Ok so this is my first fan fiction and personally I think it's good. All human Fax, maybe some Eggy, and maybe some Nazzy :D. So happy!

Max: start the story already

Me: ok someone seems a little cranky

Max: you kept reading me the story last night

Me: excuse me I did not want you to kill me because I made you do something you would not be ok with

Max: oh what would you do ….

Me: you really want know…. Really fine I was going to have you go on a date with Dylan (btw I HATE DYLAN! I WOULD NEVER HAVE THAT HAPPEN IN MY STORY!)

Max: you wouldn't – gives death stare-

Me: well here's the story! Hope you like COMMENT PLEASE!

Max's POV

I look outside my mom's car and see rain falling. I'm Maximum Ride but you can call me Max. I am driving with my mom Valencia and my sister Ella. We have been in this freakin car for 7 hours straight. Oh how badly I just wanted to jump out and stretch. When I am in the middle of my day dream Ella breaks the silence "I cannot wait till we get to Florida" I smirked at her. At least mom and Ella are happy about moving. I on the other hand am not. I would much rather be in New York with snow and snow days and all of my friends there. Well technically I only had a few close friends, but still. "I hope you like the house Ella, Max there is a YMCA down the street so you don't have to go far to find a gym." That's right Ella is the girly-girl liking make up, fashion, malls, and of course boys. I on the other had am the exact opposite. I play sports and couldn't care less. "Ok" a little bit of happiness in my voice. I play softball, kick boxing, karate, swimming, play guitar and last but not least sing. The YMCA is like my home away from home. "Wow it's raining really hard" I say trying to start a conversation. Ella answers right away (of course) "IKR I hope it is not like this all day I want to go to the beach" she said with a sad look on her face. Wow we haven't even seen our new house and she wants to go to the beach. "I don't think there will be any beach today sweet heart" moms says in a motherly voice "After we unpack the neighbors invited us over for dinner so we have to DRESS UP" note the emphasis on the dress up I knew that was meant for me. We both replied with a chirpy "Ok" (I tried to sound like ella) she gave me a death stare. Then Finally! We pulled into a drive way leading up to a tan house I guess this is our new…..home?

Fang's POV

"NICHOLAS JAMES WALKER!" I hear my mom yell at me to get up which means that she has already tried to a thousand times. I glance at my alarm clock it reads 11:39. "But it's so early" I say in a slight whine. No answer. So I slide back under my blanket and try to get some more sleep, when a cold streak went through my body. Going with my gut I jump out of bed….. bad idea. I get drenched with ice cold water by my little sister Angel and my little brother Gazzy. So what do I do? You guessed it. I picked them up both squealing with laughter. I run down stairs to my back porch and through them both in the pool. When they both pop back up I say "That's what you get for waking me up with COLD WATER!" a slight grin appearing on my face as they climb out. My mom is right behind us laughing and handing us all towels. "Did you forget that I invited the new neighbors over for dinner today?" she asked in a slightly stern voice. I playfully slap my forehead "OH MY GOD I FORGOT!" She gave me a look that said wow just…. wow. "She has a daughter your age you guys can be friends?" She gave me an insisting smile "Sure but she is probably another stuck up rich girl like….. Lyssa." I got quiet at the last part Lyssa is my ex-girlfriend. We use to be friends and then we started dating. It was fine until she started handing out with the 'popular' people and she kinda …. well….. changed . To make a long story short she cheated on me with a guy named Dylan. We broke up and never talked to each other again. "Her mom is very nice I don't think she will be like lyssa sweet heart" she said so motherly. Nudging the feeling off I walk inside to get ready.

Wellllllll what do you think I really hope you liked it I have a whole lot more so this is going to be a good story XD so happy

So give me ideas that I could use and comment ell me if you like it oh and also FAX COMIN IN THE NEAR FUTURE! XD

Welllllll BYE THANKS FOR READING!