Here is my new fanfiction
Disclaimer: I do not own DC Comics
Late at night, in Ambrose City, a mysterious figure was seen near a jewellery shop. He smashed the window and snuck in, 5 minutes later, he escaped with a duffel bag. He walks off and hides in an alleyway, he reached inside the duffel bag and pulled out a big diamond.
"Ah, such beauty"
==Young Mansion, the next morning==
NEWSPAPER HEADLINES: "Jewel Thief Strikes Again"
"I can't believe this Angelo" said an unknown person
The person put down the newspaper, revealing a teenager about 19 years of age, with black spiky hair, wearing a black T-Shirt and dark jeans.
"Crime is rampant throughout Ambrose City, and no one is willing to make a stand" said the teenager
"What about the police, Master David?" asked an elderly man
"They have no leads to catch this jewel thief, he's good at covering his tracks, anyway Angelo, how are thing going for my Gala tonight?" asked David
"All your guests have accepted the invitations" said Angelo
"Perfect" said David
David and Angelo lived alone in Young mansion, after David's mother, Lauren, died of cancer and David's father, Edward, died in a car accident, David took over his father's company, Youngtech. Inspite of David's young age, he had turned the company into a billion dollar corporation. Angelo acted as David's guardian after David's parents died, now he acts a bit more like a butler, but he doesn't mind.
"So will your Gala tonight be the announcement of your new ground breaking idea?" asked Angelo
"No, not tonight, not yet" said David
==The Gala==
The mansion was packed, the guests included some of the city's best known Politicians, CEO's and Corporate Men & Women.
"Mr Young, what a lovely gala" said Francis Andrews, the city's police commissioner.
"Thank you very much Commissioner" said David
David wandered around the large room until he bumped into a young girl, about David's age, she had auburn hair, she was dressed in a black dress and was wearing a pair of glasses. When David bumped into her, she accidently spilled her drink onto his suit.
"Oh, I'm sorry" said the girl
"It's alright, accidents happen" said David
"Hey, aren't you David young, the one throwing this party?" asked the girl
"I am, and you are?" asked David
"Emily" said the girl
At that point, Francis approached the 2.
"Ah, David, I see you met my daughter, Emily" said Francis
"Yes I have, it was nice meeting you by the way" said David
"You too" said Emily
==Elsewhere==
The same jewel thief that robbed the jewellery store was sneaking into a house.
"Too easy" said the thief
Within minutes, he was out with a duffel bag filled with jewellery
==The next morning==
NEWSPAPER ARTICLE: "Jewel thief yet to meet his match"
"Damn it, another robbery" said David
"Sir? What happened?" asked Angelo
"That Jewel thief stole $500,000 worth of diamonds during my Gala last night by robbing from the homes of one of my guests" said David
"This is really getting out of hand sir" said Angelo
"I know, Angelo, tonight, we must put Operation R into action" said David
==That Night==
David was in his study, he pressed a near his foot and his chair dropped him into a trap door, he ended up inside an underground Laboratory. Angelo was waiting for him near a big computer.
"Are you sure about this sir?" asked Angelo
"I'm sure" said David
David goes behind a wall, when he comes out, the front of him is not shown.
"Angelo, you know what to do" said David
Angelo pulled on a lever and a red/black motorcycle entered through a small lift in the floor.
"Good luck sir" said Angelo
"I don't need luck" said David
David took off like a bullet out the door.
==Downtown==
The jewel thief is in an alley.
"This is just getting easier" said the thief
The jewel thief reaches into his duffel bag and pulls out a diamond the size of a human fist. A shadow is seen peeking round a corner.
"Ah, the Serpent's Fang, the second most valuable diamond in all of Ambrose City" said the thief
Quick footsteps are heard, the thief is shocked and puts the diamond back into the duffel bag and looks around, he sees nothing, quick footsteps are heard again.
"Who's there?" asked the thief
An echo is heard. A shadow is seen on a bin, the thief turns around and sees the shadow, the shadow then jumps at him.
