I don't own any of the Jak series, but I am a JakxKeira, TornxAshelin, and DaxterxTess fan. Sig is cool, but he needs a girl partner. Hmm... probably and OC related to one of the characters. My first fanfiction. Also, there will be two stories that are related to each other. Same story, different POV.
Title: My Tainted Angel: Jak's Vow
Summary: After Jak X: Jak was called over to hear that a new enemy has come, and he vowed that he will hunt down the creature that took his love away. Two years later, his love came back to help the Freedom League with an ally by her side. However, he doesn't know that his love became one of them.
Warning: Mini introduction is a spoiler to those who have NOT played the Jak series. I checked a web about their ages. Here it is.
Jak: 19, later 21
Keira: 18, later 20
Ashelin: 24, later 26
Torn: 30, later 32
Sig: 28, later 30
New character: I'm thinking about 25, later 27
by: Animefreak1457
Chapter 1: Bad Omen
It was a normal day in Haven City. The weather was cloudy, so no one couldn't tell if it was mid-afternoon or afternoon. The people... excuse me... elves walked on the ground, minding their own business. The new KGs were still on duty from morning, afternoon, and evening. The zoomers over their heads were flying like cars in our world. Not long ago, it was ruled by their former ruler, Baron Praxis, which many hate and some formed the Underground. Later, it was ruled by his daughter, Ashelin Praxis, who took part of the Underground. There was many battles and losses, but everyone survived, both Haven City and Spargus.
Spargus was known as the "Forgotten Ones". It was a place where the exiled were in a desert. "Only the strong survives" to what they say. The ruler Damas was the strongest warrior and the founder of Spargus City. However over a year, it was no longer forgotten thanks to Jak Mar. Strange as it seems, Jak was supposed to be born in the future... the time when Haven City and Spargus started, the son of Damas Mar. However, he was sent into the past to be prepared in Sandover village for the adventure that awaits for him. The hero saved the lives of many others and was well known in three places.
Yes, three places. You all know the two cities, but there was another. The city, Kras, was famous for their annual racing competition. Many died during the beginning, middle, or the finals of the competition. One team was forced to win the whole thing. Jak's team were poisoned by the dead dealer and former owner of the bar, Krew. They managed to win the race, but G.T. Blitz took the antidote from Rayn, Krew's daughter, and revealed himself as Mizo. Jak was able to retrieve the antidote and get everyone cured, but they found out that Rayn betrayed them after she left the team through Krew's diary.
Well, the adventure was over for all of them, Jak, Daxter, Keira, Ashelin, Torn, Tess, and the others. Everyday was peaceful and normal for those who took part of the adventure. Jak and Daxter were still doing errands and getting their lives and asses in risks where no one would do. Ashelin and Torn, the advisor, were still in Haven City with minor reports within the city. Sig was ruler of Spargus City and was still killing Metalheads in a killing spree if he had nothing to do. He also had to be on a look out for Marauders outside of the city. Kleiver was fixing up some of the vehicles that looked like they were taken to a crazy ride outside. The Naughty Ottsel was run by Tess, Daxter's ottsel/precursor girlfriend. The others relaxed or did what they normally do. Samos was in the Haven Forest either meditating or doing something like all sages do. Onin was in her tent predicting the future, but the future she saw didn't look too well.
"Rrrraaaawwwck! What? You're saying that... rrraaawwwck... something terrible is going to happen to this city?" The monkaw, Pecker, asked the blinded wise old woman. Onin nodded solemnly and made signs as light emitted from her fingertips to draw. Pecker watched her draw something that was strange. As she finished, the monkaw examined the drawing. It was two wings, one was filled in, the other was empty.
"What is this?"
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"I'll see you later, Dax." An elf with blond hair dropped off an ottsel who was wearing pants near the Naughty Ottsel. The head of Daxter was finally placed back to its original position. The young man started to drive to zoomer and took off. Daxter yelled out to his best friend.
"Jak! Remember! Come back for the victory party around 6, okay!?"
"Alright!" Jak replied. The elf drove the zoomer around the city and avoided the Freedom League's guards and vehicles. His driving skills from the race improved dramatically that he didn't even crash into the other zoomers or wall. He looked ahead and smiled at his first and favorite destination. Near the stadium where both the races and jet-board park were, there was a garage where someone was working in.
Jak halted his zoomer near the entrance and jumped of the vehicle. He walked inside and found his blue-and-green haired, emerald eyed mechanic scribbling down on the clipboard as fast as she can. He looked around her garage and saw the two vehicles aside and a new one that was slightly steaming.
"Hey, Keira." He smiled. The blue-and-green haired she-elf stopped her writing. The mechanic turned her head around and smiled, just for him.
"Hey, Jak." She replied. He walked toward her and wrapped his arms around her waist. He nuzzled his nose in the right crook of her neck and inhaled her scent. God, he love how she smell. She smelled like the ocean back in Sandover village and bluebell flowers. Even though she worked as a mechanic, she always keep the scent of her memorable birthplace. He felt Keira squirmed and giggled as he continued to nuzzle between her neck and shoulder. He smiled and kissed her neck which caused his love to sigh. He loves Keira so much that if he had one last wish, he wanted to make Keira the happiest person in his universe and see the loving smile just for him. He rested his chin on her shoulder and looked at the clipboard. She giggled as his goatee brushed lightly against her shoulder. She continued to write down on the clipboard, and she asked.
"So... how was the mission?" Keira asked.
"It wasn't hard." Jak shrugged. Keira gave him a disbelieving look. "Okay, it was a little hard, but it wasn't that bad."
