School Dance
Another fanfic by: LaceyLouLou 82
Loren's POV:
To me the school dance is just another dance that girly girls like to dress up and look pretty for their dates. The only reason why I am saying this is because I don't have a date but if some guy came up to me and asked me "if I wanted to go to dance" my answer would still be "no." My best friend in whole wide world is making go to the dance. Truly I would rather stay home and study and get ready for college but no I have to go to the stupid dance. I'm sorry let me formal introduce myself my name is Loren Tate I am eighteen years old and it is the senior formal dance and you will never guess what the theme is. Masquerade Ball. *I had just got out of class about to go to my locker when I bumped into the queen of bees*
Person: Watch were you are going?
Loren: Oh, I'm sorry I guess I couldn't see you under all that make-up. *circling her fingers around her face*
Person: You really want to start with me. *squinting her eyes*
Loren: You started it first; I could have just gone to my locker without anything happening.
Person: Just watch were you are going.
Loren: Oh, and Chloe where is your little clique I thought they would have been following you around somewhere.
*She just glared at me and went up to her boyfriend and started to make out with him. I just rolled my eyes and went to my locker*
Person: Wow Loren you stood up for yourself, I'm so proud.
Loren: Hi to you to Mel.
Melissa: I'm just saying. You are turning into me.
Loren: No, you would have hit her.
Melissa: True, *she saw Loren chuckle* so are you ready to go.
Loren: Where?
Melissa: Shopping of course the dance is tonight.
Loren: Do I really have to go? *whining*
Melissa: Yes you do, so come on. I'm driving. *pulling her arm*
Eddie's POV:
When I'm around Chloe I don't feel anything anymore. Like her lips pressed up against mine I know she did it to make that girl over there jealous. But I didn't care, I know my parents are the legendary Max and Katy and I am the star quarter back but I still don't like all of the attention. When I opened my eyes I saw everyone staring at me and Chloe kissing I tried pulling away with my hands on her waist but she is stronger than she looks. I finally had the verge to pull her away. Wiping my lips and asking her…
Eddie: What the hell was that for?
Chloe: I can't say hi to my boyfriend.
Eddie: What about a sample "hello" would have been nice.
Chloe: I don't get it why are you angry over one little kiss?
Eddie: Because, you know I don't like kissing in public you know I don't like that so why would you do that.
Chloe: Why don't you just come out and say it, instead of making some dumbass excuse.
Eddie Fine, I was trying to say it nicely but ok. I want to break-up.
Chloe: You cannot break-up with me on the night of the school dance.
Eddie: Well I just did. *walking away but he felt Chloe grab his arm*
Chloe: But, we were voted king and queen.
Eddie: You can have both of the crowns because I don't want them. *walking outside*
Chloe: Wait!
Eddie: What?
Chloe: Is there someone else?
Eddie: Why does that matter or not?
Chloe: You didn't answer my question… Is there someone else?
Eddie: Maybe, but I know if I keep dating you I won't be able to find that other person. *now walking away leaving Chloe dumbfounded*
Ian: Hey dude.
Eddie: Hey. *sitting on top of the table*
Ian: What's wrong?
Eddie: Broke up with Chloe.
Tyler: Wow that must have been tough.
Cameron: When today?
Eddie: No yesterday what do you think and it really wasn't that tough.
Ian: Well then it must have been tough with her.
Cameron: I didn't mean it like that.
Eddie: I will see you guys at the dance. *getting off the table and walking to his car*
Ian and Tyler: Bye.
*At the mall*
Melissa: Lo come on we have to go and pick up our dresses.
Loren: I still have no say in this do I.
Melissa: Nope.
Loren: I have to say I do like the nail color that you picked out for me.
Melissa: It matches your dress, lets hurry we only have *looking at her cell phone* four and half hours to get ready.
Loren: That's seems like a lot of time to me.
Melissa: Whatever.
Clerk: How can I help you?
Melissa: Hi, my name is Melissa I ordered two dresses.
Clerk: Ok let me check. *typing on the computer* you said Melissa right.
Melissa: Yes.
Clerk: I will be right back.
Melissa: Take your time. *pulling out her cell phone looking on twitter*
Loren: How would this look on me?
Melissa: You look like-OMG.
Loren: What?
Melissa: Guess who broke up.
Loren: Uh, Brad and Angelina.
