AN: So I just wanted to run the idea of the story I will writing just to get a feel of what people think, for feel there are not enough well written completed imprint stories out there. I could really use a beta and would feedback not just reviews saying good job but suggestions to be always welcome. FYI I am pairing a lot of wolf boys with OC's, I will take some suggestion but just so you know Jacob, Embry, and Seth are already taken but my big question is should I pair Paul up with Rachel or an OC? So please review say you like the idea it gives me a boost to whip out a chapter

Lucy May Atterton, a slightly overweight girl, who finds herself suddenly in the dreary town of Forks, Washington. Having been uprooted from busy Detroit to being shipped across country cause of father being in the military, she finds herself intrigued by the locals. There is the group of overly good looking model like teens with their gold eyes and pale skin at her new high school, the group of buff, tan and tall Native American men from the nearby reservation, the petite blonde haired girl who is whirlwind of everything that she needs in a friend, and lastly the boy her who is slowly stealing her heart away. What is a girl to do? First part in my Imprint series