Here is my first Fanfiction up finally after much work here it is! (updated
because of spelling!)
A prize for any one who gets to ch 9!! just review or e-mail me with what u thought!
OTS B (Hilda doesn't die!)by Charlie Regan
I do not own ots so don_t sue ;does anyone is this really nessary? This story and it's idea belong to me and me alone you can copy it as long
as it has the by Charlie Regan stated in some where! I sure other people
have done this idea but I haven't read any and I did not rip this idea off
anyone else!!
Being a member of the anti-death Hilda club I have humbly submitted an
alternative Outlaw Star. ############################################################################ ###Ch 1 Ots B(Hilda Doesn_t die)################### ########################################################### SO here goes, first for my fanfiction I need to add a character, so bear with me; my super hero
alter ego, Charlie a.k.a. Goku(yes I am a DBZ fan no my character does not
have weird hair or were orange) His nickname is "The best", he is 6'5 250
lbs of hulking muscle, has dark hair
green eyes, a dark armored leather trench coat jacket; something like a
sewn kevlar
jacket only tougher, a very powerful light shield and dark sunglasses worn
for maximum coolness effect. Also besides being a hacker, he also has
powers similar to Goku in DBZ or Jacky Chan on steroids, depending on which
alliteration makes the most sense to you. He also has a magic sword that
can slice throw anything and a small arsenal. His arsenal includes two big
black
plasma guns that are extremely powerful and shoot both rapidly and single
fire; that hang from his side quick draw style( that's hilt tilted, arms
crossed like matrix or tomb raider), a double barreled silver military pump shotgun, and a large powerful machine gun that hang form his back. Also a X-7 gun,(yes I made that up) an gun that is the embodiment of absolute firepower,
a gun that is outlawed from the universe and has a strange taboo on it
that the person who use it dies ( my character reveals that the true saying
is he dies an unusual death). Finally a cool grappler ship, Draco, it's
shaped like a dragon and it has the firepower of a Space Forces battleship
and the maneuverability and speed similar to the XGP.(Yes I know this is a
bit much but it my story so there!)
Scene;
My character comes in when Hilda come to Blue Heaven and enters the bar
looking for some decent help!
Charlie offers his services telling Hilda that he knows her history and
that she's after the galactic layline but that even his information is
unsure on
what exactly what it. What he does know that it would be worth a lot of
money, also that she'll need his help with all the enemies after her.
Scene; McCoy and his henchmen enter and start bothering Hilda.
Charlie easily takes them out with a quick barrage of kicks and punches.
Charlie says " I may be expensive but I have my uses, I also own my own
ship and your going to need all the support you can get with the pirates
and the McDougal brothers after you!" " So how about it?"
Hilda considers it and says OK and presses Gene to come too once
Charlie leaves because she don't completely trust Charlie.
The rest of the episode continues on as it was first written EXCEPT* for a
little part , if you want to read the original go to
this link http://www.escaflowneonline.com/os/os4.txt "When the Hot Ice
Melts"
*THIS IS THE EXCEPTION YOU WILL FIND IS A BIG ONE! ;-)
Charlie follows Hilda out and meters her at the asteroid with the XGP. He
helps destroy many of the pirates but they overwhelm him and Hilda
The rest continues as the episode" When the Hot Ice Melts", only Charlie
shoots the girl pirate, I forget her name, if she had one. Charlie swoops
down to save Hilda. Gillum says "that a highly dangerous and unorthodox
maneuver" Charlie "Gene you continue on I may not make it out of this dive
but I am going to try anyway!" Hilda " Why are you doing this Charlie?"
Charlie " Just protecting my assist, if you die I don't get paid plus, I
expect get a big bonus after this" Really he's grown found of Hilda.
Charlie " I going to try to use the sun's gravity to catapult out of here"
Charlie's ship computer, Draco "stress levels at 80% and climbing at this
rate the ship will break apart"
Charlie "SHUT UP! We'll make it!" Charlie extends the grappler arm snags
Hilda and pulls her in safely.
Scene; Outside of ship, as ship skims the photosphere of the sun; ships
hull
cracking and bending. Small explosions emit from various parts of the
ship.
Scene; In XGP on view screen; Transmission cracking and ship fading from
view of Gene and the XGP. Charlie "ARRG pull up you @** hole!!" The transmission breaks into static. Jim " Do you think he make it?" Guillum " It's
unlikely however if he did he would be catapulted to the other side of the
galaxy and be unable to return anytime soon!" Jim " What do we do now?"
Gene "We continue on let's go to Blue Heaven; Gillium I have decided on a
name for the ship it will be called the Outlaw Star"
Gene goes to Blue Heaven
End of eppisode Authors note In my story the original Outlaw star continues on . (What's OTS with out Gene?) So between episodes of my script I put links to the original and changed parts where the orginal and my scrip interact (the last three eppisodes) So the next episodes are unchanged in my story it's, "The Beast Girl.Ready to Pounce!" ; http://www.escaflowneonline.com/os/os5.txt],
and "The Beautiful Assassin"; http://www.escaflowneonline.com/os/os6.txt
A prize for any one who gets to ch 9!! just review or e-mail me with what u thought!
