Important note: this poem is intended to be read as a conversation between two characters. Regular text is one character and bold is the other.

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He sits down with holy fears

And waters the ground with tears

Humanity takes its root

Underneath his foot

Insignificant in their worthless pursuits

All amounting to nothing

The world claims a dismal shade

Until reckless loves increase

Then cruelty knits a snare

And spreads his baits with care

Come armed with your stakes and torches

To do battle with the shade

But soon learn of your worthless stake

An army composed of nobody

If I am nobody

Then who are you?

I wear the mask of sins and lies

That hides my fangs and shades my eyes

O rose, thou art sick

An invisible worm

That flies in the night

Battered by the howling storm

Mutual fear brings peace

And mercy could no more be

If all were as ambitious as thee

You have been fooled by the fruit of deceit

Ruddy and sweet to eat

But beware the kind and caring façade

For beneath rests a hollow man

The supplication of a fallen man's hand

Under the glow of a fading star

In this desolate, barren land

Means nothing and everything to the abandoned

Poor multifoliate rose

Or death's twilight kingdom

You deign to follow

A hollow man

You, an angel, intrude in this desolate land

We are armed, you come in vain

For now true threat has fled

You do battle for no gain

Not and angel, no not I

We both don masks of sins and lies

To hide our fangs and shade our eyes

With direct eyes to death's other kingdom

See me not as a lost, violent soul

But as a hollow man

Let me be no nearer

In death's dream kingdom

But fear my dangerous façade

As death's shadow draws nearer

Beware the hollow man within

Son of man

You know only

A heap of broken images

Where the dead tree offers no shelter

And the dry stone no water

Regret all you have taken from me

For mercy has a human heart

Pity a human face

My loss is not your gain

In your pride and scorn

You fill tempests with all I mourn

And with jealousies and fears

You fill my pleasant nights with tears

Poor, pale, pitiable form

That I follow in a storm;

Iron tears and groans of lead

Bind around my aching head.

And to the end

Thy cruel mocks,

Annihilate me upon the rocks

Never! No, Never!

I return

For victory I cease to burn.

But leaving thee alone I'll have;

And with regret I watch you fall.

Throughout all Eternity

I forgive you, as you forgive me.

O sick rose

You've found your bed

Of crimson joy;

And your dark secret love

Does thy life destroy.