LOVE ON THE FLY

This is my very first fan fiction and it is about the maximum ride books and max falling in love and how the school uses it against her and the flock. I do not own any of the maximum ride people or ideas. So no sue me James Patterson ok you own it not me ok so no sue me.

''words'' = speaking words

'words' = thinking stuff

WORDS = voice that is in Max's head


Chapter One

Max was flying with her wings spread out. She was flying way a head of the flock because she need some time to think and be by herself. Dylan was still trying to get her on the love boat and Fang was as protective as possible and never letting Dylan get near her. She was kind of glad of that because it kept them always fighting so she could just get time to her self like right now.

"Max can we stop now my wings hurt". I turned my head to see Gazzy in the back of the flock yawning.

"fine but lets go over to the park over there". I said as we all went down and landed in trees. We all tucked in our wings so no one could see them and then we jumped out of the trees. I felt a weird feel in the air and I turned around to find Fang and Dylan looking at me with a look that made their eyes darker then normal and I thought I saw lust in their eyes.

"ok...lets go everyone and find a place to eat". I looked at Fang and Dylan and for some weird reason they looked normal. 'God, I'm seeing stuff now and great I can now add that to the list of weird things in my life'.

"Max are you ok you look worried" said Angel as she tugged at the sleeve of my wind breaker jacket.

"Angel I'm fine ok and I'm just a little stressed" I said back to her but then the voice came out of who knows where.

YOUR NOT WORRIED YOU ARE STRESSING ABOUT YOUR LOVE LIFE.

'I thought you where gone did you go on vacation or something. You should tell me before you leave so I can have a party'

MAX WHO YOU CHOSE WILL CHANGE YOUR FATE AND OTHERS SO CHOSE WISELY.

' Thanks for the fortune oh wise one in my mind'.

"Max ... do you hear me... earth to Max". Iggy had his hand in my face and the rest of the flock was looking at me with lots of concern in their eyes. my head was now hurting a lot and I felt really dizzy. I was about to fall when both Fang and Dylan caught me and set me down so I was sitting on the grass.


hope you like the first chapter of the fan fiction so far. I am eating chocolate cookies right now.