To let everyone know who read this before. I had one of my best friends help me edit this. She's a lifesaver. That and i'm going to change the rating to M next chapter because I wasn't sure how I would rate it until now.
Somewhere in a noiseless empty space in… Well, space a young man floats, the silence sickeningly mind-numbing. To a normal human being that is. No, he is far from normal. He is… Oh, what's that word where you have unlimited power like a god?... Oh yeah! Omnipotent! He's omnipotent, that's right. Now you may be wondering, 'Why is a being of unlimited power just floating there doing nothing?' Well, maybe you should read some more before thinking that you bunch of idiots. And I mean that in the nicest way possible. Trust me, I am a Professional Idiot, I have a degree in idiocy. But I am getting off track. Let's see who the guy is, shall we? And by we, I mean you. I have a story to write. Now go!
He seems to notice you and looks at whatever direction that seems to make sense to look at.
"Hm? Oh! Hello there!" The young man greeted, pleasantly surprised by the sudden unknown, yet not unwelcome event. "I thought I sensed something like another person (or some people I think,) just floating here! Somehow. Anyways, I haven't had a guest in… Well, I don't think I ever had a guest or guests at all, and you are the first I had since I have appeared one day and started floating here!" The young man smiled a big smile, you know the kind where you can tell it's genuine with how the eyes twinkled?
"I think they know how a genuine smile works, dude."
Oh, and did I tell you he can talk to me?
"I don't think you did. But they do now."
Well even if I did or didn't you would've told them anyways.
"Yes, I would've. Wait… do they even know my name or what I even look like?"
No, let me describe to you what our powerful friend looks like. He is a tall fellow. 5'10 tall to be exact, my friends. Or was it 5'9? Whatever. He has a pale complexion, long brown hair that reaches to the middle of his back, hazel eyes, a bit of a mustache, some scruff at the chin, and an Irish smile. Now for his name? Michael, or Mike if you want to call him that. So all in all: he looks like an average guy with long hair.
"And that's what the main character will be for all the stories."
Pretty much a multiverse with many different Mikes going on many different adventures!
"Well, the reason for the multiple versions of the same character in multiple universes is because the author is a lazy moron who can't be original."
Well, he's not wrong. Ok let's get this story moving, I'll take it from here, buddy."
Thanks, man, I'm starting to get a bit tired of writing dialogue for the both of us.
"No problem my friend. Now… how about we watch the start of an adventure?"
'The week had been great for me. Somehow, I won a free plane trip to Japan for three months. THREE MONTHS. Don't know why the contest made the trip three months but whatever. Anyways, Japan's one of the countries I wanted to visit, and I am extremely happy that I was able to do so! What's my name? The people who hear my thoughts even though that's not possible because I like to internally monologue for fun may know. Well, my friends, family, and people in my neighborhood know me by the name of Michael or Mike. Most people would call me that, too. And right now, I am having a great time. My guide is awesome(in my honest opinion), he is able to speak English fluently and without an 'accent' as he calls it. Whatever that means. But right now that doesn't matter. What does matter right now is me going for a walk and taking in the sights of Tokyo, the city I am currently in.
As I am walking on the sidewalk I see some construction workers fixing up the road. One of them looked up from what he is doing and shouted at me. Soon others started doing the same. Of course, I don't what know what they are saying so I smiled and waved to them. It was until then someone spoke English and said: "Look out! There's a hole in front of you!"
"Wha-oah!?" I tripped and fell forward into some hole in the sidewalk, I almost saved myself but ended up banging my head on the edge of the hole and fell into it, ultimately sealing my fate.
As I was falling and although my vision was blurring I could make out some cherry blossoms scattering in the wind. The only word I could get out was a "What? OOMF!" Ouch… The ground thankfully was completely grassy and flat, but it certainly wasn't enough cushion my fall.
And that's a wrap. Hello everyone as you can tell this is my first story and that I am only a beginner in making this sort of thing. Right now I need any, and I mean ANY type of criticism. Even if its negative. I'll try to take what you criticized into account to make my stories better. Just a warning though, I'm not gonna be updating like crazy every single day. At best I'll update once a week or if I'm feeling extra inspired, the next day. But I regrettably will have writer's block and possibly not update for a month or more, which probably would happen often. Anyways I'm gonna stop writing and say goodbye for now. Addio~ TheAuthor (PS. The Omnipotent Mike, or Omni-Mike he'll now be called will more or less appear at the beginning and the end of each story.)
