this is my first ever story written on here. what do you think? (be nice) should i carry on?

"Move out my way! Move" shouted a man as he ran thought the street of sun hill, London. The man was small, but he was fast. He had green eyes brown short hair lot's of stubble on his chin. He wore a pair of blue dirty jeans, a black jumper, ordinary trainers and a bag on this back.

Suddenly an other man was running with him. He had brown hair, brown eye, he wore a blue shirt brown suit and a long light brown over coat and Converse All Stars on his feet."hello my name is the Doctor." said man who just appeared "I couldn't not notice that your running" the other man was in shock with the friendliness the Doctor showed. "Are…… you………the………… police?" said the man, he was getting out of breathe.

"No! am the Doctor. Why would I be the police?" the doctor replied " Also I couldn't not notice that your in a hurry?"

"Why… are……you……… chasing………… me?" the man said getting more out of breathe.

"No. not chasing you. Just wondering why your in a hurry. What's your name?" said the doctor he didn't seem out of breathe.

"Ben Hardy" said the man

"Nice meet you Ben Hardy. Why are you in a hurry? It's a lovely day isn't?". The Doctor and Ben were still running.

" Am…… err…… late. ……… need ……… to……… catch……… boat" The Doctor stopped as Ben said this.

"Oh. Really. That's strange." Ben didn't stop to listen to the doctor so the doctor started to run to catch up "well, you see, when I see someone running, it's normally a bad thing, so thought you might need some assistance, I don't suppose you seen a powitcheyeopear have you?"

"A what?"

"It's a small fury looking elephant with orange eye's called a powitcheyeopear very dangerous in the right hands"

" what? No I haven't seem one. are you ok? i mean you havent come from a mental home have you? Can you see a big fishing boat?" the two men were running by the docks

"thank for asking am fine, are you ok? is that your boat there" the doctor pointed.

"yes! Yes! Am fantastic doc" Ben jumped in the boat and the engine started and the boat started to move "doc! Know that poweyeear thing if I see one I'll make sure it safe" he said with a laugh and with a wave he was gone.

well, he was nice, now back to business. Where would a powitcheyeopere go the doctor thought to himself as he was looking in the themes.