Prior Author's Note

Given that my previous story was a complete failure, I am attempting to write another write another one about a female Super Saiyan. This time however I will try my best not to make it a Mary Sue character as my last character was. But seriously, if you don't like the way the story is formatted, just tell me how I can make it better instead of just harsh criticism. I want to make this a great story and I plan on writing others, but it can't be done if I just get constant criticism.