"You're telling me that collecting artifacts from the desert, getting chased by Marauders, and risking your life outside of the desert wasn't bad?" Jak shrugged.
"I'm used to it. It was better than facing the Metal Head leader, Errol, or Mizo." Keira nodded, and she finished her clipboard. Jak looked at the results for the wrecked up zoomer and whistled.
Three zoomers in one week? Damn.
"Again? This is the third time this week." Jak stated. He caught her eye roll from the corner of his eye and saw the clipboard finished and put down. He was caught in surprise to feel her lips crashing into his. He relaxed and thought about nothing but Keira's kiss. He tightened his hold around her like she was about to disappear from his grasp. He reacted on instinct and licked her bottom lip. She gasped, and Jak took the opportunity to slip his tongue in her mouth. He love the taste and lusted for more. However, it ended quickly when a trouble-making friend came in.
"Hey, Jak!" The two broke apart the kiss but didn't let go of each other. They glared at the incoming precursor, Daxter, who was walking toward the garage.
"What, Dax?" Jak growled. What a way to ruin the moment.
"Onin needs us. Pronto. Now hurry up, lover boy." Daxter informed while he walked away from the couples. Jak growled even more and cursed under his breath. Keira giggled and planted a small kiss on his nose to turn his attention to her instead.
"Don't worry, Jak. I have to go to get a replacement for the engine. You're needed for whatever mission Onin gives you." Keira said. Jak nodded and gave Keira a passionate kiss before he whispered huskily in her left ear.
"I love you so much, Keir." Keira smiled and whispered back.
"I love you, too, Jak. More than you ever know." Jak kissed Keira's right cheek and released her. He walked a few feet away and gave a glance to the she-elf. Keira waved to tell him to go ahead. Jak smiled and turned back to his path. Keira was out of his sight, and he looked ahead to see Daxter sitting on the zoomer.
"Did Jakkie have a good time with Keira?" Daxter teased his best friends.
"Shut up, Daxter." Jak growled as he got on the zoomer, and the precursor jumped and sat on his shoulder.
"Oh! I forgot to tell you that the green old geezer is coming, too." Daxter added. Jak nodded and turned the zoomer on.
"Hang on, Dax!" Jak quickly flew, much to Daxter's screaming, toward his next destination: Onin's tent. He hoped that it wasn't going to be another bad omen. Too bad fate has to do something... drastic.
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The two halted in front of the tent in the middle of the plaza. Daxter panted from screaming and telling Jak to slow down. However, Jak ignored him and picked up the speed due to making this mission fast, so he could spend some time with the blue haired she-elf. Jak jumped off the zoomer and entered the tent where the old woman and Daxter's enemy who was half monkey, half parrot.
"Where have you been!" The monkaw squawked and made another lecture about skipping their lunch again for ten minutes while Daxter was arguing back about the Freedom Guards firing at them again.
"Shut up! Both of you. I could hear you from outside of the tent." Samos entered inside the tent. Pecker and Daxter now argued at the Green Sage who was a little pissed off.
"Anyways..." Jak interrupted them and their argument, "why are we here?" Onin started to make hand signed and made light emitting out of her fingers. Pecker translated it.
"Onin says that there is a new threat coming to Haven City. She said that they are searching for something in the area. She doesn't know what are they looking for because they have a strange but strong power."
"What kind of new goons would searching for something in a place like this?" Daxter asked. Onin's fingers glowed and started to draw. The light left a trail and made some kind of sign or signs.
"What's that?" Samos observed. The sign looked like two spread out wings. One was colored in, and the other was empty. Samos looked a little closer at the sign and gasped.
"What is it, Samos?" Jak asked.
"It can't be. Onin, is this the correct sign that you sensed early?" The Green Sage asked. The old woman nodded but then shot her head up. She rapidly made signs again, and her facial expression looked like in a panic. Pecker translated.
"Onin says that they have sensed her and sent her a message. They said, 'We will not stop our search and kill anyone who stands on our way.'"
How could they sensed Onin? Jak thought in surprise. Whatever they are, they must be strong.
"Could you tell them what are they looking for? We could help search for them without any violence involving around the people." Samos asked. Onin closed her eyes and talked to them though her mind. Then, she shot her eyes open and shook her head while making the hand signs again.
"Onin says that they blocked her off!" Pecker exclaimed.
"Does that mean we're in danger?" Daxter squeaked. Samos nodded solemnly.
"I'm afraid so." Then, Jak's communicator went off and a male's voice was heard.
"Jak! We have bad news! Five of my men reported that an army in the sky are heading towards the city! They are armed and attacked the two defenses outside of Haven City! You need to be outside and take out many as you can!"
"An army in the sky? Torn, no one could fight in the air!" Jak said.
"Not without wings." Torn said.
"Torn, could you alert Sig from Spargus?" Jak asked.
"I did! But, something's blocking the communicator. I also contacted Kras City, but it was the same problem like Spargus. Something must have blocked off the communication center. I got Vin through, and he's going to check what's the problem. Right now, I'll set the alarm on." The communicator went off, and on the nick of time, the sirens went off. Jak took out his gun behind his back and changed his Morph Gun to Blaster Mode.
"Let's go." Jak said to Daxter. Daxter laughed sheepishly and got on the elf's shoulder. Before Jak went out of the tent, Samos warned him.
"Be careful, Jak. These new enemies may be stronger than you think. So be wary around and above you." Jak nodded and went out for another battle.
There's going to be a similar story to this but with Keira's POV. Also, I need a grammer/spelling checker to keep me on the right track and completed the whole Jak series.
