Konban wa Minna, this is the start of my new series. This is one story of
the Hime no Yami series. The first story it is actually, there will be
more. Well, there should be lots of chapters for this one, starting at the
beginning, some of this will be normal P.O.V., but most of it will be mine.
Well, here goes! Some of this WILL not make sense, I do know for a fact
that the Koorime reproduce every 100 years or so, so don't flame me for
things I already know.
My story, chapter 1
Shunned at Birth
Normal P.O.V.
It was a cold winter day on the Koorime island, Hina had just had her third child. Although this child was different from any normal Koorime, very different. She had ebony hair, and the deepest blood-red eyes. The elders of the Koorime had expected that the child was different when she was first born. And soon after, they discovered why.... The young girl was named Yuhina, and she, was a fire youkai.
"She must go!" Said one of the Koorime elders.
"Just like her brother before her!" Shouted another.
It had been twelve years since the first forbidden child had been thrown off the edge of the island, and he looked like her, the same ebony hair, and the same lucious ruby eyes. His name was Hiei. And now, it was decided that the same fate would be Yuhina's, she too, would suffer the same as her brother.
"NO! I won't let you! You took my son, and I won't let you take my daughter!" Shouted Hina, enraged now, she couldn't stand to bear the loss of another child. "She's not male, why do you have to take her too?!" She added, Hiruiseki now starting to fall from her eyes.
"We are sorry Hina, but your daughter is also a FIRE youkai. You should know being male wasn't the only sign of misfortune. It has been decided, Yuhina will be thrown off the island by Ruri tomorrow." One of the elders said.
"NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO! NO! YOU CAN'T!!!!" Hina shouted crying hysterically.
"This conversation is over." Another elder said.
Hina was taken away, her only request was to be able to see her daughter before she was thrown off. Her request had been granted soon after. Hina sat on a bed holding the small infant in her arms. The baby had its big ruby eyes opened and was now starring at Hina.
"I'm so sorry I can't protect you from what will happen to you little Yuhina.... I wish I could keep you, you remind me of your brother in a way, what with your hair, your eyes, though your sister has the same eyes as well." She chuckled lightly to herself as the baby cuddled against her in hope of warmth.
"You really are a fire youkai, aren't you?" The baby cooed for her best response. "No matter what you are, Yuhina, I will always love you..." She kissed the baby's forehead and hugged her tightly.
"Moma! Moma!" Shouted a young Yukina, only at the young age of eleven. "Can I see my little sister?" She asked impatiently jumping up and down.
"Oh Yukina, your sister, she won't be here for long." Hina said sadly.
"Why moma?" Yukina asked with curious bug ruby eyes.
"She's going to be thrown off the island tomorrow Yukina, like your brother was." Hina felt tears coming on.
"NO! I don't wanna lose my baby sister to! She was just born this morning!" Yukina shouted Hiruiseki falling from her eyes. "I don't want Yuhi to go.... no... Why moma? Why can't she stay?" Yukina said trying to fight back the tears.
"Because Yukina dear, Yuhina is a sign of misfortune, she is a FIRE youkai..." She repeated the elders had said earlier. It really pained her to have to explain to Yukina why her little sister had to be thrown off. "I'm sorry little one..." Hina rubbed her daughters head sympathetically.
"But.... but... I don't want Yuhina to go! I don't want to lose my only little sister!" Yukina started to cry again, she ran into her room as quick as she could. Hina then cried to, a pearl gem fell onto her lap.
Hina then put the infant in a bassinet and let her sleep until tomorrow, the dreaded day when she'd be thrown off. The day when she would most likely die. Hina took the pearl gem she had cried and made it into a necklace like both her son and daughter had gotten at birth.
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The next morning soon came, as much as Hina knew she couldn't help the fact her daughter would be thrown off, she still protested. She kicked and screamed for them to let her stay, but still, they didn't.
Ruri, Hina's best friend, had taken the infant into her arms and walked to the edge of the island. She took the Hiruiseki necklace that was given to her by Hina to give to the child and tucked it inside the blanket.
"Live on, little one. Live and once you are old enough, find your brother and come back to take revenge on this place. I'm sorry you have to be shunned at such a young age, I truly am sorry. But heed my words and return one day to take revenge on this horrid place." Ruri whispered to her.
"Now Ruri." One of the Elders commanded.
"NO!!! RURI! PLEASE DON'T!! LET ME GO WITH HER!! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!" It was to late, Ruri had released the child. And she was falling into Makai below them. Hina cried hysterically.
"Good-bye, Yuhina." Ruri whispered, then walked away.
