HI my name is Bonnie, I'm 11 years old, and this is my first story ever on Fanfic!

I hope you like it!

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Sam was in the hospital sitting next to her brother who had gotten cancer. She had been called from the hospital to come and see him and say goodbye too him. She had been there for two hours already she had been crying half the time. She was still crying when General O'Neill came in.

"I came as soon as I heard about him. Is he going to be ok? They didn't tell me much about his condition or his problem." Jack said as he walked over to her and placed his hand on her shoulder.

Colonel Carter motioned to go out of the room and then said, "He has cancer, and the doctors say he will die soon it could be minutes it could be days."

"God! Carter, I'm sorry…"

Just then, a nurse and doctor came up to them and said to colonel Carter

"Miss Carter? You're his children's legal guardian now," the nurse said.

"You are there closest relation." The doctor and nurse ran the rest of the way down the hall in a white frenzy.

"What about his wife?" Jack asked confused.

"She died, four month's ago, car accident." Carter said.

"Why didn't you tell me Carter?" Jack asked.

"Since when do I tell you everything?" she snapped. "Sorry sir."

"symbiote?" Jack asked as he let out a sigh.

"No." Carter said as she shook her head.

"Sure?"

"Yes."

"Positive?"

"I thought about it but the gate is over 800miles away and he could die any second. Plus we don't know if they need a host right now." She said as she looked down at her dying brother.

"Fine that won't work we can only cross our fingers and wait." Jack said.

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