This story continues where the last episode ended (in the privet jet)
* In the privet jet *
Loren: Eddie, I want to ask you something
Eddie: Loren?, what is going on?
Loren: I want you to perform with me at this gig in New York
Kelly: But Loren!?
Loren: No Kelly it is my performance if I want Eddie to perform with me, I want Eddie to perform with me!
Eddie: Loren are you sure you want this? I mean the world just found out I am still alive so don't you think we should wait with performances?
Loren: No I want this and it is my performance
Eddie: If this is what you want, I am okay with it
Loren: Thank you Eddie!
Pilot: we are about to takeoff please buckle yourself and put your seat back to the normal position
-Everybody buckled themselves and the plan was taking off -
* at the airport *
Eddie: look Loren! There is a limo for us to bring us to the hotel.
Loren: just for us two?
Eddie (laughed): yes babe, just for the two of us!
Loren: wow I can't imagine this I want to get in the limo now!
- Loren ran like a little child to the limo pulling Eddie at his arm with her. Eddie was looking helpless but none of the people with them helped him, they where just laughing. -
* in the limo *
- As soon as Eddie and Loren got in the limo Eddie pulled Loren on his lap, and started kissing her. -
Loren: hmmmm, Eddie?
Eddie: shhhhh, what is wrong?
Loren: I am nervous...
Eddie: for what? you are going to do great!
Loren: I am not nervous for that... I am nervous for taking the next step...
Eddie: I don't want you to rush this, I am ready when you are!
Loren (smiled): thank you I knew you would understand!
Loren: But thanks for mentioning the concert now I am nervous about that one too!
Eddie (laughing): you are going to do great babe.
Loren: Eddie?
Eddie: yes babe?
Loren: I love you.
Eddie: back at cha.
-Loren smiled just like the first time she told him too soon she loved him, but now she knows he loves her to. Eddie pulled her closer to him, Loren looked him in the eyes and pulled him into a kiss-
So this is my first story!
i hope you like it!
so what do you guys think? Does Loren need to be ready for the next step? do Leah and Jeremy need to income back in this story? Chloe and Tyler back in the story? Ian back in the story? Adrianna, Phil and Melissa back in the story? Daphne, max, Nora,Ellie and the whole don is killed case in the story please review and tell me!