"AAAAHHHHH!" yelled the thief
The 2 engaged in a fight, which ended in the thief being pinned against the bin.
"Who are you? WHO ARE YOU?" asked the thief
"You can call me, Red Ryder" said the shadow
Red Ryder punched the thief in the face, knocking him out cold. Red Ryder then grabs some rope and ties the thief's feet together, Red Ryder then proceeds to hang the thief upside down from a fence.
Red Ryder then walks back to his bike, revealing his full look. He was wearing a black top with no sleeves, a red utility belt, black tights, red boots, red gloves, red mechanical wristbands, a black mask that covered his mouth and nose and he was also wearing a pair of black sunglasses with red lenses, his hair and ears were uncovered and he wasn't wearing a cape. Red Ryder then returns to the lab, and removes the glasses and mask.
"How was is master David?" asked Angelo
"Mission Accomplished Angelo" said David
Meanwhile, the police just arrived in the alleyway to find the jewel thief tied to the fence.
==The Next Morning==
NEWSPAPER ARTICLE: "Jewel Thief Caught"
"Ah, Angelo, I slept great last night knowing that the Jewel Thief has been caught" said David
"Good to know, but it doesn't look like you're getting any recognition" said Angelo
"What do you mean?" asked David
Angelo showed David the paper.
Last night, The Ambrose City Jewel Thief was caught trying to steal The Serpent's Fang from the Ambrose City Museum, however, he was caught and arrested by Commissioner Francis Andrews.
"I don't believe it, Francis is taking credit for Red Ryder's work" said David
"Apparently so" said Angelo
"Oh well, I don't mind, I know Francis, the minute even the smallest piece of evidence is against him, he'll confess that he's lying" said David
==Meanwhile==
At Rollins Asylum, Ambrose City's Mental Asylum, 2 police officers were walking through the hallway.
"And this is where we keep the most psychotic of all the criminals here at Rollins Asylum" said the older of the 2 officers
"Really?" asked the younger
"Yes, such as Duke Fredrick, the Ambrose Cannibal, or Olivia Crystal, she tried to murder the mayor by hanging him from City Hall" said the older
"What about that?" asked the younger, pointing to a large metal door in the very far end of the room.
"Whoa Rookie, the guy in there is too crazy for someone as young as you" said the older
"Who is it?" asked the rookie
"In there is a psycho serial killer that murdered over 100 people over the course of 2 years" said the older of the 2
"Why did it take 2 years?" asked the rookie
"Well, since his targets seemed to have nothing in common, it was hard to track him, we eventually caught him when he tried to murder someone infront of a hidden camera" said the older officer
"What's his name?" asked the rookie
"His name is Vance Roland" said the older officer
==The Next Night==
The next night, David was in his study, he was listening to the radio until he found something about a police chase. He pressed the button under his desk and his chair dropped him into the trap door. He arrived in the lab where Angelo already was.
"Angelo, we got a Police Chase on 2nd street, ready the glider" said David
"Yes Sir" said Angelo
Angelo pressed a button on the computer and David's suit appeared out of the wall. He proceeded to put it on. Angelo typed in a code on the computer and a modified hang glider appeared hanging from 2 ropes near a window, a ramp also formed leading up to the same window. David, now wearing the Red Ryder suit, stood at the bottom of the ramp.
"3...2...1!" said Angelo
Within less than a second, David was launched out the window, he was able to grab the glider before he went out the window.
"Alright sir, what street did you say the chase was on?" asked Angelo
"Second" said David
David used the glider to scout all of Ambrose City, until he found the chase.
"Angelo, I found the chase" said David
"What do you intend to do?" asked Angelo
"You'll see, but first, activate the glider's auto pilot" said David
"Way ahead of you" said Angelo
"You did remember to pack arrows did you?" asked David
"Yes sir" said Angelo
David reached into one of the pouches attached to his belt and pulled out an arrow. Suddenly, a crossbow-like device formed out of David's right Wristband.
