Harry Potter: Completely Corrected.

By, Eleanor Sears

So, please remember this is an alternate universe, so you may not be familiar with some characters. Evan and Charlotte are Harry's younger siblings, and I will introduce you to any important characters at start of chapter.

Chapter #1 Narrated by James Potter I

February 10th, 1986, Monday

I leaned my chair back and ruffled my hair.

"Hey, James, I wish you would stop messing your hair." Said Sirius who was sitting at the desk next to mine.

"It's become a habit," I told him, "I do it naturally." He smiled.

"I bet you drive Lily batty." He said. Honestly, Sirius can be annoying sometimes, even if he is my best mate.

"I do not. That's a silly comment. She's to busy to notice anyway."

"You've got a point. I don't have any kids, so busy is probably a hell of a lot busier with 3 kids than with none." He said.

I gave him a look. He laughed. "Alright. I get it. Um, we worked 11 minutes late." I looked at his watch. He was quite right. I stood up, put on my coat, and walked to the elevator. I was followed in to it by Sirius, Arthur Weasley, and Amelia Bones.

"I bet you can't wait to get home, James. I bet it's really loud." Teased Sirius. I knew he was teasing, but he had a point. My family is darn loud. Charlotte is 8 months old, and is usually crying. Evan is 3 and is just noisy. Harry's 5, and he's usually fine, but he currently has a fever.

"Well," I told Sirius, "At least I can escape to the Department of Magical Law Enforcement every day with my best mate." Sirius grinned radiantly at me as the elevator hurtled to a stop at the atrium. I apparated home and opened the door to hear the lovely noise.

"I'm home!" I called, putting my coat on the hook.

"Thank goodness!" replied Lily from the kitchen, "I was starting to think you were never going to come ho- Evan! Please be quiet!"

I entered the kitchen, where Lily was trying to give Harry his medicine, and he was putting up quite the fuss, feed Charlotte, who never wants to be fed, and shut Evan up, and that is probably the hardest task. For me it's quite easy.

"Hey, Evan." I said, "Would you please shut it?" Then Evan shut up.