HEEEEEELP ME!TT^TT

I wrote two chapters, but my grammar is getting worse and worse. I wanted to ask if I would find someone here willing as ever, if she/he/it(?) wanted to rewrite my story in the correct word order and to correct those mistakes. I would be very grateful, but really do not know how I retaliated .. = D maybe I could use some of my painting skills ... But away with blackmail! XD
if someone find one, at least in part, I was delighted. Please contact me to review ...