Melissa: Nice one but no Chloe and Eddie.
Loren: How do you know that?
Melissa: His profile changed to single.
Loren: So, you were just looking at his profile. *smirking*
Melissa: No.
Loren: Really?
Clerk: Sorry to interrupt, but here are your dresses.
Melissa: Thank you, do you mind if we can see them.
Loren: Way to change the subject Mel.
*Mel just glared at Loren and said "continue" to the clerk*
Clerk: Sure, there is a dressing room in the back.
Melissa: Ok thanks, come on Lo.
Loren: Do I really have to go.
Melissa: Yes come on. *pulling her arm*
*After they both tried on the dresses they came out and saw Chloe and her clique were in the store*
Chloe: Look what we have here, the two nobody's in my favorite store.
Melissa: This is public property it really isn't your store.
Chloe: Oh, really, can you believe her Adriana.
Adriana: Exactly, I just can't believe that they would come to this store when there is a garbage can right around the corner.
Loren: That's nice Adriana, keep coming up with these lines while we leave. *glaring at both of them*
Chloe: Why are you leaving so fast?
Melissa: We have a dance to get to.
Chloe: You don't even have dates.
Loren: You're really talking about dates, how is Eddie Chloe.
*Chloe and Adriana and the rest of them had their mouths open*
Loren: Cat got your tongue.
Adriana: I cannot believe you just said that.
Loren: Well I did.
Melissa: Like I said "we have a dance to get to" bye girls. *going pass them with Loren right behind*
*At Loren's house*
Loren: So why do we have to change here?
Melissa: Knowing Lisa she wouldn't let me go so I am changing at you're house and plus I have to do your hair and make-up.
Loren: Ok.
Melissa: Go and get in the shower, I will take a shower in Nora's bathroom.
Loren: Ok.
*After about thirty minutes they were done taking a shower, now Mel was doing Loren's make-up. She had eyeliner, foundation, blush, black mascara, and clear lip gloss. Her hair was in curls in the middle was a pin the sides together with all her other curls hanging down. Now it was Mel's turn she had blush, black mascara, red lip gloss to match her dress, and foundation. It was now time for them to put on their outfits and go to the dance. Once they put on their outfits and their mask they left Loren's room only to be stop by Loren's mom to have a camera in her hand*
Loren: Really mom.
Nora: Yes, really come on smile.
*Loren did as told*
Loren: Come on were going to be late.
Melissa: There isn't a specific time you have to be there.
Loren: Well there is for me because I have to study and get ready for that big test tomorrow.
Melissa: Whatever Lo.
Nora: Ok one more picture then you can leave.
Loren: Fine, one more.
Nora: Ok, I'm done, have fun, and you guys look absolutely gorgeous.
Loren: Thanks mom, love you.
Nora: Love you to.
Melissa: Bye Nora.
Nora: Bye Mel.
*Getting into the car*
Melissa: Are you ready?
Loren: Yeah.
Melissa: Ok let's go. *driving off*
*They got there at nine thirty with time to spare, they got out of the car and walked inside but Loren stopped for a second*
Melissa: What's wrong?
Loren: Remember I have to leave at twelve.
Melissa: You know this is turning into a Cinderella story.
Loren: Well I need to get up in the morning. I have a shift before I go to school so I need to leave at twelve.
Melissa: Ok, give me your phone.
Loren: What?
Melissa: Give me your phone, I'm going to put an alarm on the phone and then you come and get me when it goes off so we can leave.
Loren: Ok. *handing Mel, her phone*
Melissa: Ok all set.
Loren: Ok thanks.
Melissa: Are you ready to go in now.
Loren: Yeah.
*Mel walked in first no one really paid any attention to her but when Loren came in all eyes were on her. Even the light went on her*
Ian: Who is that?
Eddie: I don't know but I'm going to find out.
Ian: Not her, the one in the red.
Eddie: I don't know who that is either but I'm still going to figure out who the girl is in the white dress.
Loren: Mel, why are people looking at me?
Melissa: Because, you look absolutely gorgeous in the dress I picked out.
Loren: Not funny Mel.
Melissa: I wasn't joking Loren, I'm telling you the truth.
Loren: Thanks, you look pretty to.
Melissa: Let's go and get some punch.
