Hey guys, this is an retry on one of my fanfics... Enjoy!


Today is the day I would get my dream job. To be a detective. Well this is the close as I get at the age of 11. Okay, everyone must be wondering... an 11-year-old becoming a detective? Well, the United Nations agreed that every child at the age of 11 must fill a form applying for a job and anything that child wants to be and if the kid stays in the same job for four years you can't change it, but you get a guaranteed job there. I'm one of the fist bundle of kids to get their jobs.

Today is also the last day of the 5th grade. We were, at the moment, sitting in the auditorium waiting for our principal, Mr. Smith. When he arrived, we weren't surprised to find him out of breath. He was a bald man, with an asian look to his face and voice. The whispering went silent as he did as involuntary cough into the mic.

"Welcome students, as you know you will all be departing for your summer to your chosen jobs. Now I will begin with the actors, you may pick up your parcel from Mr. Simons" Said teacher smiled from his place at the end of the stairs near the stage. "Abby Mores, Caton Lutes and Alex Gibbs." This went on until it was the detectives turn. When my name was called, I got up and walked towards Mr. Simons who smiled and said "See you soon, Rachel." I smiled, said thank you and went home.


Hope you liked it... and please no flames!