And I think that's it! Well Minna? This is only the first chapter. This is how my life started, joyful isn't it? Well, R&R to tell me what you think! Please no flames, Koorime hate that!
My story, chapter 1
Shunned at Birth
Normal P.O.V.
It was a cold winter day on the Koorime island, Hina had just had her third child. Although this child was different from any normal Koorime, very different. She had ebony hair, and the deepest blood-red eyes. The elders of the Koorime had expected that the child was different when she was first born. And soon after, they discovered why.... The young girl was named Yuhina, and she, was a fire youkai.
"She must go!" Said one of the Koorime elders.
"Just like her brother before her!" Shouted another.
It had been twelve years since the first forbidden child had been thrown off the edge of the island, and he looked like her, the same ebony hair, and the same lucious ruby eyes. His name was Hiei. And now, it was decided that the same fate would be Yuhina's, she too, would suffer the same as her brother.
"NO! I won't let you! You took my son, and I won't let you take my daughter!" Shouted Hina, enraged now, she couldn't stand to bear the loss of another child. "She's not male, why do you have to take her too?!" She added, Hiruiseki now starting to fall from her eyes.
"We are sorry Hina, but your daughter is also a FIRE youkai. You should know being male wasn't the only sign of misfortune. It has been decided, Yuhina will be thrown off the island by Ruri tomorrow." One of the elders said.
"NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO! NO! YOU CAN'T!!!!" Hina shouted crying hysterically.
"This conversation is over." Another elder said.
Hina was taken away, her only request was to be able to see her daughter before she was thrown off. Her request had been granted soon after. Hina sat on a bed holding the small infant in her arms. The baby had its big ruby eyes opened and was now starring at Hina.
"I'm so sorry I can't protect you from what will happen to you little Yuhina.... I wish I could keep you, you remind me of your brother in a way, what with your hair, your eyes, though your sister has the same eyes as well." She chuckled lightly to herself as the baby cuddled against her in hope of warmth.
"You really are a fire youkai, aren't you?" The baby cooed for her best response. "No matter what you are, Yuhina, I will always love you..." She kissed the baby's forehead and hugged her tightly.
"Moma! Moma!" Shouted a young Yukina, only at the young age of eleven. "Can I see my little sister?" She asked impatiently jumping up and down.
"Oh Yukina, your sister, she won't be here for long." Hina said sadly.
"Why moma?" Yukina asked with curious bug ruby eyes.
"She's going to be thrown off the island tomorrow Yukina, like your brother was." Hina felt tears coming on.
"NO! I don't wanna lose my baby sister to! She was just born this morning!" Yukina shouted Hiruiseki falling from her eyes. "I don't want Yuhi to go.... no... Why moma? Why can't she stay?" Yukina said trying to fight back the tears.
"Because Yukina dear, Yuhina is a sign of misfortune, she is a FIRE youkai..." She repeated the elders had said earlier. It really pained her to have to explain to Yukina why her little sister had to be thrown off. "I'm sorry little one..." Hina rubbed her daughters head sympathetically.
"But.... but... I don't want Yuhina to go! I don't want to lose my only little sister!" Yukina started to cry again, she ran into her room as quick as she could. Hina then cried to, a pearl gem fell onto her lap.
Hina then put the infant in a bassinet and let her sleep until tomorrow, the dreaded day when she'd be thrown off. The day when she would most likely die. Hina took the pearl gem she had cried and made it into a necklace like both her son and daughter had gotten at birth.
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The next morning soon came, as much as Hina knew she couldn't help the fact her daughter would be thrown off, she still protested. She kicked and screamed for them to let her stay, but still, they didn't.
Ruri, Hina's best friend, had taken the infant into her arms and walked to the edge of the island. She took the Hiruiseki necklace that was given to her by Hina to give to the child and tucked it inside the blanket.
"Live on, little one. Live and once you are old enough, find your brother and come back to take revenge on this place. I'm sorry you have to be shunned at such a young age, I truly am sorry. But heed my words and return one day to take revenge on this horrid place." Ruri whispered to her.
"Now Ruri." One of the Elders commanded.
"NO!!! RURI! PLEASE DON'T!! LET ME GO WITH HER!! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!" It was to late, Ruri had released the child. And she was falling into Makai below them. Hina cried hysterically.
"Good-bye, Yuhina." Ruri whispered, then walked away.
And I think that's it! Well Minna? This is only the first chapter. This is how my life started, joyful isn't it? Well, R&R to tell me what you think! Please no flames, Koorime hate that!