These 50 sentences were written for a LiveJournal writing challenge called "1sentence." I had to write one sentence on each of 50 prompts, all relating to the pairing I chose, which was (predictably) John/Aeryn. I chose to put my sentences in chronological order, making the whole thing into a relatively cohesive overview of the evolution of the J/A relationship. I know I got kinda semicolon happy in places, but I'm still rather fond of this experiment.
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Fifty Snapshots
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#36
- Market
(Premiere)
John Crichton's first small step --
humankind's first giant leap -- into the bustle of alien
civilization was taken in the open-air market center of a commerce
planet, small, filthy, crowded and loud; and though Aeryn called it
backwater and scum, John thought it must be paradise.
#40 -
Innocence
(PK Tech Girl)
Aeryn was hot-blooded (metaphorically)
and hard-headed and still punished anyone within reach for the loss
of her perfect soldier's life, while Gilina was sweet and
innocent and blonde (not to mention, she looked achingly like Alex);
it oughtn't to have been that hard a decision, but John was
discovering fast that deep space was not so simple as Captain Kirk
would have had him believe.
#07 - Chocolate
Losing Earth
and all that went with it was worse than the worst cold-turkey
withdrawal John could have ever imagined, but when he finally
realized that he had fallen in love -- with Aeryn, with space, with
life on Moya -- the pain began to ease at the thought of all the
things he would share when he found Earth again, the first and most
desperate of those things being chocolate.
#09 -
Telephone
John liked the immediacy and inherent science
fictiony-ness of the comms -- they helped him adjust to conversation
without sight in a way that telephones never had, and besides, one
sharp word in Aeryn's voice during a time of crisis was worth
more than all the phone companies on Earth combined.
#10 -
Ears
There had never been more truth to the saying 'the
walls have ears' than John had discovered in the process of
living on a Leviathan; even Aeryn, used to military conformism and
close scrutiny from higher-ups, was sometimes disconcerted by the
sheer amount of knowledge Pilot and Moya managed to gather about the
crew's private lives.
#15 - Touch
For the longest
time, she didn't understand his constant need to touch
everything he saw, as if the reality of the universe was directly
proportional to the amount of physical contact he had with it.
#02
- Kiss
(The Flax, A Human Reaction)
The incident on the dead
transport pod was a collision born of pure desperation, but neither
of them could deny that something deeper had driven them to it -- and
later, on the Ancient's false Earth, they began the awkward
process of admitting to themselves what that something was.
#06
- Rain
(A Human Reaction)
It was only afterwards that John
realized how wrong he had been to look out at the rain and see only a
grey dreariness and an obstacle to their escape, when he could have
watched springtime bloom on Aeryn's upturned face.
#28
- Sickness
(Nerve)
Her gut roiled and rebelled, diaphragm
spasming as she heaved, each breath a little more like dying; she saw
him even through the fever, his too-close face all blurry concern,
and some grudging, stubborn part of her resolved to hang on a little
longer.
#04 - Pain
(Nerve, The Hidden Memory)
Pain, even
when bloodless, was a messy business: all saliva and sweat and snot
and tears and horrible tastes in the back of his throat; but where
Scorpius thought he was hiding wormholes and Gilina thought he was
hiding their history, they were all wrong, and the most painful task
of all was hiding the memory of tangled hair and bloodied knuckles
that lay deep beneath the surface.
#18 - Speed
(Family
Ties)
When the hellish headlong dive was over, the adrenaline rush
subsiding and leaving only a residue of cold, oily fear in the pit of
John's stomach (she will come for us, she has to), he
found himself wishing for that speed again as the dark vertigo of
space swallowed up his and D'Argo's infinitesimal
forms.
#23 - Hands
(Mind the Baby)
Her hand was smaller
than his but the wiry strength of it sang through his palm, their
pulses synchronizing for an instant as their fingers intertwined, and
it was then that he knew this was not goodbye.
#32 -
Confusion
(Our of Their Minds)
Even in Rygel's body --
even in his own -- John could recognize Aeryn's voice before
any of the others; she wore any body comfortably, as if it were her
own, and he understood more than ever that her strength went far
beyond the physical.
#48 - Waves
(Look at the
Princess)
Because of that utter yotz Dregon and his
frelling fear of heights, Aeryn was developing a deep loathing of the
ocean -- she spent hours signaling out to sea before Dregon
regained consciousness long enough to tell her that ships never
sailed there; at least Crichton's dead weight wasn't so
frelling literal.
#11 - Name
(Look at the
Princess)
John tried, tried so hard it was almost a physical pain
at times, but could not quite convince himself that because Aeryn had
not borne her, his daughter meant any less to him; after all, he
would never live to see her birth, much less know her name.
