and behind me. I expected Erasers to show up any second. Any second. We were close to an Itex headquarters. Now, we were in a car. Why? Ask me again when I have a bit of sanity.
'Do you want me to drive?' Fang's face was expressionless.
'No,' I said, firm, but with a touch of annoyance. 'I am perfectly capable of driving.'
And, don't forget that I'm a total control freak and wouldn't be able to sit in the passengers seat watching Fang take the wheel. Yeah, that as well.
'Are you…?' he trailed off as I sent him another Max glare.
'Positive,' I said, this time a bit more controlled.
He gave me a long look and then turned away, and I knew that meant the conversation had been dropped.
I turned my attention back to the road. I watched as the car ahead of me moved forward an inch, and I followed. I tailed the car ahead of me for ten minutes, until traffic seemed to open up a bit. We were passing an accident, and I looked out my window, curious. Five uniformed police officers stood there, patrolling the area. One looked up at me and sent me an evil smile.
I slammed my foot hard on the gas.
Oh , a cliffie already . You guys are cursing me. xD Just letting you know, the next, like, five chapters are already finished, so all you need to do to get them is TO REVIEW ! yay!
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