Was reading LotF for School, and it disturbed me so much I had writer's block. So the obvious solution was to write a poem about it. Basically a ballad about the plot and the stuff that happens. Major spoil alert here obviously, but you might not understand it until you actually read it. The ending was kind of rushed, as I have to give back the book tomorrow so I apologize.
It
happened too fast-
For the boys that is.
Falling with crimson
metal,
Only to meet
(Meet and destroy)
Emerald
forest
Leaving a long scar
Telling of the disaster.
Fair
hair and golden tan
Greasy windbreaker,
glimmering specs
"I
don't care as long as
they don't call me
Piggy."
A
mistake,
that would cost him his life.
"No
grownups?"
…
"No grownups!"
The conch
called others
Like a sliver of sunset
on the civilization they
knew.
From the forest they came,
Smeared in berry juice
and
stains.
The
beach
entertained evil.
A black shadow;
Choir boys
Following
a flame of fury.
"Where's the man with the trumpet?"
Peering
into darkness.
The flame saw a shock of
gold sun.
"No
man." it said.
"Only me."
(Until the end)
The
meeting was held.
The conch, uniting them,
Temporarily.
A
leader was chosen
And the flame of anger
Was fanned.
But
then the question;
Was it an island?
Three went to look
The
flame, the sun,
And the cooling dark water
Between them.
Finally,
atop a mountain
"This belongs to us."
A sense of
power
And unity
Until they climbed back down.
It was
questioned
"What about the beastie?"
It was
decided
"We'll build a signal fire!"
Off they
rushed.
So excited, yet
"Like a crowd of kids."
Flames
consumed
All too well
"You got your small fire!"
Indeed
it was small
For a blaze.
Epiphany happened
But it was too
late
The one with the mark
Was gone.
The
beastie
forgotten
For now
In
the heat of the jungle
The flame spread.
Trying to make up
for
his past error
("I was choosing a spot!")
Tracking
his prey-
Pig
(at least for the moment)
Back
on the beach
A clash of priorities
Huts vs.
Hunting
Civilization vs.
Savages
Neither won.
(Or would
win)
Like salt and sugar
So different
Yet so
tantalizing
Together.
Miles apart.
Time
passed
How much,
No one knew.
Nor did they care.
Not
anymore.
Little'uns played,
Ruled,
Hurt,
And one helped
break
taboos of society.
(Another would pay)
The flame wore
the mask
That could never wash off
Red and white clay
To
hide from the pigs.
Or was it from himself?
Despair
ensued
A dim hope of rescue
On the horizon
Was quelled;
Like
the dead fire on the mountain.
So hard did he run,
But the sun
could not run fast enough
And rescue was replaced
With a
hunter's chant.
"Kill the pig!"
"Cut her
throat!"
"Spill her blood!"
The flame's desire
quenched.
Running rampant,
Until he reached the fire.
The
fire he was meant to keep ablaze.
"You
let the fire go out."
"There was a ship!"
"We
could have gone home!"
The anger fell on deaf ears.
He was
too full of glory
And blood-lust.
"There I apologized."
A
sigh escaped the crowd.
A fire was built.
The meat was
cooked.
And power was exerted
On both pigs.
An
assembly was held,
Too late to decide.
The beast came back.
A
snake,
A squid,
Them?
"What's the dirtiest thing there
is?"
As laughter ensued, the poor dark water
Withdrew into
himself
And failed to save them all.
A ghost.
That's what
the beast was.
They'd kill it.
"Bullocks to the
rules!"
"We hunt!"
Their society fell apart
And
alliances were gone
Poor Percival Wemys Madison
Forgot his
name.
A
sign came that night.
They weren't alone in anarchy.
The
"monster" from the air,
Descended upon the island.
The
parachute of it's once humanity
Trapping it.
The twins saw
it.
Saw the billowing and the movement.
They ran.
Didn't
stop to think it through.
It was too late.
Once
more assembly.
A chaotic meeting,
But it was decided.
They'd
hunt for the beast.
Look in the one place
No one explored.
But
of course,
It wasn't there.
The
sun rose the next morning.
A shock of gold hair shook
He hadn't
been clean in so long,
Why think about it now?
But he did.
He
cared.
And he cared about the hunt
that followed
"I hit
him!"
And he joined in the ceremony,
Afraid of
himself.
"Just a game."
If only...
The
search toiled on.
Once more,
the flame and the sun
Clashed.
No
cooling water to divert them.
He'd gone back to help the poor
Pig.
As the air boiled,
It was brought to light.
"Why
do you hate me?"
But there was no answer.
Up
and around they went
No sign of the beast
Finally, they had
decided
To visit the mountain.
The flame, the sun and
the
Taboo-breaker.
(Breaking much more than that)
Saw, and
Ran.
The beast was there
Still trapped by the wind's
torment.
And children's fear.
Once
more an assembly.
But it did not assemble
"I'm not going
to play any longer."
"Not with you."
The fire's
hot tears
Only fueled his anger
Off he went.
To hunt
To
live
As he saw fit.
As
the remainder of
Civilization
Tried to save themselves
The
hunters went on a rampage
Targeting the large sow.