Loren: Ok. *interloping arms*
*Loren was pouring punch, after she finish pouring the punch she turned around into someone and all most spilled the punch on her*
Loren: I am so sorry.
Eddie: No it is my fought I should have never came up behind you.
Loren: But still I should have watched were I was going.
Eddie: Its fine really.
Loren: Are you sure.
Eddie: Yes, it is not like you spilled it all over me or anything.
Loren: Do you want any punch?
Eddie: Uh, sure.
*She turned around and poured him some punch and was about to ask Mel what she should do but she was too busy indulging herself with another attractive male*
Loren: Here you go.
Eddie: Thanks.
Loren: You're welcome.
Both: Would-*they both stopped and laughed*
Loren: You first.
Eddie: No you.
Loren: I insist you go first.
Eddie: Ok would you like to dance.
Loren: Sure.
Eddie: Do you know how to dance?
Loren: Exactly I do, hold on one second.
*Going up to the Dj *
Loren: Can you play this song for me, and when the bell comes off just stop the music.
Dj: Sure.
Loren: Thanks.
Eddie: This is nice song.
Loren: Thanks.
*During part of the dance she took off Eddie's hat and put it on her own head, he grabbed did and did a little trick with it, they started talking in the middle of the dance (if you want to know how they danced go to YouTube and put in Another Cinderella Story Ball Room Dance Movie Scene, Eddie also wore what Joey Parker was wearing and that was also the music)*
Eddie: That's a nice necklace.
Loren: Thanks, that's a nice…uh, hat.
Eddie: So you come back with saying that is a nice hat.
Loren: Well at least I came up with something. *laughing*
Eddie: True.
Loren: Everyone is staring.
Eddie: Well, why wouldn't they be?
Loren: I don't know you tell me.
Eddie: Well maybe it has to deal with the fact that you are dancing with a rock star and I have a beautiful women dancing with me.
Loren: Wait, did you just say rock star.
Eddie: You know Eddie Duran.
*Once he told her his name, the music stopped so she stopped dancing to. Only to have Chloe come in and grabbing Eddie's hand and start to dance with him*
Chloe: Hey, babe.
Eddie: Don't call me that Chloe, we are done.
*Running after his mystery girl, he saw her grab another girl and run out of the school but before he went after her he saw her necklace. Once he saw her necklace he ran towards the exit to see if she had already leave. He looked at the necklace one more time and then looked up and had a smirk on his face. He knew he could use this necklace to his advantage to find his mystery girl*
Loren: Oh my god.
Melissa: What?
Loren: Did you not see who I was dancing with.
Melissa: No I was too busy into his hot friend.
Loren: Oh yeah that's right.
Melissa: But you guys did look good out there.
Loren: I danced with Eddie Duran.
Melissa: How do you know that?
Loren: Because he told me, before I left.
Melissa: Well did you tell him your name.
Loren: No but- *touching her neck*
Melissa: But?
Loren: Where is my necklace?
Melissa: What necklace?
Loren: The necklace that my dad gave me.
Melissa: Maybe it fell, check on the floor.
Loren: It isn't there.
Melissa: Maybe Eddie has it.
Loren: This is not time for jokes Mel.
Melissa: I know but wouldn't it be cool if he had it.
Loren: There is nothing cool with him having my necklace.
Melissa: We will check tomorrow at school, maybe it was on your desk at home or something.
Loren: I could have sworn I had that necklace on when I left the house.
Melissa: Like I said we will check tomorrow. *pulling into her driveway*
Loren: Ok.
Melissa: Do you need a ride to school tomorrow.
Loren: No I will be fine, I just have to go to work first to pick up my paycheck and then go to school, but at this rate I will be staying up all night to study.
Melissa: Lo, you know biology back and forth you will do fine on the test.
Loren: Ok bye.
Melissa: Bye.
*When Loren got inside the house she could tell her mom was already a sleep by not having any of the lights turned on and the quiet aroma in the air. She thought to herself that this has been one good fairy-tale, but will probably soon turn into something bad*
I am finished this story and yes I will be continuing it… at least until Eddie gives Loren her necklace back. The dresses for Chloe, Melissa, and Loren are on my tumblr page I put the information on my other story which is what has happened to us? I think it is in either chapter 16 or 17. If not just message me or something. Also in this story Loren's dad did not leave her, sort of, but I promise it will be explained in the next few chapters.
Until next time,
Nlxoxo