OK, I just woke up , wanting to write one of those 'Naruto Characters come to life' stroies one day and came up with this.

A Noel14 Productions Presents:

San Fall

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, only my OC's.

Chapter 1

Wind blew past the open area, sweeping into the large house left with its door open in the middle of the night. A man dressed in a black quietly made his way into the mansion in hopes of finding something of value. He looked into the living room before slipping away upstairs. He peered into the first room and closed the room, saying "It's not here." Things went on like this for a while. He looked into the rooms and moved on when he didn't find what he was looking for. "Man, this girl has lousy security." He muttered as he kept walking on. "You would think that with a house this large, she would at least have a burglar alarm."

He looked into the last door at the end of the hallway, "Bingo." He slid into the room filled with valuables such as jewelry and precious gems. He took out the brown sack he was carrying around with him and began to stuff anything he could find into it. He was putting in a diamond necklace when something shiny and metallic caught his eye: a safe, probably filled with cash. He chuckled under his breath, making his way over to the safe and muttered "idiot."

Before he could so much as touch the safe, there was a bright light flickered on, bringing the house to life, along with a set of voices. "Intruder alert! Intruder alert!" He looked down to his feet to find that he'd stepped on a wire. Cursing his carelessness, he looked around the room for a window or some sort of exit. He didn't find any. He began to run out into the hallway, but the door was blocked by a figure.

The person looming over his only exit was a girl with long blue hair and equally blue eyes. She glared at him, but didn't look like much of a threat considering the fact that she was wearing a pair of silky PJ's with monkeys and snowflakes on them. "Nice pajamas, Koori," her burglar said in a sarcastic voice.

"Get out of my house, now," she commanded. "I don't want to have to hurt you, Dorobou. If you're lucky, I might just sick the cops on you."

"You can't do a thing against me," he said with a cocky look on his face. "I can take you out in less than a minute!"

Koori narrowed her eyes at this statement. "It's your funeral."

"Koori, open up!" There was a bunch of knocking on the front door of the house, causing a certain blue haired girl, who was up all night, to come rushing down the stairs for her three friends.

Koori opened the door a crack, still dressed in her PJ's, and glared at them. "What do you want? I'm trying to sleep." She complained.

"We heard you were robbed last night!" Keika said excitedly. "What happened? Who robbed you?"

"Do you remember that guy I dumped last week, Dorobou?" They nodded. "I guess he decided to get his revenge by robbing me. So I started whacking him where the sun doesn't shine with the sack he was carrying and called the cops."

All three of them burst out laughing, imagining the scene in their heads. "That defiantly sounds like something you would do," Okibi said, still giggling.

"Serves that jerk right," Kousa nodded. "I can completely understand why you dumped him. The guy was kind of obsessive and a total creep."

"Agreed," Koori opened the door all the way to let them in. "Well, I'm awake now, so you guys can come in."

The three girls came into the house, instantly heading for the living room and crashing on the couch. Keika placed the staff she usually carried on the floor. "So, Koori, there's this new spell I learned that I want to try out, and your back yard would be the perfect place."

Koori rolled her eyes at the purple haired girl's idea. She was a current wizard-in-training, and usually liked to test out her spells at her house. "What is it this time?"

"It's a highly advanced spell that requires total concentration and teamwork. If all goes well, it will open a portal to another world."

"I'm not sure about this one," she said. "What if we end up getting aliens from another world in my house? How would I hide that from my parents when they come to visit?"

Okibi decided to step in. "Come on, it's always so fun whenever we test out a new spell! Besides, when have any of her spells gone wrong?"

"Several times, actually," she clarified. "Do you remember that time Keika told us that she had a great new teleportation spell and we wound up falling off the roof? Or what about that body-switching spell she said we just 'had to try out?'" She crossed her arms and glared at the two of them.

"OK then, Kousa," Keika said. "You're the tie-breaker. What do you say?" She looked at her blonde friend with hopeful eyes.

Kousa sighed and looked into her puppy-dog face. Keika has the best puppy-dog face in the entire world. "One more spell can't hurt, can it, Koori?"

Koori groaned and mouthed the word 'traitor' at the blonde before leading them into the backyard. "Fine, but if something goes wrong, I'm blaming it on you three." She opened the door to the backyard. "OK, so what do we do?"

Keika was almost jumping in glee. "OK, first we have to sit on the ground and hold hands." All four of them sat in a circle and gripped onto each others' hands. "Now we have to close our eyes and focus on another world. Think of a place different from ours. Maybe you can imagine something you've read in a book or something you've seen on TV. It'd be better to make up your own world, though."

Everyone closes their eyes and starts thinking of something. The circle starts to glow an orange color. Okibi giggled a bit. "This tickles."

"Be quiet and concentrate," Keika snapped at her. "This is a high leveled spell, remember. Try not to mess this up." After about another minute of concentration, she started to chant the spell in an ancient language. "Alright, everyone open your eyes. There should be a portal in between us."

They opened their eyes and stared at the empty space between them. "Well," Koori stood up; dusting off her clothes and began walking back to the house. "This has been a waste of my time."

"It wasn't a total waste," Koura said, standing up as well. "I could really feel the magic pumping through my veins. It was pretty cool. I never thought I would be saying this, but I'm kind of jealous of Keika now. It feels amazing."

"Do you know what went wrong?" Okibi asked.

Keika thought for a moment. "There are three reasons I can think of. 1. It was because I left my staff in the living room, and I usually can't channel the magic well without it. 2. We weren't thinking alike too well and nobody's thoughts outnumbered the others. And 3. This is actually a spell that's supposed to be cast during sun fall." She scratched the back of her head awkwardly.

"There goes our plan for the day," Okibi rolled her eyes. "What are we supposed to do now?"

