This is my First fanfic, so please tell how it is, so if its bad i can change it

I do not own naruto

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Flashbacks

It was a dark and stormy night Naruto and sakura are coming home from a mission, when all of the sudden they saw two dark figures lying on the ground. One was breathing one was not . Naruto and sakura went to identify the two figures.

Sakura checked the one breathing. and it was no other than uchiha Sasuke. S-Sasuke Sakura stuttered. She couldn't believe before her eyes, Sasuke Uchiha of all the people was lying barely alive infront of her.

meanwhile

Naruto checked the figure that wasn't breathing. The figure was Uchiha Itachi, lying dead with a sword percing right through his heart. So Sasuke finally got what he wanted heh Said Naruto.

So Sakura managed to heal Sasuke alittle bit, just so he can stay alive while they head toward the hidden leaf village.

Once they arrived at the gates shizune was their to greet them, when she saw sasuke she ran to them.

Naruto is this who i think it is said shizune.

Yeah, we found him around the outskirts of the village said naruto.

Oh what happened to him, he looks like a mess said shizune. Oh about that, we found him barely alive, and Itachi a few yards away with sasukes katana(sword) piercing his heart said Sakura.

Ok we need to get him treated, so you guys go take sasuke to the hospital while I go tell lady tsunade that you have arrived with sasuke said shizune.

Hai said naruto and sakura.

At the hokage tower

Lady tsunade was sitting at her desk, fast asleep when all of the sudden shizune comes running into her office yelling for her.

Lady Tsunade, Lady Tsunade Shizune yelled breathing heavly.

What is it Shizune, I'm busy Tsunade said tiredly after waking up from a long nice nap.

Naruto and sakura are back, and they have Uchiha Sasuke with them Said Shizune.

Whaaaatttttttttttttt!

In Suna

Hey Garra did you just here someone scream What Said kankaro.

Hn no said Garra

Hm must been my imagination said kankaro.

Back in konoha

Yes they just arrived, I sent them to the hospital said shizune.

Hmm how badly were they injured said Tsunade.

Well Naruto and Sakura just had a few scratches but nothing too serious, and well Sasuke, he looked severely injured, you might want to go check up on him said Shizune.

Yeah I'd better do that Tsunade said. Tsunade got up from her desk, she yawned and went to go to the hospital.

At the Hospital

Sasuke was on the hospital been breathing through one of those breathing machine thingys. Yeah the medics cleaned all the blood off of him. Naruto and Sakura just waited by his side.

Three Days later...

Man will teem ever wake up said naruto.

Naruto be patient, he's severely injured, said sakura, "i hope he wakes up soon, I'm tired of seeing him like this"

ok, hey I'm going to ichirakus wanna come said naruto.

you go ahead, I'll catch up said sakura.

Ok if you say so cya said naruto.

Naruto left and sakura just waited for sasuke to wake up.

Sasuke please wake up soon sakura said.

A few hours later sakura was still there, but she was barely asleep in a chair.

All of the sudden sasukes eyes starts to open.

Hn Sasuke grunted.

S-Sasuke your awake stuttered sakura.

Sasuke quickly shot up. Where and I, wheres Itachi where is he Yelled sasuke.

Your at the konoha hospital, and well Itachi you killed him said sakura.

To Be Continued...

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