#37
- Technology
(Soon after My Three Crichtons)
Aeryn was taking
parts from his ship for her Prowler again, but this time John said
nothing -- not to avoid a recurrence of Pot & Kettle syndrome,
from which the two of them suffered often, but because she moved with
a steel-toed kind of grace, all concentration and military precision;
and if there was one thing John had always loved to watch, it was the
skilled manipulation of technology.
#46 - Sun
(Won't
Get Fooled Again)
Sun, John thought, intertwined and
balanced precariously in one of the balcony railings at the fake IASA
building like a child on a set of monkey bars, sun, sunlight on my
shoulders, Officer Aeryn Sun, come on Mister Sunshine won't
you come out and play... and the inanities went on and on and on,
until he was sick with them and sick with vertigo and sick with the
knowledge that he could never leave this mad, made-up world -- that
he was so very, very frelled in every way.
#38 - Gift
(The
Locket)
When John told Aeryn that Chiana had stolen the locket, he
had been incredulous that the fact had surprised her and had indeed
caused her pain; he realized later, cane in one hand and the other
arm around her stooped shoulders as they looked out at their garden,
that perhaps the locket was the first real gift she had ever been
given.
#33 - Fear
(LGaM: With Friends Like These...)
Aeryn
had never known such fear as she felt when Jothee's innocent,
uncomprehending eyes turned to hers, his voice echoing in her ears:
he let me go...
#19 - Wind
(LGaM: Plan B)
John felt Moya's
descent deep in his bones, a subsonic rumble that crescendoed
unbearably as she swept past the Depository, shattering every window
with her engine-whine battle cry; and John laughed as the wind of her
passage whipped glass shards towards his unprotected face, referring
not just to Moya when he thought, That's my girl!
#35
- Bonds & #49 - Hair
(Die Me, Dichotomy)
The cuffs were
cold, made of some metal that he wanted to call steel but probably
wasn't -- just another thing he didn't know, like the
presence of the frozen lake, like what he'd said in the neural
cluster. Holding D'Argo's knife in obscenely steady
hands, he thought what a grim irony it would be to pull a Romeo right
there and then -- he could feel the expectation in their gazes,
burning into the back of his skull -- but he leaned down and gently
took a lock of her fine hair instead; it felt warmer than her
skin.
#45 - Hell
(Season of Death)
Somehow when she was
just there, standing there, Qualta Blade in one hand and
silver suit near-invisible against the white but for its shining, it
was easy to believe she had never been gone; but when she spoke and
John tried to comprehend it, his mind failed him, so he held her
instead, tight enough to bruise -- and the only hell he could imagine
was letting go.
#22 - Jealousy
(Green-Eyed Monster)
As
John watched Talyn's fabricated recording, the surge of sheer,
seething hatred that overtook him was nearly enough to make him
retch; ironically, that rage was probably what saved Crais's
life -- since John, so terrified of what he had felt himself capable
of for that one instant, retreated into an emotional paralysis that
only allowed for cold glares and petulance.
#17 -
Tears
(Relativity)
"You know, there's a line in a
movie I saw when I was a kid," John murmured once her tears
were spent and she lay still as death in his arms; "'If
you've become human enough to cry, no power in the world can
change you back.'"
#14 - Sex
(Meltdown)
John
had gotten pretty used to being mind-frelled and some part of him
recognized the symptoms, but this time it was completely voluntary
and considering the circumstances, the only thing he could think was
frell the consequences, because nothing mattered except Aeryn,
gasping up against Talyn's blood-red walls.
#12 -
Sensual
Aeryn had never thought of anything masculine as being
sensual -- passionate and rough, yes, and often simple -- but
though John's words were given Sebacean meaning and inflection
by her translator microbes, his accent was still there: strange and
lilting, and so rich... There was really no other word to describe
it.
#03 - Soft
Though John's hair looked coarse to
the uninformed, Aeryn knew the secret texture of it; but nothing
about him was as soft as his heart, save perhaps his eyes when he
watched her pretending to sleep.
#08 - Happiness
Moments
were all they had, fleeting touches and smaller smiles, an unplanned
and indispensable code of body language and empathy; they were
constantly forced to find new understanding of the transient nature
of happiness.
#16 - Weakness
(Thanks for Sharing--Infinite
Possibilities: Icarus Abides)
When she finally gave in to it, that
sentimentality she had always been told was a weakness she found to
be her greatest source of strength; and even as he lay dying beside
her, she could not regret that one discovery.
#30 - Star
(The
Choice, reference to Green-Eyed Monster)
The city lights drowned
out the light of the star he'd named after her... maybe that
was part of the reason she'd chosen this place.