They
attacked
Assaulted,
Raped
The pig of her life.
"Right
up her ass!"
When their violent ecstasy
Subsided,
The
new chief spoke
"Sharpen a stick at both ends."
A
gift to the beast.
The head of the pig.
Soon adorned with
flies.
The hunters left it that way,
But it was not alone.
A
small puddle of dark water
Stood watching in the shadows.
The
flies came to worship
To gorge on the offerings
While their
Lord reigned.
"Silly little boy." it grunted.
"Aren't
you just a silly little boy?"
But this silly
boy
Understood.
The Lord of the Flies was here
"-And
I'm the Beast"
"I'm part of you."
"-so
don't try to escape!"
He didn't.
Just sat there
Staring
at the evil
That was in them all.
The Lord became angry
"You're
not wanted."
Oh how he knew that.
He knew too much.
As
the Lord of the Flies
Grew
He was swallowed into it's
darkness
(Soon to be forever)
Upon
awakening
The dark puddle
Got a splash of cold water
"What
else is there to do?"
Toiling up the mountain
He finally
met
The beast
Or what was left of it.
The stench of
decay
And corruption
Brought him to his knees.
Slowly
reaching for the cloth
He freed the parachute
From the
wind
Setting the corpse
To a tired rest.
Staggering down the
mountain
To tell the others.
He had forgotten
The Lord of
the Flies
"-you'll only meet me down there."
Ignorant
of the epiphany in the woods
The boys on the beach
were
divided.
Some desperately flamed
The dying signal
fire
Others:
"Me and my hunters are having a feast!"
And
who could resist the thought
Of meat
So they all went.
Divided
at first
Then united
By the sizzling, succulent
Meat.
Tensions
rose
Power was questioned
And a hunter's dance
Began.
"Kill
the beast!"
"Cut his throat"
"Spill his
blood!"
The savages chanted
Waiting
For a beast
Or
anyone.
Soon
the dark water
Came flowing down the mountain
Too late
To
save himself.
In an act of frenzy,
Spears flew,
The poet
fell,
And the "beast"
Was dead.
Dark cool
water
Mixing with ocean brine.
The
next morning
"Are you the only one left?"
"Nobody
else?"
The poor pig
The shock of blond hair
Sat
glumly.
A word hanging in the air,
Dripping with
knowledge.
"Murder."
"It was an accident!"
But
someone still paid.
The
savages were numb
They had only wounded
The beast
No one
else.
Coming back from the hunt,
"What'll we use for
lighting the fire?"
Only for food
(Rescue long forgotten)
Back
on the beach
At night
The raid happened.
Blows
exchanged
Power shown.
"I thought they wanted
The
conch."
That symbol of power
Was useless now.
But the
poor pig's glasses
Were not.
The
final show of power,
Came that day.
The rest of
civilization
Would confront the savages
(Yet why confront when
you can turn?)
"No paint!"
"-we want
smoke."
Why?
He tried to remember
Could barely.
The
savagery he detested
Was eating his brain.
Up
the mountain they climbed
"I'm calling an assembly"
The
savages scoffed
The taboo-breaker
Threw stones
(for
now)
Then the flame appeared
Engaged the sun in a fight.
"Don't
you understand?"
"You painted fools?"
But they
were beyond human.
And he was trapped.
Suddenly
the earth jolted
Loosed it's mighty fury
The taboo-breaker
Was
finally breaking
Something else.
The rock hit.
The conch
shattered.
The spectacles
(Had he still had
them)
Destroyed
Along with their owner.
As
horror engulfed all.
The flame rose.
"That's what you'll
get!"
A spear thrown
Ripped through flesh
Screaming
through
The sun's skin.
He ran.
The twins stayed
The
taboo-breaker
(Now a back-breaker)
Nearly broke the code of
power.
And descended upon them.
Reality
blurred now
As the one with the gold hair
Tried to save
himself.
His friends;
Dead,
Taken by savages.
"-they
made us."
"They hurt us."
"They're going to
hunt-"
"-You."
"Roger sharpened a stick at
both ends."
The
sun had met
The Lord of the Flies.
Met him in the jungle.
Where
his skull gleamed wickedly.
The sun had beaten him.
Broken
him.
Yet he was still there
Worse than before.
The
hunt was on
Run
Hide
Run
But it was no use.
The
savagery consumed him
Eventually
Attack!
The island was on
fire
The flame finally
Had spread too far.
(Such a nice
signal fire!)
Run
Faster
They
were gaining on him.
And suddenly
It didn't matter
anymore.
"Hullo."
"Are there any
adults?"
"Having a war or something?"
The rest
of the boys were emerging
So normal yet so strange
To
society
Poor Percival Wemys Madison
No longer knew who he was.
"Who's
the boss here?"
"I am."
The sun finally had
won.
"I should have thought-"
"-pack of
boys-"
"-been able to put on a better show-"
"Like
Coral Island."
But it was too late for these thoughts
And
as the boys began to cry
Realizing their loss
of humanity
The
officer couldn't
Understand.
Faces
are washed,
Yet the clay was hard.
Hands were cleaned,
Yet
the blood stained.
Civilization welcomed them
back.
But they
were too far away
to notice.
