Hi! I'm very excited, I have been thinking of this story for awhile and I only have the exposition done. I am very terrible with plot of a story so please accept my apologies if this sucks. This is my first time ever writing fanfics and I hope you like this. As I said this before I don't have a plot so I don't know when I will update. This originally was 5986 romance but I tried it and it was terrible. Apologies to the people who were looking forward to 5986. Sorry! And another thing, I know this is categorized humor, but I'm not a very funny person myself. Constructional criticism is wanted please give me advice on how to improve this fanfic if you think things should improve.
Disclaimer: KHR belongs to Akira Amano, not me. (Did I do this right? When I first posted this I forgot it.)
Prologue
It was a dark and gloomy night, the world seemed like it was full of sadness. And in the park there is a shaking figure under the tree. Taking a closer look, the figure is actually a girl crying uncontrollably.
Haru's POV
I have just killed another one. I'm a monster! No, I'm a killing monster who has no control of who or what I kill! Since the age of 10, I have been taking these so-called 'missions'. My father is a yakuza boss. When I was 6, he trained me in hand to hand combat and using guns. In the beginning, I thought he trained me to protect myself because he is a yakuza boss, but no. He just wanted to use me! When he saw how skilled I was with the guns, he assigned me to kill man after man to only benefit himself in the whole yakuza crap. I was used. He betrayed me. Once I overheard him talking to one of his men and he said I was only a tool used to get rid of the roadblocks in his 'business'. After that time, I refused to accept any missions, but that bastard of a father threatened to kill mother if I don't listen to him obediently. I hate this! I'm supposed to be just a normal teenage girl!
After the usual crying session, it was getting dark, so Haru returned home and got ready to go to school the next day.
Updated: 4/16/15, 5/25/15
I hope you like the prologue of my fanfic. I'm going to update if this gets 3 or more reviews! Please tell me if there is things I need to improve.
REVIEW REPLIES: I would like to thank the three people who reviewed, thank you so much!
Ammila: Thank you!
thenutchan(guest): I'm very thankful that u spent time to write a long review, but I think you misinterpreted my definition of weak about the girls. I don't mean 'weak' like that. What I mean is how in the anime/manga, they always were portrayed that they needed to be protected. Spoiler: Like when they go to the future, the only things that Haru and Kyoko were to do were laundry, cooking and stereotypical girl jobs. By 'stronger' I mean treating the girls with equality and coming from a background not so innocent and stereotypical. But if there are other problems or things u don't understand, please pm me.
Dstructiv Blaze: Thank you so much, I'm not a very good writer. I like writing but I suck at it. Thanks for the support!