I in no way own harry potter Jk Rowling does so this is the story I came up with
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Voldemort burst open the door. "Lily its him run and take the kids I'll hold him off! " Voldemort just laughed madly and they had a duel but James could not beat him and he was stunned.
After he stunned James he slowly made his way upstairsto lily and the 3 kids. Then he blasted open the door of the nursery and Lily screamed and took the full blast but one piece cut the baby girl (Harry's sister) leaving a V like mark on her forehead. Then Lily tried to have her babies spared but Voldemort wouldn't let her so he stunned her and shoved her aside so she was facing the wall and then turned to the kids.
Harry and his twin Hunter got in front of Amber protectively so he shot the killing curse at both of them and it re-bounded off of both of their heads and was sent back to Voldemort who screamed and crumbled to ashes. Voldemort's last thoughts where "when I return you will pay Harry and hunter potter!!!"
The blast had been so powerful it had made the twins fly to the other side of the room and get knocked out. Then Dumbledore , Sirius Remus, and James burst in the room and un-stunned lily.
Then Dumbledore picked up Amber and said "All hail Amber Potter the girl-who-lived!!" And everyone cooed over her and the twins where shoved in the shadows only noticed by there godfather's and the house elves.
Ok so what do you think? Good bad awesome horrible?