Hey this is Laura; this disclaimer only appears in this chapter
so if you're trying to find a reason to sue me you'll never find one!
MUAHAHA ok anyways I don't own any of the characters, as much as I like to
pretend Orlando's mine I
Unfortunately don't own him, Johnny or any of the other guys/women. The
story idea is my own and if you steal it well then you'll be forced to walk
the plank matey!
Summary: Will and Elizabeth are happily dating and very much in love, the whole town approves, very much taken with all that Will had gone through to save Elizabeth. But wouldn't you know it, there happens to be two people who are very opposed to this match. And you know it has to be the Governor and especially Commodore Norrington. Will is desperately trying to win over the Governor's favors, but he fears things aren't going so well. Then the Governor has to face a choice, and decide once and for all where his heart lays.
And yes, I know that summary probably wasn't very good, I just hope you can please at least try my story, who knows, you might actually like it! Please review if all possible, if you're a writer you know how much they help! If you're not a writer, well just take my word on it and know it makes me feel really good!
Also I was alittle nervous at making the Governor and Commodore Norrington, well not so nice in this story, but I needed an antagonist. For all you Norrington lovers, I truly do think his heart was in the right place when he gave up Elizabeth to Will and I admire him as a character. Please don't flame me.
The rating's PG so it gives me room to feel a little freer, there's a big possibility this story will stay G the whole way, but I know I could never write to a PG-13 level, so this gives me freedom to write what I feel without worrying about the rating.
OK one last note and I promise to let you go! I just want to note that this story isn't all going to be fluff (though that's all I mostly write, lol) I have a plotline and I am going to try my best to finish this story. O yeah one more thing, I'm trying my best with the grammar and spelling, I'm not the best typer and schools been out! Anyways just try and skip over something if it seems wrong or feel free to mention it in a review although please be nice, I really don't like flamers. I hope you guys like it
Over and out,
-Laura-
Will Turner watched in horror as he saw his beloved Elizabeth in the Commodore's arms. He wanted to turn away, to end it all but he couldn't pull his gaze away from the awful sight in front of him. Commodore Norrington then suddenly reached down and pulled Elizabeth to him, kissing her, touching her. Will yelled in agony and tried to run toward the two people standing in front of him, his fist had an appointment with the Commodore's face, but Will found he couldn't move. Then with a laugh that chilled him to the very core, the Commodore turned into Captain Barbossa and began to strangle Elizabeth.
"Save me Will!" Elizabeth cried.
Will ran with all his strength, but Elizabeth kept getting farther and farther away. Captain Barbossa's chilling laugh echoed in his mind as he watched him torment his love..
"NO!!!!!! ELIZABETH!!!!!!!" William Turner sat straight up in bed. His long brown hair was disheveled and he deep brown eyes had a terrified look in them.
Much against the Governor's protests, Elizabeth had convinced her father to let Will stay in the spare guest bedroom of the mansion, so he wouldn't have to sleep in the small, cramped quarters above the blacksmith's. So with the Governor's room to his left, and Elizabeth's room to his right, his yells awoke them both.
Elizabeth woke with a start from a very pleasant dream she was having, involving her and Will, when she heard Will shout her name. Bypassing her robe and dressed in only her white nightgown, Elizabeth sprinted out of bed and ran into Will's room.
"Will! Are you OK? What happened?"
Just then the Governor ran in, his trademark wig off, and his robe billowing around him. "Dear God boy! What's the matter?"
Will, having finally gathered that everything was a dream, looked up from Elizabeth's tender gaze, to the Governor's stern look.
"I..I..had a nightmare, I guess Sir." Will said, realization dawning on him and the horrible embarrassment of it all crushing him like a wave. The Governor gave him an icy glare and stalked out of the room.
Elizabeth put her hand on her boyfriend's burning cheek. Will looked at her, melting at her touch. "My dream.. It was so real, I was so scared. I would die if I lost you Elizabeth." Will said, his gentle hands caressing her face.
"Can you tell me about it Will?" Elizabeth asked softly. Will nodded and motioned for her to lay down. She did, and snuggled up against his warm chest. It felt nice to comfort him for a change; he was always so brave. Whenever she was scared or nervous, Will always had the right thing to say, the right way to make her feel better. Well now she was determined to make him smile.
Will looked at her with love in his eyes, and told her about the Commodore and Captain Barbossa. When he got to the part about her being strangled, he choked a little bit and hugged her tighter, almost to ensure she was still there. When he finished, Elizabeth looked into his eyes by the glow of the candle by his bed, and saw the scared little boy she had first seen when he was brought on her father's ship.
