Death by Snow
Ok really quick before I start this story. I am Jaimee (my account name is beXdifferent) and I will be the author. This is my first story so please review and comment my writing. So, I guess that's it. Read, review, comment!
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"We're finally here!" I screamed. I couldn't stand being on that bus anymore. I was going to go crazy. Finally, my friends and I are at the hotel. We were staying at the Overidge Hotel. (Yes I did just make that up.) It is the best hotel in America. We got to go because when won a two week stay here.
Happy to get off the bus, I was the first one bounding down the stairs. My name is Jaimee. I have short, blonde hair that just about reaches my chin. I am wearing my hair straight with me bangs completely covering my right eye. I am wearing kind of tight jeans, a vest shirt, a black and white checkered belt, and skull earrings. I am a happy and unpredictable person.
Next off the bus is Lauren. She is wearing her short, brown hair down and her glasses as usual. Her outfit is composed of a sweat-shirt, swear-pants, and my favorite red and white socks. By the way, these socks light up when she walks. They are amazing. Ohh, Lauren is totally insane!!!!
After Lauren got off the bus, Alyssa, Kaleena, Sara, and Ashley all tried to get off the bus at the same time. Sara pushes through first because she hates being the inside of a sandwich. Her long, red hair was all messed up. Her shirt with the pb&j sandwich on it was wrinkled and twisted around. She quickly stepped of the bus to fix everything. She hated disorganization. Soon enough, Alyssa was off the bus. Her brown and black hair had some how managed to stay in a perfect pony tail through the whole mess. She was wearing a skull t-shirt and angel wing earrings. She wasn't mad about the whole pushing thing. Alyssa never really held grudges.
Ashley fought past Kaleena, who at this point had given up. Ashley was wearing her blonde hair straight, instead of curly today. She was wearing a baggy shirt and jeans. She was a very simple person. Now here comes Kaleena. She came down the stairs looking a little ticked off, but she forgot about it and moved on. She was wearing a simple shirt from Hollister and jeans. Kaleena is quiet, when she wants to be. Other times, she is crazy, loud, and wow!
The first guy off the bus was Dustin. Obviously, he had had too many energy drinks and needed to run them off. His hair was all messed up and he was wearing his favorite red jacket. He wore it all the time. In case you haven't noticed yet, Dustin is a hyper kid, who loves energy drinks. We all stood there and yelled at him for it, but he just blew us off like he always does.
Then came Devon and Ian off the bus at the same time. Devon was wearing his blue sweat-shirt and Bob Marley belt. Ian was wearing jeans and a sweat-shirt. They were both simple people. Simple and Annoying.
Last off the bus was Ethan. Ethan was new to our little group of friends and was just getting to know everybody. He told us the other day that he would have never guessed we were so cool and fun to be around. Ethan is simple yet complex at the same time. None of us has figured out how he can do that. It is very weird but cool.
The bus has just left and we are still standing on the side walk talking. I realized about half an hour later that it was freezing and I want to go inside. "Why are we standing out here freezing to death instead of going outside?" I said kind of loudly. They all looked at me like they were all thinking the same thing. "She might have a point." For once I felt smart.
We all walked into the hotel at the same time. We waited in the lobby forever. Finally, the hotel manager found and greeted us. "Welcome to the Overidge Hotel. You must be the contest winners." Lauren excitedly answered, "Yes we are. I am so excited to be here. This hotel is beautiful!" Lauren was talking so fast that nobody could understand her. We all laughed and Kaleena started to narrate Lauren. The manager just laughed.
He took us on a tour of the hotel and showed us where everything was. We thought it was cool, but why did we need to know these kinds of things. Like, he showed us the basement and the kitchen. The whole time he was doing this, he kept looking at me funny. It was freakin me out.
When we returned to the lobby, we saw that nobody was there. He told us that he had to go somewhere and that he would be back in a flash. Soon after he left, we all started to talk about how weird he was acting. "Did you hear the way he laughed?" "Did he look at me weird?" "This guy is a creep."
Next thing we know we hear a car's engine. We all turn around to find the manager in his car driving off. We all ran to the door to find out what was going on, but the door was locked. On the door was a note. It read:
When it snows at the Overidge hotel the roads get horrible and nobody can get up here. So, we needed winter care takers. You won the contest. You will be the care takers. I hope you guys make it.
The Manager
Sara and Kaleena are freaking out. All off the guys are laughing thinking that this is a joke. Alyssa, Ashley, Lauren, and I knew what was going on. We were going to be stuck here for five months. The only thing we didn't understand was I hope you guys make it. That part had me puzzled. Though I wasn't worried about that yet, I am worried about being stuck up here.
I heard a jingling sound. I look at my feet to find a set of keys. I found the key that unlocks the front door. Though, by the time I got the door unlocked, nobody was there. Not even a car we could steal. We were stuck. Stranded.
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Well that's it for the first chapter. This is my first story so I hope you guys like it. The people in this story are all real people. Just letting you know. Anyway please comment and review. Please stayed tuned for the next chapter. It should be up very, very soon. Thank you all very much.
Jaimee
beXdifferent