ok this is my first Sci-fi stroy please comment! I did this for an English essay and changed the characters names hope you enjoy!
As I looked out I could see that the levitating car I was sitting in was fast approaching my new school, its grounds a perfect picture of loveliness with lush green grass and trees. This shook me. But what unnerved me most was the students. Shouldn't they be running around playing football or chatting? I thought to myself. These students were silent as mice, their moving appeared to be well thought through before they took even a single step. I looked to the driver to see if he noticed this strange behaviour. Apparently not, for his beady eyes were just as fixed on the road as they were when my Father bundled me into the car. He pulled into the parking lot and moved round to help me out. I was surprised that he made it because I was sure his stumpy legs would not hold up his weight.
'Miss, this is Black Ridge Academy.' He said when he opened the car's titanium door and handed me my little brown trunk. He quickly went back into the car and sped off. I approached the school with caution as the white walls looked uninviting and reminded me of a hospital. I had to pass under a towering gate that easily reached twice the height of a grown man. It spooked me when it opened without me even having to touch it, I passed through and it slammed shut with a crack so loud it could wake the dead. Oh and here comes my absolute fascination with horror stories coming out. Wait why would an ordinary school need such a gate? Have they been put there to protect these future geniuses or to keep them in? I thought. I walked up to the front door which opened before me and I walked through.
Oh my gosh! The white even crept inside! I stood in the pristine clean reception and looked around. The room was completely blank apart from a window that had a sign that said all visitors please ring bell. Well I'm not really a visitor but I don't know what else to do. Then I rang the bell. The window slid open with a whoosh to reveal a metal suit. I saw many buttons and gears sticking out of it but somehow it managed to resemble a human shape.
"How can I help you?" it asked in a grinding metallic voice that seemed that it had not spoken in years.
"Um... I'm new I don't know where I'm supposed to go."
"Go down the corridor on the left, first door on the right is the headmaster's office knock twice. Goodbye." The machine said it so fast I almost missed my instructions. The window whooshed shut again before I had a chance to ask what corridor. I looked to find this corridor. The out line of a rectangle, blue in colour, shinned out of the white hospital like wall to my left. The wall then seemed to melt away and reveal a corridor, I hurried through not wanting to have to ring the bell again or get stuck halfway through the wall and get stuck. I followed the robots instructions and walked into a room the same white as the reception at the call of 'enter'.
"Ah Miss Hyuga Hinata! Welcome to Black Ridge Academy for Young Minds." A man greeted me from behind a light brown desk that looked like it came straight f of an IKEA catalogue. "I am Dr Orochimaru, but you must refer to me as Headmaster Orochimaru." I looked him over. He wore a flowing metallic robe, visor glasses and the newly invented head chip poked delicately out from behind his ear.
"I am very sorry but I don't have time to show you round as I'll just give you this screen and it will explain very thing." He then handed me said screen and gently pushed me into the hall. I scanned through the information that would get me through the first day and found that to get to my dorm I just had to walk into one of the many booths that lined the walls and press the button labelled dorms. When I climbed in the florescent lights turned green, which I'd read meant in use, and a button panel glided out towards me. The dorms button was blue so I tentatively pressed it. I let out a small squeal at the air that rushed passed me and the blinding flash that followed. I shakily emerged form the booth; I was not doing that again.
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