"Oh Will!" She wrapped her arms around him and ran her fingers through his dark tresses. They held each other for a long time, both content to stay in the other's arms forever.
"Elizabeth?" Will asked softly.
"Yes Will?"
"What can I do to get your father to approve of me?" Will sat up, his face in a puzzled look, his eyes questioning.
"Will, he does approve of you.." Elizabeth began.
"Oh Liz," He said, using his pet name for her. "You don't have to act like he does, I know he wishes you had married the Commodore, and he's probably entirely right in thinking that.. I know being a blacksmith isn't a very worthy job."
"Will, it IS a worthy job. And there's no way I would marry the Commodore. Not with you around. You blow the Commodore away. You sir," She pointed at Will, "happen to be the most wonderful guy in the world and I love you." To prove her point, Elizabeth kissed his lips gently, before snuggling closer to him and closing her eyes.
"Thank you so much Elizabeth," Will murmured softly as sleep engulfed him.
***
The Governor paced around in his room. He could hear snatches of conversation through the thin walls so he knew his daughter hadn't left the blacksmith's room yet. He listened again. There was no more sound and he hadn't heard the door next to his open.
"Damn that fool boy!" The Governor growled softly. "Probably didn't let Elizabeth leave him. He better not try anything."
He had had so many high hopes for the Commodore's and Elizabeth's wedding. That Turner boy ruined it all. He had always known that Will was infatuated with Elizabeth, you could see it in the tender way in which he looked at her and his gentle speech toward her, but never in his wildest dreams had he suspected that she felt the same way! It was tolerable, Will's affection for his daughter, when he had not voiced his love for her to her. Before the whole pirate episode, it was actually sort of sweet, the poor boy's love for someone so out of his status. He had actually been fond of the boy, sometimes pulling strings to make sure he got a job as a blacksmith's apprentice, got a decent education, and so such. It was him who had convinced the Commodore to allow him clemency. But that was before he had found out the deep affections Elizabeth and Will had for each other. He had granted Elizabeth's wish for Will to stay in his house only because he could not resist his daughter when she begged. She and her mother. His wife had been the only woman who could change his mind when he had it set, and when Elizabeth was born, she took over that role.
Sighing, Governor Swann decided he needed some sleep. He walked out of his room and gently opened Will's door. As he had suspected, Elizabeth had not left. She was curled up in the blacksmith's arms, with her head against his chest and his arm wrapped protectively around her waist.
The Governor stared at the pair for a second before silently turning back to his own quarters.
Ok guys, what did you think? Please review!
Summary: Will and Elizabeth are happily dating and very much in love, the whole town approves, very much taken with all that Will had gone through to save Elizabeth. But wouldn't you know it, there happens to be two people who are very opposed to this match. And you know it has to be the Governor and especially Commodore Norrington. Will is desperately trying to win over the Governor's favors, but he fears things aren't going so well. Then the Governor has to face a choice, and decide once and for all where his heart lays.
And yes, I know that summary probably wasn't very good, I just hope you can please at least try my story, who knows, you might actually like it! Please review if all possible, if you're a writer you know how much they help! If you're not a writer, well just take my word on it and know it makes me feel really good!
Also I was alittle nervous at making the Governor and Commodore Norrington, well not so nice in this story, but I needed an antagonist. For all you Norrington lovers, I truly do think his heart was in the right place when he gave up Elizabeth to Will and I admire him as a character. Please don't flame me.
The rating's PG so it gives me room to feel a little freer, there's a big possibility this story will stay G the whole way, but I know I could never write to a PG-13 level, so this gives me freedom to write what I feel without worrying about the rating.
OK one last note and I promise to let you go! I just want to note that this story isn't all going to be fluff (though that's all I mostly write, lol) I have a plotline and I am going to try my best to finish this story. O yeah one more thing, I'm trying my best with the grammar and spelling, I'm not the best typer and schools been out! Anyways just try and skip over something if it seems wrong or feel free to mention it in a review although please be nice, I really don't like flamers. I hope you guys like it
Over and out,
-Laura-
Will Turner watched in horror as he saw his beloved Elizabeth in the Commodore's arms. He wanted to turn away, to end it all but he couldn't pull his gaze away from the awful sight in front of him. Commodore Norrington then suddenly reached down and pulled Elizabeth to him, kissing her, touching her. Will yelled in agony and tried to run toward the two people standing in front of him, his fist had an appointment with the Commodore's face, but Will found he couldn't move. Then with a laugh that chilled him to the very core, the Commodore turned into Captain Barbossa and began to strangle Elizabeth.
"Save me Will!" Elizabeth cried.
