ok since no one is commenting i got bored and decided to go with sassy's idea so sassy, DON'T TELL! I'm evil so I'm not telling what it is MWAHAHAHAHAH! the next one might not be for a while i can't tell when the next one is going to be updated so don't ask. This is kind of a time laps *tell me if i frased that wrong because i don't know what a time laps is I'm just estimating* where the kits that the spiritclanare now apprentices. i shall fill the in about ye kits in ye story. hope you like! X3
* apprintice serimony for the kits fox kit/craystalkit*
" I Duskstar now name you foxpaw and craystalpaw!" as the clan cheered Seafang thought i glad Spottedrose decided to foster fox paw and crystalpaw along with her kits Lilacpaw, heronpaw, runnerpaw, and mousepaw. Even though they are older now. " Your mentors will be Featherblaze for fox paw and Seafang for craystalpaw". "WHAT?!" I yelled, " Yes Spottedrose will go with you since her kits are now out of the nursery". " All right if you say so" I said".As we left the camp we gave craystalpaw a tour of the boundrys. Then i showed her some of my hunting moves." So what are we gonna' learn first? The Hunting crouch or battle moves?" asked Craystalpaw eagerly. "No I'm going to show you how the best warriors". first I showed her how to camofaode her self by rolling in the mind and then in the dead leafs to make her look like the forest floor. Then to climb up a tree and watch down below to wait for prey to come scuttle around the roots of the tree. Then to jump down and take the repeated perfectly very time, in fact on her first hunting trip she came back with four pieces of prey. As we were walking back" She might have some power or something there is a prophecy about her and we need to wait to tell her" I told Spottedrose. " We can't be sure but the clan will be buzzing about it we should tell Duskstar" Spottedrose respondedI checked in with Squirrleflight,Lionpaw, Hollypaw, and Jaypaw to make sure that they were adjusting well to the new envoiorment I kept thinking something is up when we had passed the Sunclan border there weren't any portals the dawn potrol should of been out by then.When I told Duskstar he said their cats have been disappearing and reappearing but when they reappear something was weird about them almost like they had seen a ghost. So he sent a potrol with me,crystalpaw, Featherblaze, Foxpaw, Lionpaw, Jaypaw, Longeye, and Heronpaw to investigate. When we got an escort to the camp [because these clans are more frenimies to each other than they are hostile] it was almost like all the life energy was drained out of it. Is this what Spottedleaf meant when she said the foxes drain power? Then when I saw Hawkstar I thought yep this is what she meant. "OH MY G-O-S-H! YOU LOOK LIKE A MIX OF A CONSTIPATED CHICKEN GIVING BIRTH TO A LION!" i said."Um... first off that made no since second those fox hearted foxes have been doing something to my warriors! Then a horrific scream came from the clearing,"THE FOXES ARE ATTACKING!" with that I ran as fast as I could out into the clearing, I launched onto the back of a fox the my wings started forming as the hazy out line of a lion clan warrior sounded me as i felt a large surge of strength and courage then I took the fox by the scruff of its neck the flung it against a tree killing it. As it died i saw the hazy outline of a cat come out of it. i kept doing this for a while then the lead fox barcked and they left as Spottedrose came running up to me and said" Foxpaw is gone!". "WHAT!?" How in the world could Featherblaze lose him?! She nows that he is part of the prophecy! I thought as I called over Featherblaze. "Where- did- he- go?" I asked as if I was a mother protecting her kit. "I saw him go after a smaller fox as they when out of camp. With that we rushed out of camp. As we were racing through the forest with one of the Sunclan warriors,Amberspirit, leading the group of mingled warriors Fearherblaze ran up and asked Amberspirit" Is that cat from your clan?". We all stopped and looked at the mysterious tom who appeared to be huddled around something." FOXPAW! COME HERE NOW! WE'VE BEEN WORRIED SICK!" I heard Featherblaze shout out. "But I wanna' stay with dad!". "DAD?!" every one announced at the same time."How is your mother?" Foxpaw's dad asked." some mean scary cat killed her." " Bit wait I thought your mother died giving birth?!" I responded." No that's not turn we were actually 5 moons old but we are abnormally small. Some dark hazy cat with a cut across his nose came up and asked us to go with him but my mother disagreed. The the big tom demanded that the gave her kits to him and with that he slashed her belly open then left. That's when some Spiritclan warriors came and told an apprentice to go back to camp and tell Duskstar. Then that hazy cat reappeared and took my second sister away. He said if we wanted our sister back we would have to go to some weird place called Bloodclan."Man that was some flash back so first off there are three of you, then the hazy cat you saw was Tigerclaw, we kept you in the nursery to long, AND WE HAVE TO GO TO BLOODCLAN TO SAVE YOUR OTHER SISTER?!" explained Lionpaw. "well that was some sort of father son bonding time oh and by the way the names' Nick and I do believe that we are going to spend some time together." said Foxpaw's father. "Yes we are Nick, and Foxpaw can you tell me what these warriors looked like?"i aske hoping to find some bit of evidence because at the moment I felt like sherlock."No, they had left. Then when the apprentice got back he showed a new group where we where." explained Foxpaw."And who would that apprentice be?" I asked." I think it was long paw."." BE he was killed by a rouge!" I yowlled. " That is not true ether." said a mysterious she-cat appearing from the bushes."MORE STRANGE CATS?!" Lionpaw blurted." I'm Jasmine but the cat you said was long paw was not killed by a rouge. I witnessed it all. theses same cats came and murdered him to conceal evidence."."ok first off how do you know what an apprentice is?" I asked."I know Because I was Spiritclans former deputy exiled away by the murderous leader you all know of,Linxstar. I am Jasminefur." with that wings and and a necklace with a crystal gem started forming a rounder her just as mine do." I was good friends with Foxpaw's mother, Lin, and when my belly became swollen with Nick's kits I gave them to Lin because some cat said that he would kill me and my un-born kits if its is was the last thin he did. And your father has hid it well, Foxpaw and Craystalpaw I'm you real mother."
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