OTS B (Hilda doesn't die!)by Charlie Regan
I do not own ots so don_t sue ;does anyone is this really nessary? This story and it's idea belong to me and me alone you can copy it as long
as it has the by Charlie Regan stated in some where! I sure other people
have done this idea but I haven't read any and I did not rip this idea off
anyone else!!
Being a member of the anti-death Hilda club I have humbly submitted an
alternative Outlaw Star. ############################################################################ ###Ch 1 Ots B(Hilda Doesn_t die)################### ########################################################### SO here goes, first for my fanfiction I need to add a character, so bear with me; my super hero
alter ego, Charlie a.k.a. Goku(yes I am a DBZ fan no my character does not
have weird hair or were orange) His nickname is "The best", he is 6'5 250
lbs of hulking muscle, has dark hair
green eyes, a dark armored leather trench coat jacket; something like a
sewn kevlar
jacket only tougher, a very powerful light shield and dark sunglasses worn
for maximum coolness effect. Also besides being a hacker, he also has
powers similar to Goku in DBZ or Jacky Chan on steroids, depending on which
alliteration makes the most sense to you. He also has a magic sword that
can slice throw anything and a small arsenal. His arsenal includes two big
black
plasma guns that are extremely powerful and shoot both rapidly and single
fire; that hang from his side quick draw style( that's hilt tilted, arms
crossed like matrix or tomb raider), a double barreled silver military pump shotgun, and a large powerful machine gun that hang form his back. Also a X-7 gun,(yes I made that up) an gun that is the embodiment of absolute firepower,
a gun that is outlawed from the universe and has a strange taboo on it
that the person who use it dies ( my character reveals that the true saying
is he dies an unusual death). Finally a cool grappler ship, Draco, it's
shaped like a dragon and it has the firepower of a Space Forces battleship
and the maneuverability and speed similar to the XGP.(Yes I know this is a
bit much but it my story so there!)
Scene;
My character comes in when Hilda come to Blue Heaven and enters the bar
looking for some decent help!
Charlie offers his services telling Hilda that he knows her history and
that she's after the galactic layline but that even his information is
unsure on
what exactly what it. What he does know that it would be worth a lot of
money, also that she'll need his help with all the enemies after her.
Scene; McCoy and his henchmen enter and start bothering Hilda.
Charlie easily takes them out with a quick barrage of kicks and punches.
Charlie says " I may be expensive but I have my uses, I also own my own
ship and your going to need all the support you can get with the pirates
and the McDougal brothers after you!" " So how about it?"
Hilda considers it and says OK and presses Gene to come too once
Charlie leaves because she don't completely trust Charlie.
The rest of the episode continues on as it was first written EXCEPT* for a
little part , if you want to read the original go to
this link http://www.escaflowneonline.com/os/os4.txt "When the Hot Ice
Melts"
*THIS IS THE EXCEPTION YOU WILL FIND IS A BIG ONE! ;-)
Charlie follows Hilda out and meters her at the asteroid with the XGP. He
helps destroy many of the pirates but they overwhelm him and Hilda
The rest continues as the episode" When the Hot Ice Melts", only Charlie
shoots the girl pirate, I forget her name, if she had one. Charlie swoops
down to save Hilda. Gillum says "that a highly dangerous and unorthodox
maneuver" Charlie "Gene you continue on I may not make it out of this dive
but I am going to try anyway!" Hilda " Why are you doing this Charlie?"
Charlie " Just protecting my assist, if you die I don't get paid plus, I
expect get a big bonus after this" Really he's grown found of Hilda.
Charlie " I going to try to use the sun's gravity to catapult out of here"
Charlie's ship computer, Draco "stress levels at 80% and climbing at this
rate the ship will break apart"
Charlie "SHUT UP! We'll make it!" Charlie extends the grappler arm snags
Hilda and pulls her in safely.
Scene; Outside of ship, as ship skims the photosphere of the sun; ships
hull
cracking and bending. Small explosions emit from various parts of the
ship.
Scene; In XGP on view screen; Transmission cracking and ship fading from
view of Gene and the XGP. Charlie "ARRG pull up you @** hole!!" The transmission breaks into static. Jim " Do you think he make it?" Guillum " It's
unlikely however if he did he would be catapulted to the other side of the
galaxy and be unable to return anytime soon!" Jim " What do we do now?"
Gene "We continue on let's go to Blue Heaven; Gillium I have decided on a
name for the ship it will be called the Outlaw Star"
Gene goes to Blue Heaven
End of eppisode Authors note In my story the original Outlaw star continues on . (What's OTS with out Gene?) So between episodes of my script I put links to the original and changed parts where the orginal and my scrip interact (the last three eppisodes) So the next episodes are unchanged in my story it's, "The Beast Girl.Ready to Pounce!" ; http://www.escaflowneonline.com/os/os5.txt],
and "The Beautiful Assassin"; http://www.escaflowneonline.com/os/os6.txt