atuhors' note: hay this iz my first narnia fic its peter/oc and edmund/oc hope ya likey

Once there waz a chik nmed Bernice. She was twlef years old and was super pretty and popular. all of da ghuys are her skool wanted to date her.

"Hai mom im home!" she sed as she walked in har house from shcool.

"Hay hunn guess what!" her mom sed.

"WHAT!?" Bernie knew dat there was a special surprise that her mom was gon tell her.

"Yourer going to visit unkle kirke in the countryside!"

Berniies' face fell. "aw mom I don't wanna go there!' she complaned

"Yur going because unkle kirtke is old and needs to spend time wit his nefew!!"

"FINE!" she angryliy stomped into har room all angry n' such. how culd her mom do this to her!? "MY LIFE SUCKS!" she screamded in her head.

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ther was a big mansion. bernie had been there b4 but it was wen she was littler so she oculdn't remember that well. she looked pretty glum as she wlked up to the house. inside there was no one around so she went upstrairs to the rom with the big pretty wardrobe that she used to luv when she was yungur.

"Woah its so big!" she exclamed

then a girl with long blond hair and blue eys that was very beautiful but not as beautilful as bernice cmae in. 'hey are you bernice"? she aseked.

"yeah this is real, this is me"

oke hi im agatha but you can call me aggie"

"yeah call me bernie dats what everyon cals me at home'

"okay we should be friends"

"Yeah sounds like a plan!" bernie sighd. "so whers uncle?'

"i duno. hey this is a kool wardrobe wats in it?"

'I don't know ive never been inside it.' bernie admitted

'wanna go in?"

"totally!" the two best friedsn climbed into the wardrobe

"wow its huge in here!' sed aggie

"ouch you stepped n my foot"

'Did not!'

"did to"

all of a sudden the girls found themselves laying in snow. they hurd voiced and walked over to see four kidz.

"Whore they?" asced bernice

"I don't know lets check it out"

'kay'

"HEy whore you?" aggie shouted at dem.

"wur peter, lucy, susan, nd edmund whore you?"sed this rly hot guy that waz peter that bernice had a huge crush on

"were bernie and aggie" sed aggie. aggie thot that edmund was cute and thought that she mite hav a crush on him. she though he looked like kevin jonas who aggie thought was a hunk

'wut r u doing here?" petar asked, gazing at bernice. bernie had long blond hair that was kinda curly and rly big pretty green eyes that peter got lost in cause they were so mesmorizing.

"we went into a wardrobe and we ended up her" bernie said, checking perer out

"yeah thats what happend to us." edmund said, totally hitting on aggie

'we were going to see a fawn wanna come?' peter asked

aggie and bernie look at each othear and grinned, then turned to the guys and sed "TOTALLY!"

was it okay? shuld i continiue? please leave ur honest opinion and suggestions okay thans!