(Disclaimer) All the rights for the used characters in this Story(As well as every other used element from the game) belong to Square Enix, for developing the original game on which my story is based on
Chapter 1
The six L'Cie went through the last part of the Yashas-Massiv that parted them from Vallis Middia, the place were they built up their camp.
Hope went a little way behind the others to sort his thoughts a bit, because there are many things that are going trough his head at the moment.
One part of him was thinking about their future travel to Oerba, Vanille and Fangs home was the place where their last hope of salvation were lying.
But it's still a long way to that place, even if they would hurry it will last at least two or three days, thats what Fang told them while they explored the Yashas-Massiv today. Three days could sound like a short time for normal people, but it feels like an eternity for a L'Cie, Hope knew that they don't have much time and it was a terrible thought for him to think about the possibility of witness their transformation into C'ieths, especially because he knows that he will be probably the first one whose time runs out, because of his emotional outbursts in the past.
Those unpleasant thoughts were one part, the other part was turning about the girl that he can't get out of his thoughts, he had no idea why but he couldn't stop thinking about Vanille, he really loves to hear her voice and he couldn't deny that he finds her very beautiful.
He never felt something like this before and it is something that made him a bit uncertain because it feels like an impossibility to sort his feelings for her into a category.
The thought of falling in love would be a complete new thing for the fourteen years old boy and he has no idea how to handle that kind of feelings, especially with his shyness. He had to fade out his thoughts as he noticed that they finally arrived at the camp, he looked at Vanille one last and short time before he started to help the others to build up the camp again.
The sun was already low at the sky and colored it into a beautiful mixture of different tones of red and purple light.
This is the new first chapter that serves as a little introduction that shall help you a bit to imagine the direction of my story.
I reworked it because I noticed that many people stopped reading after the first chapter and I can retrace why that happend, it was way too short and I think it wasn't written very well, sry. about this. I hope this is at least a bit better than the old one.
Thank you for reading. ~SKape