Hey! This is my first fan fiction and im really excited about it! Im sorry if it's really bad but this idea just came to my head (: Please review so I know what you think, and so I can have any idea's to make my story better :D
Sadly I don't own twilight it belongs to the amazing Stephanie Meyer.
Chapter one – Crash
Bella POV
I couldn't wait. Only 1 hour left. Only 60 minuets left. Only 3600 seconds left. In till Edward, came home from his 'camping trip' with the boys. I was, as Alice said, his home coming present. I hoped he had a brilliant time but I didn't like leaving him, who wouldn't if you had perfection for a boyfriend?
He had been gone for 3 days. The 3 longest days of my life. Even though Alice had been keeping me company 24/7 at a 'sleepover'. I found the idea of a sleepover quite amusing because Alice couldn't sleep, so she made the weekend torture for me buy shopping, shopping and more shopping. I never bought so much stuff in my life, I had no idea how she did it every week. She was mad! But that's why I love her.
She just left. Alice was going to 'prepare' for the boys coming back. God knows what she has planned. I loved her and everything but sometimes she went a little too over the top
I turned around to get my toiletries to have a shower and I saw a stunning dress in midnight blue. I laughed to myself; Edward was going to love it! I couldn't wait to see the look on his face. The dress was perfect length, so the hem would just rest on my knees, it had thin straps only a couple of centimetres wide and a neckline just perfect for me laying just under my collar bone and not showing too much cleavage.
I got into the shower and took my time to relax. All the excitement made my muscles very tense, it was lovely. I used my favourite shampoo; Edward just said the other day he loved the smell of the strawberries. As I felt the hot water starting to go, I out and started to brush my teeth. I didn't want to ruin the moment with smelly breath.
I got into my dress, and sorted my hair out into a ponytail. I looked in the mirror, pleased. I looked some-what worthy to stand next to my God-like boyfriend.
I ran down stairs, it was time to go. Edward would be back! I turned everything off Charlie was out fishing and wouldn't be back till tomorrow night so I didn't have to worry about my curfew tonight.
I got into my truck and turned it on not once caring about the rumbling! I turned the radio on and in it was the CD of my lullaby, I smiled just hearing it. It reminded me of Edward, my Edward. All the times we've been through but how we've never stopped loving each other.
As I made my way to the Cullen house I saw there was a car behind my but it was a little too close for my liking. I went a little faster to make some distance between us but the car speed up too. I was starting to get freaked. That's when I saw two bright lights in front of me.
There was a car. NO. A lorry coming straight for me on the wrong side of the road! 'Oh crap'. I saw what happened in slow motion. I stopped to try to let the lorry pass but the car behind me didn't see me stop and crashed into my from behind, making my fly through the windscreen. I felt glass all over my body and pain like no other I had experienced. That's when I remember the lorry and it still was on the wrong side of the road! It hit me sending my head first into a tree. I heard a crack and a almighty pain in my back.
I felt my life slowly ebb away from me. I muttered one word 'Edward' before the black pit of unconsioness took over me.
Edward POV
I knew something was wrong as soon as I got home. I looked at Emmett and Jasper but they seemed as confused as me. Out side our house was Carlisle, Esme, Alice and Rosalie with grave looks on their faces. But the person I wanted to see most wasn't there. Were was Bella !?! I ran from the car straight to Carlisle.
"Carlisle, what's happened? Why is everyone so upset? And wear is Bella?" I shouted the questions. I needed to know what was wrong.
Carlisle looked at me with grief in his eyes. I never have seen him so upset.
"Edward, son im sorry. Its Bella she's been in an accident you need to go to the hospital now!"
I just stood there shocked. Accident? Hospital? Oh God. "son go, we will be with you all the way" I took off making myself run faster than I ever had before I had to see her. My Bella. I couldn't let her go.
I ran, and ran and ran. I had to get to the hospital to see Bella. I would do anything to save her, anything at all. I couldn't live with out her, she is my life.
As I was running to the hospital I saw her Chevy. The old truck she loved so much, completely smashed up with a Bella shaped hole in the windscreen. Once I saw that I ran even faster to the hospital.
I finally arrived, my family wasn't far behind I could hear their thoughts –
'Poor Edward, if she dies it will tear my family apart. It will never be the same without her. There must be something we can do!'
'Edward I know your listening, I can't see her in the future im really worried.'
'I will do EVERYTHING to save her; I can't have my son lose her.'
'She's a fighter, like me, she'll pull through…I hope.'
'Omg, omg, omg, I didn't even get a chance to get close to her.'
'I hope she dies it will be better for the family.'
I growled at Rosalie's thoughts, she was an evil, self-centred, vain, bitch! I couldn't worry about that I had to get to Bell see if she was okay.
I ran, human speed, up to the desk and asked.
'Bella Swan im her boyfriend in need to see her now!'
The receptionist guided me to her room, but didn't open the door. I took a deep breath, knocked and walked in.
What I saw was much worse than I expected, not Bella lying on the bed in pain, there was no Bella at all. I started pacing where was Bella? I had to find her! She couldn't have died could she? It was all my fault I should of got here sooner. I had let this happen to her.
That when I saw it. A note folded in half with Edward written in it, but not in my Bella's hand writing. I picked it up nervous. Why would someone leave me a note? I opened it apprehensively it said –
Edward,
You took mine so I took yours,
Mate for a mate.
That's when Carlisle, Esme, Alice, Jasper, Emmett and even Rosalie walked through the door they were totally shocked that Bella wasn't there.
Carlisle picked up the note and read it out loud. Esme sunk to the floor sobbing. While me and Carlisle looked at each other and said.
'Victoria.'
Bella POV
I woke up in a hospital bed and found Charlie sitting with my hand in his crying. It was the worst sight ever, the only time I've seen Charlie cry was when Renee left but it was like this.
He looked up and saw I was awake. He rushed over and pulled me into a hug, I didn't care it hurt.
'Oh Bella, I though… I thought … when I saw you lying there, so still and so white. It was like you was dead!'
I couldn't believe I put Charlie through that. I was the only thing he had. I wouldn't leave him. Ever! And he needed to know that.
'Dad, I would never leave you. I love you so much! So you were worrying over nothing. Go get a cup of coffee and calm down. I'm okay, I will always be there.'
Charlie got up and went to get a coffee. I really hope he believed what I said. I would never leave him, I love him too much.
Just then I heard the window open, I reached to close it and turned back round.
There I saw the monster from my nightmares. The evil being, who spends all her time hunting me and wanting to kill me. Victoria.
'hello Bella'
She had an evil grin of her face, worse than Jane's when using her power. I knew I was going to have a slow and painful death. I wish I only could say good bye to Edward, the rest of the Cullen's and Charlie and Renee.
While I was preparing myself for death Victoria came to me and bent down. I knew now my life was going to end. All I could think about was how much I loved Edward.
That's when I felt her teeth pierce my skin. I gasped, it was so painful. I felt my blood being drain, that's when her teeth pulled out again and I realised that she wasn't killing me she was changing me.
I know im mean, I wanted the change to be a separate chapter. But I already started writing the next chapter so it should be up soon please review, I will return on your stories :D