Will ran with all his strength, but Elizabeth kept getting farther and farther away. Captain Barbossa's chilling laugh echoed in his mind as he watched him torment his love..
"NO!!!!!! ELIZABETH!!!!!!!" William Turner sat straight up in bed. His long brown hair was disheveled and he deep brown eyes had a terrified look in them.
Much against the Governor's protests, Elizabeth had convinced her father to let Will stay in the spare guest bedroom of the mansion, so he wouldn't have to sleep in the small, cramped quarters above the blacksmith's. So with the Governor's room to his left, and Elizabeth's room to his right, his yells awoke them both.
Elizabeth woke with a start from a very pleasant dream she was having, involving her and Will, when she heard Will shout her name. Bypassing her robe and dressed in only her white nightgown, Elizabeth sprinted out of bed and ran into Will's room.
"Will! Are you OK? What happened?"
Just then the Governor ran in, his trademark wig off, and his robe billowing around him. "Dear God boy! What's the matter?"
Will, having finally gathered that everything was a dream, looked up from Elizabeth's tender gaze, to the Governor's stern look.
"I..I..had a nightmare, I guess Sir." Will said, realization dawning on him and the horrible embarrassment of it all crushing him like a wave. The Governor gave him an icy glare and stalked out of the room.
Elizabeth put her hand on her boyfriend's burning cheek. Will looked at her, melting at her touch. "My dream.. It was so real, I was so scared. I would die if I lost you Elizabeth." Will said, his gentle hands caressing her face.
"Can you tell me about it Will?" Elizabeth asked softly. Will nodded and motioned for her to lay down. She did, and snuggled up against his warm chest. It felt nice to comfort him for a change; he was always so brave. Whenever she was scared or nervous, Will always had the right thing to say, the right way to make her feel better. Well now she was determined to make him smile.
Will looked at her with love in his eyes, and told her about the Commodore and Captain Barbossa. When he got to the part about her being strangled, he choked a little bit and hugged her tighter, almost to ensure she was still there. When he finished, Elizabeth looked into his eyes by the glow of the candle by his bed, and saw the scared little boy she had first seen when he was brought on her father's ship.
"Oh Will!" She wrapped her arms around him and ran her fingers through his dark tresses. They held each other for a long time, both content to stay in the other's arms forever.
"Elizabeth?" Will asked softly.
"Yes Will?"
"What can I do to get your father to approve of me?" Will sat up, his face in a puzzled look, his eyes questioning.
"Will, he does approve of you.." Elizabeth began.
"Oh Liz," He said, using his pet name for her. "You don't have to act like he does, I know he wishes you had married the Commodore, and he's probably entirely right in thinking that.. I know being a blacksmith isn't a very worthy job."
"Will, it IS a worthy job. And there's no way I would marry the Commodore. Not with you around. You blow the Commodore away. You sir," She pointed at Will, "happen to be the most wonderful guy in the world and I love you." To prove her point, Elizabeth kissed his lips gently, before snuggling closer to him and closing her eyes.
"Thank you so much Elizabeth," Will murmured softly as sleep engulfed him.
***
The Governor paced around in his room. He could hear snatches of conversation through the thin walls so he knew his daughter hadn't left the blacksmith's room yet. He listened again. There was no more sound and he hadn't heard the door next to his open.
"Damn that fool boy!" The Governor growled softly. "Probably didn't let Elizabeth leave him. He better not try anything."
He had had so many high hopes for the Commodore's and Elizabeth's wedding. That Turner boy ruined it all. He had always known that Will was infatuated with Elizabeth, you could see it in the tender way in which he looked at her and his gentle speech toward her, but never in his wildest dreams had he suspected that she felt the same way! It was tolerable, Will's affection for his daughter, when he had not voiced his love for her to her. Before the whole pirate episode, it was actually sort of sweet, the poor boy's love for someone so out of his status. He had actually been fond of the boy, sometimes pulling strings to make sure he got a job as a blacksmith's apprentice, got a decent education, and so such. It was him who had convinced the Commodore to allow him clemency. But that was before he had found out the deep affections Elizabeth and Will had for each other. He had granted Elizabeth's wish for Will to stay in his house only because he could not resist his daughter when she begged. She and her mother. His wife had been the only woman who could change his mind when he had it set, and when Elizabeth was born, she took over that role.
Sighing, Governor Swann decided he needed some sleep. He walked out of his room and gently opened Will's door. As he had suspected, Elizabeth had not left. She was curled up in the blacksmith's arms, with her head against his chest and his arm wrapped protectively around her waist.
The Governor stared at the pair for a second before silently turning back to his own quarters.
Ok guys, what did you think? Please review!