Right this is my first story if u don't like it tell me, if u do like it tell me.

"Right u ready for this" asked the most gothic girl in the whole of Morganville, Eve.

"I think so but what if I get rejected I don't think I could handle that," said Shane nervously sitting in the kitchen at the Glass house.

"Like shed say no to u Shane…" the front door slammed shut at that moment.

Shane stopped moving; Eve even thought he stopped breathing. "Relax I think it just Michael" Eve said checking the clock "yep it is" as Michael the hottest blond vampire walks in, going straight to Eve and kissing her that went on for a while until he noticed Shane was there

"God Shane u look paler than me (the vampire) what's up and before u say nothing there is because u would have made a remark about the kissing."

He didn't say a thing.

Michael looked at Eve for some help she simply shrugged ad said "he's asking her the question to night so you're taking me out to dinner" she said laughing.

Michael went over to Shane a mock punched him in the arm he still didn't move, and that was odd Shane would have normally punched him back.

Eve even let out a gasp "I think he's in shock, he got a fright when u walked in thinking it was Claire and hasn't moved since. How about we get some water and chuck it on him, that might help?"

"Eve, that's not helping.

"I was just saying it might…"just then the front door slammed shut and they all heard someone crying.

That broke Shane out of his trance and they all looked at one and other then quickly rush to see what was wrong.

It didn't take more than 2 seconds for Shane to be there and he was faster than Michael, the vampire. When they were all standing in the hall way they saw a girl curled up in a ball shaking with cuts and bruises. Wearing a shredded white top and muddy jeans. Her arms had burns on them and when she looked up at them she got up and tried to run to the stairs she got up and made about 5 steps with a limp then she past out.

So what do u think?

Should I carry on or not just tell me please thanks?

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