"Ready?" asked Angelo
"Aim" said David
A crosshair appeared in the lens of David's glasses, he waited until he had a lock on the getaway's back tyre.
"Fire" said David
The crossbow launched the arrow right to the getaway's car and it hit the back tyre, bursting it, bringing the car to a stop, allowing the police to catch the driver.
"You are under arrest" said Francis
The officers took the driver away, when Francis noticed the arrow used to take down the getaway's car, he looked up and saw Red Ryder.
"What the hell?" asked Francis
==Morning==
David just woke up, not realising he was still wearing his Red Ryder glasses. He went downstairs, where Angelo had already made breakfast.
"Morning Angelo" said David
"Morning Master David, um, you still have the glasses on" said Angelo
David removed the glasses.
"Thanks, so, anything new?" asked David
"Nothing so far" said Angelo
David turned on the TV.
"And in other news, last night, police apprehended a getaway driver who was trying to make it out of Ambrose City with $250,000 when suddenly his tyre blew out and the police were able to capture him, what baffles the police is the sight of a mysterious arrow found near the driver's car" said the reporter
"So, nothing new?" asked David
"I just found out a few seconds ago" said Angelo
A knock was heard at the door. David went to answer it, revealing Emily.
"Oh, hi Emily, what are you doing here?" asked David
"My father wanted me to give you this for some reason, I have no idea what it is, he told me not to open it" said Emily, handing David an envelope
"Um, thanks, how is your father anyway?" asked David
"He's fine, except he keeps acting weird talking about that arrow, well, see you later" said Emily
"See you later" said David
When Emily left, David opened the envelope, showing a picture of the arrow.
==Meanwhile==
At Rollins Asylum, a woman was carrying a tray to the hallway at the end.
"Mister Roland, your dinner is here" said the lady
No answer.
"Mister Roland?" asked the lady
She opened a peep hole and saw nothing.
"Huh?" asked the lady
She opened the door to see if he was still in the cell, without warning, an unknown person jumped her and strangled her, before leaving through the door she left open.
==Later that Day==
David headed to Francis' house to talk to him, he knocked on the door and Francis answered.
"Oh, hello David" said Francis
"Hello Commissioner" said David
"Is there something you want to talk about?" asked Francis
"Yes, the photo that you asked Emily to deliver to my house" said David
"Please, come in" said Francis, before David entered the house.
"So Commissioner, why did you have the photo delivered to my house?" asked David, acting as if he had nothing to do with the arrow.
"Well, after finding the arrow, I noticed something in the sky, it looked like a guy hang gliding, but there wasn't enough wind or light for hang gliding" said Francis
"What does that have to do with me?" asked David
"You're the only one I can trust with this information, I want you to promise that if you see anything regarding this hang glider, let me know immediately" said Francis
"I promise" said David
At that point, Francis got a phone call, he quickly answered it.
"Hello?...What is it?...What about him?...WHAT?! He escaped?...How?...I'll be right there" said Francis, before hanging up
"What's going on?" asked David
"One of our prisoners escaped" said Francis
==Asylum==
The door to the cell was still open, Francis entered the cell, David followed, Francis insisted that David shouldn't come along, but David insisted, there were blood marks on the floor, near a chalk outline of the victim.
"Vance Roland has escaped" said Francis
"Vance Roland?" asked David
"Yes, that psycho has killed over 100 people over the course of 2 years, he's dangerous" said Francis
David noticed the chalk outline was missing something.
"Why's the chalk outline missing a thumb?" asked David
"Roland always cuts off the thumb and keeps it as a trophy" said Francis
"That's sick, but I'm sure you can catch him" said David
"Don't worry, we will" said Francis
I'm gonna end right there, now, just so you know, each chapter will be a bit long, that way I can make it about as long as an episode of a TV show, so this entire fic will contain lots of different villains. Also, I know that this fic was originally called 'The Adventures of Krimzon', but since the name 'Crimson' was taken, I noticed that changing the spelling slightly didn't make a difference so I just changed the name to 'Red Ryder'
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