"Maybe we can teach Sakibou some tricks," Kousa suggested. Sakibou was Koori's Egyptian Mau. Sakibou did have a thing for Kousa, though. Every time the cat saw her, she ran right up to her, purring like there was no tomorrow.

"Boring," Both Keika and Okibi said at the same time.

"Oh, hang on, I'm getting a call," Okibi pulled her cell phone out from her pocket. "Hello?" She waited as whoever was on the other end of the phone was finished. "OK, bye," she hung up and looked at everyone else. "That was Dad. I have to go."

"Alright, thanks for coming over," Koori smiled at her. "Tell Mr. Hosaki I said 'Hi.""

"OK, I'll see you guys at the sleep over tomorrow." The orange haired girl waved to her friends before disappearing into the house.

Just as the door was about to close, Koori's cat found her way outside and was rubbing her face against Kousa's leg, purring. "Hey, Sakibou," she bent down, smiling to pet her.

"Who wants to play the Wii?" Keika screamed.

The other two instantly brightened up, "Mi!"

Punch. Kick. Elbow. Kick. Knee. Punch. Punch. Elbow. Koori wiped the sweat from her forehead and stopped her training for the day, panting. She'd been practicing karate for an hour now, when Keika and Kousa left. Her practice dummy still stood, foam starting to leak out from all of the years it had been hit and kicked by her.

She grabbed a towel from the rack by the dummy that she has handy after she finishes practicing and wiped her face off, draping it over her shoulders and walking out of the room, towards the bathroom. She thought that before she left the room, she saw a flashing orange light, but quickly discarded the thought as she made her way to the bathroom.

(Koori POV)

I stepped out of the steam from the shower and wrapped myself in a towel. I hear a loud crash and a shocked expression spreads across my face. I had been in the shower for about an hour, (I'm usually in there for a while.) so it was probably dark, when most of the robbers come out. But then again, most people don't usually come for another robbery after hearing that another person was arrested for stealing from me. It must have been Sakibou, knocking down a vase or something. I could check it out later.

Seeing as I had forgotten to get my clothes from my room before getting in the shower, I'll have to get to my room and change. I unlocked the door and stepped out quietly, only to be grabbed by the waist and have my mouth covered by a hand. I kept screaming "Let me go!" But it came out muffled, so it sounded something a bit more like "Met the row!"

"Shut up, b***h," a shiver found its way down my spine when I heard this. I guess that crash I heard really was a robber. "Deidara, get the f**k over here and help me tie her up." I was still screaming things as loud as I possibly could, which wasn't much. This guy had a tight grip.

"Hold on a minute, un," I heard a voice come from down the hall.

"Oh, Tobi wants to help!" A child-like voice came out, ringing through the house. Before I could figure out what was happening, a boy wearing an orange mask had come down the hall and was running over to me. "Oh, look Hidan-San, it's a girl! Hello, Girl-Chan! Tobi is happy to meet you!" Wow, this was the stupidest robber I've ever met.

"Get the f**k away, Tobi," my captor, who I now assume is named Hidan, yelled at Tobi.

What's happening? Are there more? I can still hear noises downstairs, and there's someone else coming down the hall. I don't understand.

"Look, Deidara-Sempai! It's Girl-Chan!" Tobi was then hit on top of the head by an annoyed looking she-male. He had long blonde hair, half of it covering his right eye, and the other pulled into a high ponytail, and crystal blue eyes.

"Shut up, Tobi. Go bother Sasori-Danna, un." Tobi nodded and ran off in another direction. I glared at the blonde, who was the only person I could currently look at. He looked me over and a smirk grew on his face. "Do you think we can take off her towel, un?"

OK, now I was ticked off. I started yelling even louder, more profound words and kicked and struggled as hard as I could. Finally, I was able to reach out my leg and hit Deidara in the place. The blonde let out a screech of pain and Hidan laughed.

"Serves you right, mother f***er." Did I ever mention that I just love foul mouths? Please note that I'm being sarcastic. I quickly sent my elbow into my captor's stomach and he let go, yelling profanities. I ran as soon as I got the chance without looking back and scrambled into my room, locking the door. I hid in the closet, hoping it would be such an obvious place that they wouldn't look there. On the bright side, while I was in there, I found Sakibou, cringing in the corner of the darkest part. That was good; she was safe. I got into the fetal position as I heard pounding on my door, telling me to open or they would break it down themselves. Whatever, I doubt they can-

BOOM

Was that an explosion? My eyes widen as I hear footsteps in the space next to me. Oh my God, they blew up my door! How am I going to explain that to Mom and Dad?

"I can't find her, un."

"Shut up, brat. Did you check the closet?"

"…"

"Go check."

I backed into the corner of the closet, trying to stay hidden, but apparently, I had been spotted. I hand reached out for my shoulder and brought me up, so that I was staring wide-eyed at a redheaded guy with someone else behind me. I could tell it wasn't Hidan, he just looked like more of the bored type of person that hardly even speaks. Although, I did find another person behind him with silver hair, rubbing his stomach like somebody hit it. I'm guessing that was Hidan.

Whenthe silver haired man looked at my face, he smirked. "How do you like us now, b***h?" Yep, that was definatly Hidan.

I was too scared to do anything, just standing there like an idiot. Then something wet touched my shoulder and I completely freaked out. I screamed and ran into the corner of the room, breaking away from whoever was holding me. "Stay away!" I screeched when they came closer. "I'm a green belt in karate, and I'm not afraid to hurt you!"

He redhead shook his head like I was some pitiful child and somebody else entered the room. He had raven black hair and red eyes that really freaked me out. Wait a minute… I know this guy from somewhere. Where have I seen him?

I didn't have much time to think. The second I looked into his eyes, I passed out cold.

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