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Chapter 1
It had been a year since Lucy, Edmund and Eustace last visited and left Narnia. Narnia was safe and everyone was excited about the upcoming wedding of King Caspian X. Caspian was to marry a young maiden from Calormen. She was beautiful and charming girl with long wavy blonde hair and ocean-blue eyes, unlike the typical Calormene.
"Are you sure about the marriage?" Lady Jane asked her King.
Along with Sir Carter, Lady Jane was one of Caspian's best friends and trusted comrades in court. Lady Jane was not of noble blood; she was in fact a knight of Narnia and one of the most highly respected ones. She, as well as Carter, was the personal bodyguard of the King, following and protecting him wherever he went.
"Jane, you do have to understand that I need to produce an heir, not to mention that Aurora will be the perfect wife. She is kind, caring, funny, loving and gentle." Caspian told his friend.
The girl immediately took notice of Caspian's emphasis on the last word. "Well… she does remind me eerily of someone I have heard of. Someone you always speak highly of. I don't want you to make the wrong choice of marrying Aurora when your heart clearly belongs to another." Jane said, worried that her best friend would make a mistake.
"She is nothing like Susan." Caspian snapped at Jane. He hated being reminded of the Kings and Queens of Old. They had been dear to him and without them, he felt lost. It had been hard for him to recognize that they would not be returning, that he would never see them again. He missed Susan, especially; he had been so in love with her when she departed that he had buried all his feelings deep down his heart and thrown them at the back of his head. Yet, he did not realize that his love for her still existed.
"Carter, back me up," Jane whispered to a young man who was lying lazily on the sofa. He was around 16 (a year older an herself), with messy sandy blonde hair and deep brown eyes that were pits any woman would willingly fling herself into. He had many pursuers and was a bit of a playboy, but he had yet to find a woman that he would be willing to settle down with.
"Mate, Lady Aurora is exactly how you described Queen Susan to be. It's kind of scary that you are going to seal the deal with a Susan look-a-like. You may as well be marrying the queen herself." Carter said bluntly.
"Susan isn't coming back!" Caspian shouted furiously, getting frustrated that his friends just would not see the point.
"All I am saying is that you make sure you love Aurora and not Susan before going through the ceremony." Jane warned him but Caspian shot her a glare.
"Well, I better get going, don't want to oversleep and leave the Dawn Treader waiting." Carter said, getting up from where he had been lying. He was about to set off to the Lone Islands on the ship with Trumpkin and the crew accompanying him.
IN ENGLAND
In the dim lighted lounge room of the Pevensie's sat the four siblings and their cousin, Eustace Scrubb. Lucy and Edmund had just got back from being at their Aunt and Uncle's place and were sent back home with Eustace as their guest. Susan and Peter had just returned from America as well.
"So, all three of you went to Narnia?" Peter said, with a little hurt in his voice at the fact he did not return. "How is Caspian?"
"He's good. Well, at least he acted joyful around us, but one of the crew members told me that he had been miserable for years." Lucy informed her brother.
"Is he married?" Susan asked casually, picking at her nails. She acted like she did not care but her sigh of relief betrayed her when Edmund answered, "No he isn't."
"But he did think Lilliandil, the star, was very beautiful," Eustace chirped in.
Susan's face immediately fell at the news but Edmund scooted next to her and put an arm around her while she forced back the tears that were welling up. "Well, ad a king, he is expected to have an heir. He will have to marry eventually."
At that instant, there was a strange gust of wind and the window on the other side of the room swung open. All of them rose from their seats at the sudden bang. To their surprise, bright light began glowing from the opened window and a portal appeared.
Hey reader
So it's just a first chapter but hopefully depending on my Internet the next chapter will be up soon. Can not make any promises. I sorry for spelling a grammar, so if any one wants to be a beta reader please PM.
How you enjoy this chapter and story.
And to those who are reader my other stories, I hope I will have chapters up soon.
Tazzy
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