PROMISED LOVE
Mikan Sakura's heart is with Ruka Nogi who moved away when they were 7. 10 years later, a new student arrived. THE NATSUME HYUUGA. Mikan feels the presence with him strangely interesting. Will she be able to keep her promise to Ruka?
5Bluecrystal5 : I deleted this story because i wanted to edit somethings. Hope you enjoy it! Please comment me what you think about it and give me some suggestions!
Chap 1 beta-reader : Yo PEOPLE!! i'm only beta-ing this chap only. this girl needs to stand on her own feet. So... hope you hav fun reading. she actually has alot of good ideas... P.S: NATSUME IS NOT OOC.
Chapter 1: The Unexpected
My name is Mikan Sakura. I'm 17 years old; my life starts like this, when I was 7 years old:
It all started out on a Saturday morning. The fresh morning rain drops dropped from the high trees down the window of a little girl's window.
I slowly stretched out my arms, hearing the birds chirping outside greeting the bright morning as I yawned. "Man. I'm tired. YAWNS. Me hungry, wonder what's cooking down stairs. Hope mom cooked my fav strawberry pan-pans." As I slowly walked down the stairs I over heard my parents talking.
"It's about time!"
"I know! If Ruka stayed best friends with her any longer I would have take a knife and stab him, they are always in that silly tree house talking and playing DOCTOR!"
"Your right, I am so HAPPY he's moving!"
I was surprised when I heard the word "Moving". Ruka's MOVING?! I shouted inside my mind.
Ruka Nogi is my best friend ever, he lives across the street.
I ran across the street, VERY surprised to see the car is already moving. I mean, you know, I FOUND OUT LAST MINUTE!
"Ruka!"
All I could focus on was Ruka opening the car window and saying: "Mikan! Promise me. Promise me that we will be Best Friends Forever!"
"I will". I WILL! I Will. I will. My heart felt like it got stabbed to a million pieces
As I slowly walked back to hell, I found my mother Dead, on the road's floor. The dark red blood stained through her clothes, and slowly flowing down to the cold dark street. A car had hit her. May I Say, SO WHAT!? She's the cruelest mother ever, the only reason she was chasing me was because I am her slave! Even though I was ignoring her chasing me across the street. Now I feel like Cinderella! Even though I have two of my shoes which aren't glass slippers. I went back home to see my generous father, well he was my generous father until I found him happily calling his 2ND-WIFE (Supermodel) that was in LA! Talking about his move there.
10 years later…….
So I kept my promise for 10 years and he didn't come back……. Today's my 17 birthday. It's true that the time he left me it was my birthday; I guess that's his surprise gift……
I guess this story all started at school:
"We have a new transfer student, meet Natsume."
Not Bad. All I know is that he looked like the hot playboy type, not my type. Some of the girls looked at Brian like he was the new trend; others were blushing like crazy, from the view here, it looks like the sale for hot apples. Those kind of guys again? What else is new?
After I looked again, I was like, WAIT. A .MINUTE! He looks kind of like- NO WAY! That is not Ruka Nogi! He just has a different name, I mean there is no possible way he could come back from all these years! His look is so different, and his hair, his clothes, all of it!
"Natsume, meet your partner in class. Mikan Sakura."
The boy looked towards the brunette girl with two big hazel brown eyes that sparkle which made the perfect windows on her face to match her adorable sweet smile.
As I stood up, Natsume came to my front and shaked my hand. As soon as our hands touch, a flood of memories of me and Ruka's fun times together suddenly appeared in my mind.
"Urm, Hello? Anyone there?"
"Huh? OH! Sorry."
Teacher: "There seem to be no available seats in the front; I have no choice but to put you in the back. Next to Mikan." He sat next to me silently; I don't really want to talk to him anyway. I can't help to see that he's distracted.
After School That Night,
Mikan was home, trying to forget the old times and that boy at school. BUT NO MATTER HOW HARD SHE TRIED, She can never forget. She couldn't, he just reminded her too much of Ruka.
"Why did you leave me? You were the only one who celebrates my birthday with me. " She looked at a friendship bracelet that Ruka had made for her a long time ago for her birthday. It had his name and her name together and a heart between them. It was some strings made out of her favorite colors. Red, Pink, Purple.
I asked myself a lot of questions, I was soooo pissed off. So many questions, but no one here to answer them. I messed up the whole house because I was MAD! I feel like I couldn't breathe. ARGH!
DING DONG.
"DAMIT! WHO THE HELL?! WHO IS THAT?!"
As I open the door, THE Natsume from school is there!
"Er… Ohhhhkay… Is this a bad time? Having trouble finding your brain?" He said chuckling looking at the condition of the house.
Mikan pulled his collar of the shirt and said deadly: "DON'T TELL ANYBODY ABOUT THIS!!"
"Wow. I'm soooo scared." Natsume said sarcastically rolling his eyes.
"Get out. NOW!!" This stupid asshole! I'm already in his condition and yet this idiot-ARGH! But all I want now is his ass out of my house!!
I pushed his back off my front porch. Wait. A. Minute. Is this so called "girl" really pushing me out of the house? Me?! THE NATSUME? Girls push me into the house! Not Out!!
I slammed the door in front of him. I could really burn the house down with the flames I'm giving out of my anger, URGH!! If his feet step just a CENTIMETER into my house, I SWEAR, World War 3 is going to be created.
Next Day at school,
In the morning, I decided to forget about yesterday night. In the hallway, I stopped walking as I notice Natsume is waiting for something ……or someone.
I wonder- Wait, Why do I care? I don't.
"Hey Mikan! Come here!"
While I was talking to my friends, I notice Natsume looking at me.
What is his problem?! Looking at me like that. What? Do it look like I have an extra head growing out of my neck or something.
In class,
From the concentration of listening to the teacher, at the corner of my eye, I saw Natsume, eyeing out the window, looking blankly at the birds passing by and a possible unicorn flying out in the sky in his blank mind. (.'')I mean, his book not even opened to the right page! (Not that moi was worried or concerned or anything.)
Natsume couldn't pay attention.
"TEACHER!! NATSUME'S NOT LOOKING IN HIS BOOK!!" said the stupid- idiotic-"think I'm soooo great"-teacher's pet-goody two shoes, MO-NI-TER, Yuu.
After THE Yuu informed teacher, who looked unpleased. The teacher slowly walked towards Natsume's table with the book in his hand and the marker in the other. Natsume just kept on looking. Teacher was taping his foot impatiently. Still looking. "Natsume. Oh, Natsume. NATSUME!!" Still looking. Man, what the hell is he looking at? An alien ship to land of something??
Natsume didn't care; he just continued to look outside the window. When the teacher was about to scold him, the bell rang. Natsume was the last to go out.
Hmm, What's wrong with him? Wait. MIKAN. You Do Not Care. Oh yes you do. No I don't. Yes you do. No I don't. Who am I talking to anyway?
What is he thinking? Is it about last night? Or maybe his girlfriend or something.
When I was busy thinking about him (Oh my god, that just sounds sooo wrong.), suddenly my friend ran up to me.
"Hey, wake up and go to the lunchroom! I heard they're serving pizza today!! "
Hearing the word PIZZA, my mind went blank and I ran to the lunch room."
YAY!! I got an extra serving of pizza.
I'll just forget about NATSUME HYUUGA.
