Hello this is my first fanfic that i have ever written but i have reaally enjoyeed reading others. I will be greatful to read reviews and use critism to improve my writing. Thanks!
Unexpected Sorting
Lily's POV
"It will be fine Lily!" said my mother softly " you don't need to worry, especially with your brothers to look after you " I gave her a smile to reassure her even though I was shaking like a twig and feeling feint from the butterflies in my stomach. As my mother lead me to the door of the great scarlet steam train the Hogwarts express my older brother Albus leaned out "don't worry lily Hogwarts is great!" and he ran back to his friends, I stepped up on to the train and looked around, every where I looked there was smiling children excited about the new school year.
A smart boy with a shiny badge on his robe took my trunk and put it on the luggage rack , he offered to take my new owl , a baby snowy owl called henglowe but I decided to keep her with me. I looked back to see my mother and father smiling at me proudly " I will miss you so much!" I whimpered "we will too, it will be over in a flash, we will see you at christmas !" my father Harry replied.I turned my back and walked along the corridor towards the carriage that my brother and cousins were in "hi Lily!" my cousin Rose screamed "hi" I mumbled and sat down.
In the cabin there was Rose ,Albus,Bruno, and another boy that looked around my age, he was a strange looking boy, he dressed weird but he looked very nervous just like I was.
We all got changed into our robes when we were soon due to be stopping , by that time we had all calmed down a bit and we were having a joke around when the train stopped. I got such a fright I screamed and fell on my bottom, my cheeks went as red as the Bertie-Botts jelly bean that Rose just ate when they laughed at me I took this a bit to seriously and stormed out very embarrassed walking right into a group of Slytherin seniors. "eww look at her the little ginger with the beetroot face " one screamed at me as i backed along the corridor as quick as possible.
"Hogwarts hasn't been as good as I thought" I whispered and stepped off the train on to the cold platform.
Sorry the chapters may be quite short but i will update as much as possible and i hope you enjoy~Rareid123