Bella's leap

I stood there with my toes on the edge of the cliff

My eyes looked down at the watery abyss

Edward, oh Edward please come back!

Your love could never match up to Jacob Black

Bella don't do it! Please don't do it!

I'm going to jump Edward unless you return

Love can be harsh you need to learn

Bella I'm begging you please don't leave

Then come back to me! Please, oh please!

I am going to show you a trick

Unless you come back

Now take your pick

Let me jump

Let me die

Or come to save me

And I'll never say goodbye

Bella I'm sorry I am not coming back

Then there isn't anyone to lead me to the right track

Don't do it Bella please don't go!

Don't do it Bella! I am telling you no!

You left me alone and cheerless!

Now I am going to show you that I am not fearless!

Then I raised my arms up to the sky

Not even going to say good bye

I got up on my toes and I was ready to leap

I really hope that no one will weep

Then I shifted my weight

I guess this was my fate

Falling so slow

Into the water below

I took my last breath

Before I would go to rest

Good bye Edward

Splash of the water was all I heard before he could even answer

The darkness was pulling me under

What about Jacob? Was all I wondered

Bella swim up! Up to the surface!

No Edward I won't! I like the darkness

My lungs burned as I longed for a breath

I could feel all the pressure pushing down on my chest

Don't give up Bella stay alive!

Air was all that I thrived

But I don't need air

It's not like he cares

After all he did just leave me standing there

I could feel my life slipping away from me

Just a few more seconds now and I would be free

But before I could earn my freedom

An iron bar pulled me up with no idea where it came from

Edward, oh Edward you did come to save me!

My heart was suddenly filled with glee

As I broke surface I could barely breathe

I was thrown on hard ground with a very big heave

Conciseness is slipping away

But that's okay

As long as you are here to stay

Wait, your voice isn't coming from my rescuer

The voice I listened to differed

I guess you didn't come back to save me

I miss you so much can't you see?

You got your wish

I am not dead

Your images keep flashing inside my head

My throat burned

My chest ached

I really thought our love was fate

I really hoped to see your face again

But I never will and now I hope this is the end…

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