Shifting sensation
His stomps sauntered the sand while he was snuggling a steely stone between his palms.
The sallow sunrays sparkled on the surface of the sea and he sighed as he sullenly stared at the sky.
The stone shuddered.
He sensed his salad days were slipping away as he spat. He slung the stone like a sapless sensation just skipped his soul. He could see the swirl of it but he shushed the strange shortage.
A spic and span sacrament was stable as he stared at her sanguine hair. A smile with swaying hands and some sublime syllables: Stay with me… SEMPITERNAL!
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Metamorphosis
Tsukimori Len was strolling on the beach while he glanced at the livid sunrays. His right palm was occupied with a small, chilly stone while his left arm was swinging together with Kahoko's hand.
The stone was beating between his fingers like his whole life was secured in the tiny creature. But he didn't hesitate to leave it behind and with a brisk movement, he threw the stone away. With an echo, it swirled in the water then evanesced from Len sight, just like from his heart.
He turned his gaze to the girl next to him and smiled at her. Her strawberry hair was dancing along with the wind and the transparent hallo was emblazoned with golden rays.
Their hands were still swaying when he stated his new promise to the woman, he loved the most: Please, stay with me forever!
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This story is really short. Yeah, the shortest fiction that I've ever written. But we had a discussion on facebook with other writers and we took up a challenge for writing 100 words in a specific topic. So here is the result.
In the first version, I tried to play with the letter S and struggled to write an alliteration. As you can see I couldn't do all words in S (for example tell me a synonym for hand/palm starting with S or simply I had to use some conjunctions, articles or pronouns.)
If you don't understand completely the first version, just read the second which is more detailed but it's more than 100 words (like 140 words).
If you don't know some of my vocabulary, don't hesitate to ask me.
The whole story is a metaphor about Len's previous lifestyle as a cold, emotionless person, represented by the stone but as we can see, he is with Kahoko and he throws the stone away :P
Please, I really need you to leave a review because this was the first time I wrote something short (usually I write 4000 words in a chapter so this was really challenging for me... diminish my thoughts and ideas was really hard because I had too much in mind).
SO pleaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeee review!
Thanks for reading! I appreciate it!