Ok so I decided to make Lucy really powerful in this story because even though I love the way she is the only thing that is different about her is physical and magical strength. She still uses celestial keys.

Well on to my new story.


(Nobody's POV, Prologue)

It was perfect sunny day to be playing and running around but that's not what eight year old Lucy had in mind. Earlier this morning, she and her mother and father was planning on having a picnic in the meadow not far from their mansion. As the family was about to leave, they heard a scream and an explosion at the front of the big house. The three rush to see what happen only to see that their house was on fire.

"What going on? What happened?" Jude, the father, asked a panicking guard. "Bandits! They broke in and tried to take AGHHHHH!" the guard crumpled and there stood behind him with a bloody sword is Jose, the man that has been trying to get rid of the Heartifilia's for awhile now. "Layla! Run and take Lucy and get out of here!" Jude screamed at his beloved wife and child. "Right!" Layla screamed. Layla picked the now crying Lucy and ran out of the burning mansion as fast as she could as she started crying herself. Moments later they heard a scream, a mans scream. "Papa!" Lucy screamed, a new wave of tears coming out.

Layla saw Jose coming with a murderous smile on with blood splattered on his face. Layla saw this, took out her gate keys and gave them to Lucy. "Lucy! Take my keys and run! Run as fast as you can and don't stop! Everything is going to be alright." Layla said with tears in her eyes. Lucy, with even more tears coming out, said, "But m-mama! What about you? Your c-coming too, right?" Layla smiled at her daughter, "Don't worry baby girl, mama is going to get rid of the evil man. Ok? So I want you to run with all your might and don't stop until you get to the next town." Layla said with tears streaming down her face. "So run and be a brave girl and never give up." Layla said.

"Is that so? Your going to get rid of the evil man with what?" Jose said. Layla sun around and gave the man a glare. "What do you want with our family?" Layla screamed with confidence, standing protectively in front of her daughter. "Oh, I want many things. Money, fame, women but you know what I want the most? You." Layla's eyes widened ans screamed at her daughter to run. "Run Lucy!" she screamed.

Lucy ran as Jose ran up and stabbed Layla in the chest. "MAMA!" Lucy screamed, crying her eyes out. "L-Lucy," she heard her mother say, "I love you Lucy. Be a brave girl." Layla said in her last breath. Lucy clutched her mother's gate keys and ran even faster than before, adrenaline running through her veins. She tripped over some roots and Loke materialized picking her u and running. Lucy grabbed onto his shirt and cried loudly into it. 'From this day, I promise to get stronger and then nobody will have to die.' Lucy promised to herself clutching onto Loke's shirt even tighter.


Yeah it was kinda short but the chapters will be a lot longer so don't give up hope!

How was it? Please review and tell me how it is. Also go check out my other story: I'm Afraid to Lose You!