ANwell no flames plz for this fan ficX.xbut atleast some advices to make it better,no flames plz . For mature content also.
Hunting Holiday
It was just me,Mina and Rei in a small black jeep owned by Rei's 15th companion on this vacation on the coast of California.Amy was too busy being in her study session for the upcoming exams for her medical school.Lita dropped out of this plan because she needed to take care of the bakery shop with Kevin.Why couldnt my life be more focused on education or why cant my love life be as great as Litas'?Well we were driving on the coast as I said.Whenever we were to rest and stay one place,Rei's companion Daion wouldnt even stay one more night because he's"bored"or"missing out the fun",do whatever he wants,and if we fight him back he comes out that the car is his.I mean this cheap ass paid for 1/4 of the insurance.Rei was being a suck up when we got pissed that time and convinced us to pay 3/4 of the insurance.I mean the damn jeep is black!MORE INSURANCE!Well I got my liscence befor we even left japan.Daion exagerates about me taking the wheel and about how we'll be lost or stuck in the side of the road.He always disapproved me of driving and as always Rei sucks up to Daion,backing him up.She tells me that he knows California more and saying "he's the one" like she did with the others.Me and Mina knew her routine:Pick them up,Make them want ya,Turn em' loose.No matter what,in her routine she HAS to win.So we're in the jeep.Daion driving,Rei calling shot gun always,and me and Mina stuffed in the back.Like every city we pass through they want to rest right as we get in.And you could tell they want to Fuck each other whenever he has his hand on Rei's thigh,almost up to her damn crotch while she goes as close to him when he turns around faces us and lean against him trying to make some contact between his arm and her breast.It happened.So we were driving to a motel him and Rei racing inside while Daion carryin her things to the counter,running to their room,and slamming the door close.
Like always me and Mina would go to our small room.There were 2 twin beds,a small draw,and a balcony you could barely even get into.So we set our things down.We wouldn't even unpack because we knew we were going out as soon as tommorow reaches.We were too tired.Mina wouldnt even complain about it,she'd just act cool and smile.I get burned by Rei and Daion when I disagree with them.Mina has barely talked when Daion came into the picture.He came 5 weeks ago.Met him in a club,and you see Mina setting target and they hit it right off in the dark corner of the room grinding to the beat till they got too horny they started jacking each other in the alley once they got out.Well that's what I think.But really I feel jealous.For Rei to have any guy she wants,be able to not get hurt in relationships.As Mina ran into the bathroom she started taking a shower.I waited and waited till she was done.Once she came out I took my pajamas,ran to the bathroom,and got into the shower before any hot water went out.
The next morning we hear Daion coming into the room telling us to get up and lets go."Haven't you heard of knocking?"I said and he replied with"Well you need to wake up early and I probably wouldn't be doin this shit"
"Well you need ta wait,damn its not like the worlds endin"
The Rei comes through the door blocked by Daion and slipped in"Well Serena,He's right if you woke up early this wouldnt happen"
Mina just sitting there with her clothes in her hand being quiet while I scooted them out and grumble while dressing into new clothes.
"Dont you hate this Mina?Isnt this the worst vacation you've ever been to?"
"Yes your right Serena,Gosh Daion is so fucking annoying!"I was suprised by hearing her talk from what she really felt.
"Well next time let's tell em' to do a group discussion and then start things"
"Right"is all that she replied.
We came out of the motel,back aching because of the matress,and carrying both our luggages in each hand. I tried staying awake trying not to fall asleep and miss out the countryside scenery.With Daion's loud cries and Rei's loud moaning it sounds like 2 cows are goin at eachother.But still it must have been good I thought.Mostly the whole day we were stuck in the car.I felt like I was goin claustrophobic because of the small area I am having.So the whole day I was sitting in that jeep,doing nothing,just listening to my walkman that has a little battery left.First thing to do when I get into another town,By new batterries.It started getting dark,sun setting.We wre on the road for a LONG time.We were we lost?We had no food,no water,not even a phone.Was I supposed to die out here?Well if I get hungry i'd rather die than eat anyone in the group,better way o escape Daion's stupidity.
"Are we lost?"I popped out while Rei was looking at the map and Daion driving.
"Daion honey,I cant tell wether we should keep on going straight or go to a near motel"She said ignoring my question and putting her hand into Daion's shirt.God!What a freakin sex freak!I screamed in my head.In reply Daion was driving on the wheel one hand which meant he was going to turn to an upcoming motel and put his hand around Rei looking like he's cuddling her when he's actually cupping her breast without us looking.Perfect couple!Both into sex!I scream in my head again.So me and Mina get ready to take our luggage,until I heard him say"Well hold on babe,There's an upcoming place im seeing.So for a few minutes more we were driving in a village,we were going around the square and slided into an alley and others.The road was narrow and bumpy but capable to take us to motel.As again the 2 sex-fiends run into the motel.Though as we walked in we were hearing them start asking for a room and having trouble.As I went to the counter it was a little girl around 11,black curly hair,still has babby fat,and is so adorable I want to hug her,she was spanish too.Daion kept on yelling at her for a room in english and the girl looked like she was about to cry.So I yelled"Shut up Daion!Your scaring her!"
"Well what's more important!A girl that can't understand or our rooms!"He says angrily.
"I say the girl!"As soon as I was about to yell at him more I felt a tap on my shoulder.I turned around to see who the hell would bother me trying to protect a little girl and there I stood in shock.
AN:AHHHH!I dont kno if this is good enogh.Well if you leave enough review to help advise me I'd try to write longer.Or leave some compliment.Well I'll try to update more within a week or so.If not just email me if Im making you lose interest in the story.;;;Thank you.Look forward to chapter 2 which will come within a week or 2.