#13 -
Death
(Fractures)
Seeing him standing there, with all the
innocence and weariness and hope of the Atlas character he -- the
other one -- had told her about, Aeryn felt something break deep
inside her, though she had not thought there was anything left that
could.
#21 - Life
(Dog With Two Bones)
Life or death in
a coin toss: all the adventure stories John had ever read came
rushing back, and decided then that he detested fiction, loathed the
nagging childhood lesson that everything would turn out all right in
the end.
#39 - Smile
(Crichton Kicks)
Aeryn smiled at
him as she lay stretched out on the warm sand, and her face was (to
be utterly cliché) radiant as the sun and made her whole being
light up -- well, okay, John admitted, that image was disgustingly
saccharine and utterly ridiculous, but he was running out of decent
hallucinations to occupy the miserable, lonely days.
#44 -
Heaven
(Promises)
Being rid of Harvey at last should have been
heaven itself, but with the sickly shock of a discovery long
suspected but never admitted, John realized that his own mind was a
terribly lonely place without another presence to fill it... and the
knowledge made him ache for Aeryn all the more.
#50 -
Supernova
(Kansas)
Aeryn wore all clothes as if they were
uniforms, but seeing her military precision wrapped up in a sixties
hippie costume cracked John up so much he could hardly talk to her;
he kept it to himself, though, because how was she to know that
bellbottoms in a supernova of pastel shades was not exactly everyday
wear on Earth?
#24 - Taste
(Terra Firma)
It tastes
like Fellip nectar, John thought, though he had never tasted
Fellip nectar and perhaps never would; but he kept the bitter thought
to himself and continued to sip the beer his father had handed
him.
#05 - Potatoes
(Terra Firma)
Of all the
extravagances John's alien friends were pampered with upon his
return to Earth, Aeryn approved of nothing so much as the common
potato: "Like a natural food cube," she said, the
militaristic pragmatism still running strong in her veins, and John
loved her all the more for choosing French fries over caviar.
#29
- Melody
(reference to Unrealized Reality)
John tried to pay
Aeryn back for learning English by letting her give him lessons in
Sebacean, though they mainly resulted in fits of shared hysteria and
her being too amused by his ineptitude to continue -- even so, John
thought the language was beautiful, almost melodic.
#27 -
Blood
John was always warm to the touch, even when he claimed to
be cold; Aeryn sometimes wondered what it would be like to have hot
blood -- a fever under her skin, the Living Death running in her
veins and herself unaffected by it, free of the greatest weakness of
her race.
#01 - Comfort
Fate seemed to conspire against
them at every turn, and it ran against all logic that each could
still take comfort in the barest glance or whisper from the other...
but they had both thrown logic out the window years ago, on the day
they had lost everything they'd ever known while gaining only
each other.
#26 - Forever
Aeryn hated the concept of
eternity -- maybe from some residual Peacekeeper conditioning, or
maybe she just couldn't stand the thought of having that long
to worry about losing John; one way or another, he understood, and
his few whispered endearments never mentioned "forever."
#47
- Moon
(Bad Timing)
John had a little time, not much, but
enough nonetheless -- enough to let a handful of grey dust run
through his protected fingers, forming a little mound that would
remain unchanged forever, or until his father's footsteps
erased it; this he hoped, this he prayed for above all things: that
Jack Crichton's legacy was not quite over, that mankind had
one more old-fashioned moonshot left in it before the technology John
was leaving behind made rockets obsolete.
#43 - Sky
(Bad
Timing)
The baby was his and Aeryn had said yes and at that
moment, the sky was anything but the limit -- it was only the
beginning.
#41 - Completion & #20 - Freedom
(post-PKW)
The
Eidelons' great work was only barely begun, and would never be
finished -- John was well-traveled enough to know that much. But for
now, at least, there would be peace: a little time to rest, a little
room to breathe, and a whole universe to explore -- together.
#25
- Devotion
(post-PKW)
The fierceness of her devotion stunned
him at times -- her almost animalistic single-mindedness, her
willingness to kill or be killed when it came to protecting their
child; it reminded him of the soldier she had once been.
#42 -
Clouds & #34 - Lightning/Thunder
(post-PKW, reference to
AHR)
"I'd like to see it again," Aeryn sighed,
leaning back against him; "Earth, I mean -- the rain, the
clouds."
"Next time we find it, we'll stay through spring," John murmured against the nape of her neck, as they swayed gently together on Moya's terrace; "Rain ain't nothing 'til you've danced in a thunderstorm."
#31 - Home
Home: it had forever been
the object of their travels, but in the end, each knew that it could
exist nowhere without the other.
